Karley-

I let out a squeal, everyone looks at me including my crush, my cheeks flush. The teacher tells to me to be quite, I can't help but smile. Thank goodness the bell rang, I pretty much ran out almost dropping everything until I get to my locker, I quickly grabbed my next subject (Math) and ran to my next class so I could tell Emily everything! "I won them em I won them!" I screamed! "Won wha..? Oh the 1D tickets! (giggles) Blonde moment!" "Duh!" "I can't wait to meet Liam!" "I cant wait to meet Niall". She said with Dreamy eyes. "when and where are the tickets to?!" "Minnesota; Minneapolis Only 3hr Drive baby! and its this Friday night at 7!" "Hashtag score!" Emily Squealed!" My phone buzzed, it was from Caitlin "I am going to the 1D concert!" "I replied "Me 2!" "Well we can stay at my friend Caitlin's!" The bell rang so they had to take their seats. I took out my notebook and started writing the notes for tomorrows quiz I was dreading. A text appeared on my screen, its from Emily "Sounds good!" I texted back quickly "ikr!".

Notes

I changed it to first person.. (:
Open to any feedback!(: