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Nicole's p.o.v
so on my way to Starbucks I bumped into a pair of blue eyes and blonde hair.so I should have looked where I was going,he said. No its my fault I should have been looking where I was going I said. By the way my name is Nicole I said.
Niall's p.o.v
my name is niall i said so where are you going to today I said,I'm going to the Victoria secrecy fashion show practice Nicole said.cool I am going to I am performing in my band one direction I said.that's cool I'm better get going or my manger Wendy will kill me if I'm late she said well I'm about to go to but can I have your number I said sure here you go she said thanks.
Nicole's p.o.v
So i gave him my number i thought to myself.hey um niall do you need a ride to the practice or did you bring your own car i said,please be a no i thought to my self.no i didnt bring my car but i would love a ride niall said.cool follow me to my car you will love it !! Omg, niall said you have a bugatti!!! yeah I do I told you ,you will love it so let's go I said I started up my car and went full blast speed.
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Nialls p.o.v
So when he hopped out the car we made it to the practice and i ran to the boys in the practice room to sing and I told them all about my day!!

Notes

Hey guys I can't believe this is my first fan fic I am excited here is what here car looks like

Comments

So good so far :)
sallyxx sallyxx
8/22/13
@Niall_atethe_username
Thanks I'm new to this so thank u
Hey some author to author advice not to sound rude or mean because your story is great but you should put a good amount of space between what each person is saying so it looks more like this

"my name is Niall" i said "so where are you going?" I said.

"im going to the Victoria secret show practice."Nicole said,

also use quotations when their speaking it makes it less confusing and lastly there are more ways to write he said or she said if u want some examples you can check out my story because just saying he said or she said can get a little boring love your story though its really good and i dont mean to be judgey really like the story :)