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Revenge On Eleanor Calder (Coming back this Winter)

Chapter 41

After The Death Of Eleanor Calder (Present Time)

Louis' P.O.V

I walk in with the band to the New York Federal Police Station with sweaty hands. I'm still weary of what I heard Detective Luna told me on the phone...that my long time girlfriend is no with us. I sit in the waiting chairs hearing a busy bunch of officers, detective and investigators. Some rambling through a stack of papers, telephones ringing, clicks of high heels, people talking and the news on the television that faced me and the guys.

We flew in yesterday from tour and is having it on hold.

"Stay calm" Zayn whispers patting me on the back.

I nod solmney. Stay calm? Stay calm! How can I fucking stay calm when my girlfriend is dead?! I look around at the band. We're all silent and looking down. I look to see Harry sobbing with his head in his hands across from me.

I can't believe she's gone. Tears start to rolls down my cheeks as I think of all the times I've spent with Eleanor these past few months.

Just then a tall middle aged girl with dirty blonde middle length haired girl walks in. She looks nice and decent wearing a grey blazer, white top and skinny jeans...she looks about our age. She looks at her phone for a minute sliding it back and forth.

She finally looks up, "Hi, Louis Tomlinson follow me to detective Luna's office." she says

I half smile and get up whipping my tears, I look back at the band and motion for them to stay. It's better I go alone...I want to be alone for all I care.

Harry gets up and faces me, "Let me come."

"No...stay lad. I'll be fine" I whisper. He sits back and down and I look at the girl and follow her down the hallway.

We walk in a elevator and I stand beside her staring at the floor. She looks up at the ceiling with no emotion chewing her gum a little.

I guess to be nice I'll ask for her name.."What's you name" I say having my voice come out a little dry. I cough a little.

She looks at me, "Chloe." she says flashing a beautiful wide smile at me. Her smile fades as we rise up.

"Chloe what..." I say. Normally people would say their anyways so I don't really sound like a creeper.

"That doesn't matter." she states and walks out of the elevator with me following her.

Sassy much. We walk down a hallway full of black and white pictures of sorrowful looking people. Mostly women that have a sad quote beneath them. I sigh and follow Chloe...I feel like we'll never reach Detective Luna's office. Never.

But Chloe comes to a stop and walks into a office where a curly haired woman sat ranting through papers frantically on her desk. Chloe skips and sits on the couch beside a book shelf resuming to look at her phone and blowing a bubble.

I stand here wondering if I should say something...I look around at the very nice office...one of those offices in the movies it looks like. 'Detective Luna' I read the name board that sat on the woman's desk.

She finally looks up and smiles holding her hand up, "Louis. Nice to finally meet you, I'm Detective Luna. The detective for the unfortunate lose of Eleanor." she greets me

I shake her hand, "Nice to um, meet you too Miss." I say

She seems alright...a little strict but still alright. I'm glad that she didn't say 'I'm the detective for the murder case of Eleanor'...boy would I have cried.

She rants through the papers again and looks at her watch on her wrist, "Oh my God, I've got to go." she says looking at me

I just fucking go here and she has to go?!

"I can take care of it." I hear a soft voice call from the other side of the room. I look over at Chloe who walks over to the desk and shares a smile at me.

I smile back, "Are you sure? Chlo this is a very serious matter. It's a homocide case I can't just have take my ca-"

Chloe cuts her off, "I watch you mom. I can take care of it" she reasons

"Fine.I'll be back by eight" she says grabbing her suitcase she stops beside me.

"I'm very sorry for your lose Louis. I will be seeing you again." Her voice rises as she says the second sentence

"Thank you.." I say softly

"And by the way's mom. You're gonna have to get me extensions as a pay....I'm totally having a bad hair day."

"Whatever." Detective Luna walks outside

I don't care who takes the case. All that matters is that we find out who killed my girlfriend and for some odd reason. I feel like this murderer is a fan.

Comments

@Sameria
Yea

Bipolar Bipolar
3/21/15

@Bipolar
Really!? Aw ilsym :) Thank you!

Yeezy Yeezy
3/21/15

OK ok look

I personally think that instead of publishing that piece of shit 'after' they should publish this (maybe with different characters)

Bipolar Bipolar
3/21/15

Next chapter more drama? Wow. This chapter was drama filled. I can't imagine what's next.

LTStyles92 LTStyles92
7/30/14

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Mrs_Tommo53 Mrs_Tommo53
7/25/14