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Revenge On Eleanor Calder (Coming back this Winter)

Chapter 30

Eleanor's P.O.V

I stared at the velvet coat for a minute before getting up and walking over to the closet. I looked around before opening the doors of the closet wider, there it was a red coat similar to Nelly's and Hannah's but they didn't wear their's today. I shoved my hands in the pockets of the clothing hoping a wallet,ID, anything that might help me find out who red coat was. I finally felt something and pulled it out, yes. I pulled out my hand looking blankly at the empty pack of blueberry gum. Shit. Really? I rested looking out the window at Louis and Sophia laughing and chatting with Hannah still sitting beside him smiling and twirling her hair. Bitch. Suddenly I lost my balance causing the red coat to fall to the ground. I quickly bent down to pick up the piece of clothing until my eye caught something. I got up holding the red coat and hanged it back up with an iron hanger, my eyes widened.
"Shit" I cursed under my breath.
What was happening? I quickly grabbed them and threw them all on the floor looking from one to another. I got on my knees looking for which one to start with first. Was this red coat's way of messing with my mind? If so it's totally working. I stared at the red coats and counted, three, four, five, six. Six red coats... for who? For what? I put my hands into the pockets searching for items that may be in them but nothing, just nothing. I sighed and hanged the no good red coats. Maybe I should just ask what they're for, I mean it is on their tour bus they should have a use for such ugly, scaring pieces of clothing. I slipped the empty pack of gum in my pocket, just in case I'd be a clue for later and walked out of the bus shutting the door behind me.
"Hey El, come over here" Harry called out. I fast walked to where the group sat, right by the lake around a huge bonfire between Niall and him.
"Where were you?"
"Oh, I just needed some air. Can I have a stick?" I asked
Harry handed me a stick and the bag of marshmallows, I saw Louis glance at me but every time I'd look at him he'd turn his head. I sighed but sadly realized that my marshmallow had burnt out and melted. I frowned at the marshmallow as it fell off my stick and into the flames below it.
"Hey so how's your love life going?" I asked him. I needed to start a conversation with him before asking about the red coats or it'd seem...weird.
"Good, haven't had the time to mingle but Hannah looks like a nice one"
"Oh she is, but I reckon you stay away from her" I winked playfully. He smirked causing his dimple to pop out. I grabbed another marshmallow putting it on my stick until I felt a shadow on me blocking the sun.
"Hey El, have you met Sophia?" Liam asked eating a s'more, he had chocolate on his top lip which made me giggle
"Yeah she seems like a nice girl" I said smiling
"Thanks, well have you seen her?" he asked looking worried
"No...I haven't"
"I last saw her going into the cabin now she's...gone"
"Maybe she went to the bathroom" Harry butted in
"Yeah...okay" Liam sighed sitting down, I faced Liam. Maybe he's be easier to ask.
"Hey Li, um I noticed some red coats in your tour bus.."
"Yeah"
"I was wonder what that was all about."
"Oh, for 'Stole My Heart' Harry came up with the idea to dress up at spies looking for love" he said chuckling
"Oh wow" I said fake laughing, spies...not funny at all in my situation.
"Yeah. I'm gonna go look for Sophia okay"
"Okay. But Liam wait..."
"Yeah?"
"Why are there six coats?"
"Oh we got Uncle Simon into it" he said smiling getting up
"Oh aha" I said once again fake laughing
"Yeah"
"Alright you go find your girl"
"I will" he waved back heading towards the woods.
I sighed turning around to see that Harry had disappeared also, where were Sophia and Harry?
"Hey boob stop it!" Harry warned Louis who was smearing chocolate all over his face
"Eat it nipple!" Louis said laughing shoving more chocolate in Harry's face, I laughed and turned my attention to Perrie who was walking in with Sophia.
"Liam's looking for you" I said to her
"Yeah I know, we just saw him" she said carelessly
"Guy,we're leaving so goodnight" Perrie announced I waved and the rest of the crew said bye's and goodnight's. Zayn got up to kiss Perrie and I watched Hannah roll her eyes disgusted. Two of the girls walked off into their black van as the driver held the door open.
"Um, ew" Hannah said as Zayn leaned in to kiss her, "whip those lips" she warned and he did. Zayn whipped his lips and planted them right onto Hannah's. She moaned loudly while her picked her up carrying her into the cabin. Gross much. I walked over to Niall and Nelly since I'm alone.
"Hey Niall, Nel"
"Hey" Niall said
"Hey what's up" Nelly said scooting over for me to sit. I watched Niall teach Nelly some guitar after a while I yawned and Harry came to sit beside me.
"Hey wanna play a game" he asked
"What game..."
"The Harry's Style Streaking Game" he smirked and I laughed.
"Sure..only because I'm bored and up for anything."
"Alright sounds good, everyone we're going to play my game!" He announced, proudly too.
Before I knew it everyone started to undress, I looked over and saw Louis smiling only in his boxers, Zayn and Hannah came outside groaning of annoyance but still half naked. Nelly and Niall even Liam was half naked. All girls in their bra's and underwear and guys in briefs and boxers except for Harry who wore a spido thing which I couldn't stop looking at. Everyone stared at me. I shrugged getting up and slowly taking off my clothes, all eye were on me even Louis' but his expression was plain as ever. Harry licked his lips and I just rolled my eyes, finally my last piece of clothing came off which was my black shorts.
"...Okay..." I said looking back at everyone.
Harry leaded us to the shore of the shallow lake where I stood beside him.
"Nose goes.." I quickly touched my nose and noticed that Zayn was the last.
"Zaaaayn" Harry said pointing at him, Zayn blushed and let go of Hannah's hand while the four guys held onto Zayn carrying above the water until it was deep enough and let go him Zayn dunking him into the water. I gasped, what did I get myself into...
"Come on baby" Hannah cheered as the five guys ran out of the water. Zayn rose up flipping his hair jogging back.
"Let's go" Zayn said lifting up Hannah on his shoulders marching back into the lake.
"Zayn let me go! Zayn let me go now!" she warned, before she could say anything else Zayn dunked her into the water. She got up and screamed soaking wet. Nelly and I laughed hard, drama queen much. I them stopped laughing when I felt hands on my waist, I looked down to see Harry carrying me.
"Seriously!?" I said, Harry had thrown me, head first into the warm lake water making my eyes go blurry with a view of his non hairy legs. I managed to get up and eyed Harry before splashing his in the face. Louis was watching us from his view over by Niall who he was about to plant into the lake's waters'.

Louis' P.O.V

I watched as Eleanor was thrown into the water, she rose up and began splashing Harry in the face. That should be me...

Red Coat's P.O.V

I watched as Eleanor splashed, the water was a good temperature I guess. She giggled, I love her laugh it filled my ears but at the corner of my eye I saw Louis looking at her too. Should I plan to kiss his ass too? Nah...maybe he'll die of a broken heart...Hopefully.

Six Minutes Later

Reader's P.O.V

Eleanor was drying off when Louis walked up to her.
"Eleanor. Can we talk" he said looking at her up and down, simply checking her out.
"I thought you said that I shouldn't talk to you and that I should be a certain way" she snapped back still kind off sad about the argument from before.
"I know. But I'm sorry I was a total ass, I love you and I want us to be happy it's just I though you didn't trust me then" he said getting teary eyed, his blue eyes were full of sorrowful tears.
"Louis, I love you too" Eleanor said dropping her towel to wrap her arms around her amazing boyfriend.
"Don't ever spend so much time like you did with Harry..please" he begged
She nodded and kissed him hard making him go backwards a bit. "Let me take away the pain" he whispered into her ear making his warm breath wander upon her skin. Louis rubbed Eleanor's back and rocked side to side still hugging, he kissed her and lifted El up causing her to lock her ankles and hold onto his neck.

Red Coat's P.O.V

I watched as the two lovers cuddle and smiling. Disgusting.
"Oh Louis, I love you too" I mimicked quietly so no one would hear me. I looked down at the six inch kitchen knife I held in my hand and back at the couple caressing the weapon's blade smoothly and slowly. Patience man. Patience.

-Imagine-

Red Coat's P.O.V

"No...please don't kill me..." Eleanor cried with her hands up for defense
"Goodbye Eleanor Calder" I said getting on top of the bitch. I grabbed my knife and slit her wrist causing blood to bleed out onto the cold cemented floors. She cried louder.
"Louis! Just let me say goodbye to Louis.." she said exhausted.
I didn't say anything but smirk until my dimples came out. I grabbed my rope and tied it around my victim's neck, I struggled a bit because she fought back but managed to get it in place. I held on tightly holding onto the thick rope watching Eleanor turn red, veins on her forehead stared to pop out and blood started to come out from her mouth. I smiled at her reaction, her chocking of the blood was like an encouragement you know. So I held tighter watching her struggle with her hands scratching at my neck. This bitch doesn't know when to stop. Finally Eleanor got weak and he hands flew from my neck dropping down to the ground, I saw the light in Eleanor Calder's brown shinny eyes disappear. I smiled and took my knife and slit her throat, and repeatedly stabbed at her face leaving deep wounds and cuts from her face to her neck, stomach, arms, legs and down to her feet. For being a slut I stabbed her pussy to make sure even in hell she wouldn't use that thing. I got up covered in Eleanor's blood from head to toe and dropped the knife with the blade hitting into her stomach, upside down stuck deeply into it. I smiled and whipped her blood from my teeth which somehow splattered on when I smiled.
"Bye bye Eli" I whispered before cutting off the lights leaving Eleanor Calder alone, and dead.

-Imagine Finishes-


Notes

How do you like it? Best Song Ever is song of the Summer. Yay Directioners!



Comments

@Sameria
Yea

Bipolar Bipolar
3/21/15

@Bipolar
Really!? Aw ilsym :) Thank you!

Yeezy Yeezy
3/21/15

OK ok look

I personally think that instead of publishing that piece of shit 'after' they should publish this (maybe with different characters)

Bipolar Bipolar
3/21/15

Next chapter more drama? Wow. This chapter was drama filled. I can't imagine what's next.

LTStyles92 LTStyles92
7/30/14

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Mrs_Tommo53 Mrs_Tommo53
7/25/14