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Our Heroes!

Lock The Door

The boys had a break on the weekend. We decided to make them a little surprise party when they arrive.
Everything was ready, when suddenly I received a message from a strange number: "Before coming to pick us up, please go to Dr. William James, 2413 florist. Xx Niall"
I thought it was strange that Niall had not sent the message on his phone, yet Nay and I still went.
When we got there, a black truck pulled up behind my car.
"LOCK THE DOOR! LOCK THE DOOR!" I panicked.
It was too late... They opened the door and pulled us. They were big muscular man.
We screamed. No one heard.
They pushed us inside the car. Nay and I hugged each other shaking.
We started to cry and scream.
"SHUT UP!" one of the kidnappers shouted.
"MAKE THEM SHUT UP" another kidnapper said.
One of the kidnappers punched Nay first. "NOOOO!" Then BAM!


Notes

Let me know what you think! :)

Comments

@KacieTomlinson05
Thanks, it means a lot!
ines ines
8/7/13
you need to update! its amazing or should I say...amazayn?
@ObsessedReader

Thanks, ill totally be updating :)
ines ines
8/3/13
I like it so far, update sounds like a great story and you are a really good writer! :)