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Revenge On Eleanor Calder (Coming back this Winter)

It All Started. . .

Louis' P.O.V

"I was just kidding Harry," I said handing Harry his banana back. It was a normal day on tour with the boys and we were just watching some TV until my phone rang.

"Hello" I answered.

"Hello is this Louis Tomlinson?" the person speaking on the other end said

"Yes it is, how may I help you. . ."

"Well this is detective Luna." I walked over to the couch to sit down.... Detective? Why would a detective be calling me?

"Okay. . ." I answered her back

"Today Miss Eleanor Calder was found murdered in an apartment in New York." The lady speaks in a low tone. I folded my arms, my throat got dry, I had no idea... was this a dream?

"Come again" I stutter blinking rapidly as I look around my surroundings.

"Louis, your girlfriend has been murdered." I dropped the phone and tears fell down my cheeks.

I didn't know what to do but sit there letting my emotions get the best of me. This must be a joke. . . I knew she's been busy hoping she would be alright ,but dead? Oh my God.

"Lou, you alright?" Zayn walked over and asked.

I turned to him, "Do I look alright...." I stated back with my cheeks burning red.

Here I am on tour and they're telling me that my girlfriend had died. My number one supporter besides my mum.

-Flashback-

Louis' P.O.V

"Alright I love you Louis!" Eleanor says cheerfully as she smiles into the camera.

I squint at the screen taking in her beauty and smile wider, "I love you too Eleanor " I say a little lower than her nice soothing voice.

"Bye," She giggles looking at her screen with her brown eyes.

"Bye," I smirk watching as my long term girlfriend exits our Skype chat.

Sighing I close my laptop and sit up in bed looking at Niall who seems to be staring.

"What?" I ask giving him a confused look.

"Nothing. . . just you two seem so close and inseparable and shit. Can't wait for the wedding." Niall jokes throwing a silk blue pillow at my face before getting up and walking over to the small kitchen in our hotel.

"Yeah," I draw out my response looking at my fuzzy socks.

I guess I will marry Eleanor, she's everything I want yet need. I love her so much that is almost hurts to say those three words. Let alone leave her be miles away whilst on tour. She may be my bride I guess. . .someday.

-Flashback Ends-



Louis' P.O.V

I sat there motionless. Who would do such a horrible ,and cruel thing? Why would Eleanor deserve something so heartless and leave this earth being murdered so unexpectedly? I may not have the answers myself ,but I am sure in hell that this person. Who killed Eleanor. Will pay.


Notes

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Comments

@Sameria
Yea

Bipolar Bipolar
3/21/15

@Bipolar
Really!? Aw ilsym :) Thank you!

Yeezy Yeezy
3/21/15

OK ok look

I personally think that instead of publishing that piece of shit 'after' they should publish this (maybe with different characters)

Bipolar Bipolar
3/21/15

Next chapter more drama? Wow. This chapter was drama filled. I can't imagine what's next.

LTStyles92 LTStyles92
7/30/14

Update


Mrs_Tommo53 Mrs_Tommo53
7/25/14