
When We Met
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Mia's P.O.V
macy looks at me surprisingly and says " did you see the way niall looked at me oh my gosh how did this ever happened?" i smiled at her. i looked over at emma. " emma whats wrong?" i say. she looked sad like she wanted to cry. " nothing, i just need some fresh air" she says. she gets up " wait, do you want me to come?" i ask. she starts to cry and says " yes please". i looked at macy signaling for her to stay here. i follow emma. " whats wrong ems" i say " why does niall like her she doesn't even like him she likes liam" she says wiping her tears. i looked inside and see macy sitting there looking around. " well, maybe its because of her red hair or her pretty eyes" i say, " not helping" she says sobbing loudly. " ok im not im sorry you really like niall this much?" i ask her. she nods her head. " well maybe i can... see ... if niall would want to go on a date with you?" i say wondering how i was going to do that. " really you would do that for me?" she says " yeah thats whats friends are for, right" she nods. we go back inside. " macy come on we are going back home" i say gesturing for her to come on. we go back home and we go to my room my mom stops us. " mia hun, can i speak to you" she says. i look at the girls they leave. " yeah mom" i say, " when... you went into my room.. erm ... did you see those envelopes on my dresser?" she asks. " uh, no why?" i lied i didnt want her to know i saw those letters. " oh uhm ok i just didnt want you to see them just forget i ask" she says. i go back upstairs to my room.
*few hours later*
it's almost time for harry to come get us my friends are ready except me i havent found a right color for my lips. " should i wear red or pink " i say to macy she claims she knows everything about style and well she does. " you should wear red to show that you are not afraid of anything" she says emma looks at her i look at emma. i get a text from harry:
To: Mia
From: Harry
im here are you ready?
i put on the red lipstick. " come on he is waiting" i say. we run downstairs hoping my mom wont see our clothes unless we will be going out looking like three grandmas hijacked us for our clothes. we run out and see harry i run to him and hug him. " woah slow down im not the last piece of cake" he says. we laugh. we all get into the car and drive to their house. " harry i thought the party was somewhere else like a club or something" i say " does a club let a couple of 19 year olds in?" he says smiling. i see macy run off to niall, emma looks at them together. " whats wrong with your friend?" harry asks me. " she wants niall but macy took him" i say. harry looks at me like he had an idea.
Harry's P.O.V
mia's friend wants niall. i take out my phone and text louis, zayn, and liam
To: Louis, Zayn, Liam
From: Harry
i need help with something... brunette and niall have to get together not him and red head.. are you guys in?
i look at them and they nod. " dont worry mia your friend will get niall " i say smiling. " harry what did you do?" she says playfully hitting me. i go to niall " hey red head want to dance?" i say niall looks at me. " uh sure" she says i grab her hand and pull her and dance with her.
Zayn's P.O.V
i go up to the brunette" hey why dont you dance with niall" i say smiling. i pull her to where niall is " niall, dance with her!" i scream as the music gets louder. i look over and see harry pulling the red head girl to liam. i go over to him " what are you doing?" i say. " mia said she likes liam" he says. he leaves and dance with mia, i just needed to dance with someone so i grab louis and say " VAS HAPPENIN!" so loud in his ear he falls. he gets back up and says " what was that for?" " it's a party why else would i do it?" i say. i find a random girl and dance with her.
* midnight *
Mia's P.O.V
" harry can you drop us off home?" i ask. " sure how are we going to get macy in the car she wont leave" he says. " i know how" i say. we got macy in the car a few hours later. we go home. " macy, you have to be quiet when you go in ok my mom is asleep" i say she laughs. this might be hard i wave bye to harry. we go inside and tried to tiptoe it didnt work out macy almost fell and then the light came on. " where have you been?" i see my mom sitting on the couch. " ive been so worried about you three and whats wrong with macy?" she says " nothing shes just tired" i say. she walks up to her and sniffs her " were you all drinking?" she says " mom we just had a few drinks" i say. " a few drinks? macy looks like she had more than a few" she says. " mia amari gillies i dont want you hanging out with that boy he is a bad influence and you are grounded for lying and drinking!" she yells. " mom -" she cuts me off " upstairs to your room this conversation is over" i walk away to my room. macy ran to the bathroom and kept throwing up. and few minutes later she past out. i text harry:
To: Harry
From: Mia
im grounded for lying and drinking thanks a lot!
macy looks at me surprisingly and says " did you see the way niall looked at me oh my gosh how did this ever happened?" i smiled at her. i looked over at emma. " emma whats wrong?" i say. she looked sad like she wanted to cry. " nothing, i just need some fresh air" she says. she gets up " wait, do you want me to come?" i ask. she starts to cry and says " yes please". i looked at macy signaling for her to stay here. i follow emma. " whats wrong ems" i say " why does niall like her she doesn't even like him she likes liam" she says wiping her tears. i looked inside and see macy sitting there looking around. " well, maybe its because of her red hair or her pretty eyes" i say, " not helping" she says sobbing loudly. " ok im not im sorry you really like niall this much?" i ask her. she nods her head. " well maybe i can... see ... if niall would want to go on a date with you?" i say wondering how i was going to do that. " really you would do that for me?" she says " yeah thats whats friends are for, right" she nods. we go back inside. " macy come on we are going back home" i say gesturing for her to come on. we go back home and we go to my room my mom stops us. " mia hun, can i speak to you" she says. i look at the girls they leave. " yeah mom" i say, " when... you went into my room.. erm ... did you see those envelopes on my dresser?" she asks. " uh, no why?" i lied i didnt want her to know i saw those letters. " oh uhm ok i just didnt want you to see them just forget i ask" she says. i go back upstairs to my room.
*few hours later*
it's almost time for harry to come get us my friends are ready except me i havent found a right color for my lips. " should i wear red or pink " i say to macy she claims she knows everything about style and well she does. " you should wear red to show that you are not afraid of anything" she says emma looks at her i look at emma. i get a text from harry:
To: Mia
From: Harry
im here are you ready?
i put on the red lipstick. " come on he is waiting" i say. we run downstairs hoping my mom wont see our clothes unless we will be going out looking like three grandmas hijacked us for our clothes. we run out and see harry i run to him and hug him. " woah slow down im not the last piece of cake" he says. we laugh. we all get into the car and drive to their house. " harry i thought the party was somewhere else like a club or something" i say " does a club let a couple of 19 year olds in?" he says smiling. i see macy run off to niall, emma looks at them together. " whats wrong with your friend?" harry asks me. " she wants niall but macy took him" i say. harry looks at me like he had an idea.
Harry's P.O.V
mia's friend wants niall. i take out my phone and text louis, zayn, and liam
To: Louis, Zayn, Liam
From: Harry
i need help with something... brunette and niall have to get together not him and red head.. are you guys in?
i look at them and they nod. " dont worry mia your friend will get niall " i say smiling. " harry what did you do?" she says playfully hitting me. i go to niall " hey red head want to dance?" i say niall looks at me. " uh sure" she says i grab her hand and pull her and dance with her.
Zayn's P.O.V
i go up to the brunette" hey why dont you dance with niall" i say smiling. i pull her to where niall is " niall, dance with her!" i scream as the music gets louder. i look over and see harry pulling the red head girl to liam. i go over to him " what are you doing?" i say. " mia said she likes liam" he says. he leaves and dance with mia, i just needed to dance with someone so i grab louis and say " VAS HAPPENIN!" so loud in his ear he falls. he gets back up and says " what was that for?" " it's a party why else would i do it?" i say. i find a random girl and dance with her.
* midnight *
Mia's P.O.V
" harry can you drop us off home?" i ask. " sure how are we going to get macy in the car she wont leave" he says. " i know how" i say. we got macy in the car a few hours later. we go home. " macy, you have to be quiet when you go in ok my mom is asleep" i say she laughs. this might be hard i wave bye to harry. we go inside and tried to tiptoe it didnt work out macy almost fell and then the light came on. " where have you been?" i see my mom sitting on the couch. " ive been so worried about you three and whats wrong with macy?" she says " nothing shes just tired" i say. she walks up to her and sniffs her " were you all drinking?" she says " mom we just had a few drinks" i say. " a few drinks? macy looks like she had more than a few" she says. " mia amari gillies i dont want you hanging out with that boy he is a bad influence and you are grounded for lying and drinking!" she yells. " mom -" she cuts me off " upstairs to your room this conversation is over" i walk away to my room. macy ran to the bathroom and kept throwing up. and few minutes later she past out. i text harry:
To: Harry
From: Mia
im grounded for lying and drinking thanks a lot!
Ok so love the story but try using less texting talk and more story grammar your a great wrighter and i think you got a verry special talent
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