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Revenge On Eleanor Calder (Coming back this Winter)

Chapter 17

Two Hours Later

Eleanor's P.O.V

After the shower Louis and I had dinner and watched 'Nemo' in the living room it was a perfect evening and now I was heading to the bar at TGI Friday to have drinks with the girls. I walked down the driveway and got into the car sitting in the passengers' seat. I looked at Louis who was smiling.

He turned to me "What?"

I blushed and looked down "Nothing, I just like to see you smile." I said smiling back at him, he leaned to me and we passionately kissed, our lips in sync lightly biting on each others lips, Louis moaned slightly with pleasure. He pulled back and grinned putting his key into the ignition and reversing out of the driveway. I looked out the window, I can actually see a future with Louis, popping out two or three kids and living happily together as a family. I smiled a little bit. Louis turned the steering wheel and headed down the street where there was a line of cars waiting at a red light.

"Bloody hell." I heard Louis whisper to himself, I turned my head and looked at him.

"What's wrong?" I asked him.

"The car won't stop." he said repeatedly stepping on the brakes, my heart thumped in my chest as we got closer and closer with speed towards the cars.

God must have sent us and angel because the light turned green and the cars started to go. Louis stepped lightly on the gas making us go a little farther for the green light. But soon the light turned red.

"Louis!" I screamed, the car wouldn't stopped it zoomed back the line of cars next to us. I held onto Louis' hand and closed my eyes.

Within seconds our black Audi slammed into the cars in front of us causing me to jolt back and forth. The airbags opened up pushing me hard into my seat. I still held onto Louis' hand hoping he was alive. My eyes closed terrified but our car still kept going. I heard cars honking and people screaming.

Tears filled my eyes and all I could do was hold on tighter to Louis' hand. He squeezed back, relieved that he was alright but I could tell our car was coming to a stop. We swerved a bit feeling the force of the cars we hit. Once we came to a stop Louis let go of my hand and I heard a door close.

"What the hell man!" I heard an angry man yell. I can tell that it was one of the many people we hit. I can't see anything because of the air bag but soon after my door opened and I felt Louis' hand. I took it and got out, I looked and Louis and hugged him tightly.

"I thought I lost you." I cried.

"It's alright, I'm here...I got you. I love you." he said calmly while rubbing my back. I closed my eyes and rest my head on his shoulder. I turned around to see four cars in front of our now damaged Audi and sighed.


"I'm sorry everyone, it wasn't our fault it seems that our car needed new brakes." Louis said to the four car owners who stood looking at their damaged car. Thankfully no one was hurt. But I noticed Louis had a small cut on his head which blood dripped down his forehead. I touched the small wound.

"I'm alright." he said holding me and kissing my forehead.

I held onto him looking at the car waiting for the police to arrive. The car was fine when we were at the beach...but now the brakes aren't working? This doesn't add up. I looked around at the witnesses and kids with their moms, and old people pointing and watching us. I then skipped around and saw a flash of red coat. I know it's her. She did this. But why....a chill ran down my spine. She stared at me but when Louis turned to see what I was looking at and heard police sirens. She ran. Ran out of my sight.

"You alright love?" Louis said.

"Yeah I'm fine." I said back to him. My nose was a little brushed from the pressure of the air bag but I didn't want to worry Louis. I looked back at where Red Coat once stood.

-Flashback-
You'll regret it." he said chuckling. What did he mean, I'll regret it? Was he joking... I guess he was from the chuckling part but you never know when to take a threat serious.

"Thanks for the ride." I said starting a new subject.

"Yeah, no problem" he said steering the wheel into my apartment complex parking lot.
-Flashback Ends-

-Flashback-


Evan took Becka's hand and walked towards the door.

"Eleanor you'll regret this." he yelled back ",and that's a fucking promise." chills ran down my back

.I looked blankly at Zayn.
-Flashback Ends-

-Flashback-

"Morning Niall..." I trailed off quietly.

"Hi..." he said back.

I turned to him and he turned away from me "Look Niall, I don't want things between us to become awkward. I'm Louis and I'm happy."

"Whatever." with that Niall grabbed his bowl of cereal and headed towards the living room. I saw Liam walking past then.

-Flashback Ends-

-Flashback-

"Hey gorgeous." Harry walked in and grabbed a banana.

"Hey." he came up from behind me and had his hand on my waist.

"Stop." I said quietly, unlike Zayn,Harry actually let go of me.

"Sorry."

"It's okay."

"So did you and Louis get it last night?" he teased rocking his hips back and forth
....Here we go, I have another suspect of being red coat. I looked back at him.

-Flashback Ends-

-Flashback-
"You whore! Don't steal other people's man because your's won't satisfy you" she threw the clothes at me. My eyes never left her...The Lord is testing me.

"Louis and I are happy together. You're the slut. Now leave" I pointed to the door.

"Don't fucking talk to my girlfriend like that!" Evan yelled at me pushing me against the wall.
-Flashback Ends-

For once in my life I'm so very confused. Still looking were Red Coat stood I held onto my number protector, Louis Tomlinson.


Red Coat's P.O.V

I watched in glory as Louis and Eleanor's car slammed into the cars before them.

I couldn't help but smirk my evil ways once again worked. Four cars before them swerved around and smashed together. I waited until Eleanor got out of the car. Louis got out first...I waited. Fuck, did I killed the bitch? Already? I was relieved to see her get out of the car. She rushed into a hug with Louis. "Awww" I said rolling my eyes. I watched until she looked at me, I starred back at her. Yeah bitch, you deserved it.

Still looking at her Louis turned around. Shit, he's gonna see me. I ran out of sight and down the street in my heels, my feet hurt from all the walking. At least I was wearing my mask and my hoodie covered over me. Knowing no evidence was left on the car I smiled and looked back at the accident. I rushed down the street smiling at people who passed me.

Comments

@Sameria
Yea

Bipolar Bipolar
3/21/15

@Bipolar
Really!? Aw ilsym :) Thank you!

Yeezy Yeezy
3/21/15

OK ok look

I personally think that instead of publishing that piece of shit 'after' they should publish this (maybe with different characters)

Bipolar Bipolar
3/21/15

Next chapter more drama? Wow. This chapter was drama filled. I can't imagine what's next.

LTStyles92 LTStyles92
7/30/14

Update


Mrs_Tommo53 Mrs_Tommo53
7/25/14