That night, Mackenzie went shopping with the other girls, so that gives me time to set up. I painted the basement her favorite color. Blue, and set the place up with a cake that says : I'm sorry Mackenzie, Please forgive me. And I got her favorite flowers. I also got her a promise ring. I tried to make everything perfect. But she came home early. "LOU! WHERE ARE YOU?" I heard her scream. She ran all over the house. I turned off the lights a hid waiting for her to come down. "Lou? Are you here?" She asked coming into the basement. She turned on the lights and I came up behind her and hugged her. "Babe, I'm sorry. Forgive me?" I asked. "I'm not sure." She said. I took out the promise ring and got onto my knees.

"I promise I will never do anything like that again." I said holding out the ring. Her eyes started to tear up. "Louis.." She said shocked. "I accept." She said. I took her hand and out the ring on her finger. She then looked around. "You did all this for me?" She asked. "Of course. I was afraid that you would hate me. So I did all this. It cost a lot of money, but I was worth it, to see you happy." I said with a smile. "Louis, Your so romantic." She said then kissed me. "Anything for my babe. How was the shopping trip?" I asked. "Amazing! We planned to meet up tomorrow. All of us, at Nandos." Mackenzie said. "Great! I'll text them." I said

The next day we were all at Nandos. Harry leaned over to me. "Did you romantic gesture work?" He asked. "Like a charm." I said smiling. "Great job lad." He said patting my back. Everything went well that day. After we went to the carnival near by and I got all the girls a stuffed toy. So they were all holding 5, Cause Zayn, Liam, Harry and Niall decided to do the same thing. It was a really hot day. But I had fun. And so did the others.

Notes

Sorry, I was rushing and I have to go to sleep. So I got straight to the point. Also, pics to the characters.

now let's all be honest. do you think I sould make another Marcel fanfict?