Hey guys ill update in the next few days I promise!!! Please don't forget to vote if you like my story! And comment because I love reading what you have to say. If you have an idea please feel free to Message me what you think should happen next. I have had a few people message me and I really like some ideas! Please don't be mad if your idea doesn't come up right away because other people have, and might message me and I will try to Incorporate everyone's ideas somewhere along the line. Thank you all so much for reading. And please don't forget that I love reading you comments and messages and seeing more people voting and more people subscribing! It lets me know I'm doing an okay job! And if you like this story I really wouldn't mind knowing why! If you think some things could change message me and tell me why, and I'll try to get back to you in a couple days! I get on 1 every other day sometimes everyday so I really like reading your comments as to how to improve, and also i love it when you all give me encouraging comments! I love every comment that has been left so far and I'm welcome to critiquing but please remember that i do work pretty hard on this and please try to be as nice as possible! Thank you too all that read, write, subscribe, and vote! Ill update soon!!!:)