When We Met
Pretty Lies
Mia's P.O.V
me and my friends get back to my house. we go upstairs to my room. i get a text from harry:
To: Mia
From: Harry
ill pick you up at eight tonight
" guys harry is picking us up at eight OK " i say, they nod their heads. i go downstairs and see my mom " mom im going to a party tonight" i say " ok emma and macy going with you?" she asks. " yeah" i say. i go back upstairs in my room. " so, what happened on you and harry's date?" macy asks. " well, we went out to eat then we went to their place and ... we kissed!" i say. " oh my gosh give us some more details" emma says. " it was awesome but i felt uncomfortable when he rubbed my leg" i say. " why he's Harry Styles!" macy says. " so, i got uncomfortable i don't like when boys rush a relationship" i say i was totally lying to them. " hey how about we have lunch with them?" macy says. " sure ill text harry" i say. i take out my phone and text harry:
To: Harry
From: Mia
do you and the boys wanna have lunch with me and my friends??
To: Mia
From: Harry
sure meet us at nando's
" okay lets go to nando's" i say. they scream. we go downtstairs " mom we are going to nando's" i say, " okay have fun girls but not too much" she says smiling. we go to nando's and wait for the boys. when they come the girls scream silently. " hi" harry says. the boys smile and wave. they sit down harry sits next to me and smiles. " who are they?" louis asks.
Niall's P.O.V
we meet up with mia and her friends. " these are my friends emma and macy red head macy brunette emma" she says. i look at macy. " hi red head" i say smiling. she smiles, i turn to emma and she smiles so i smile back at her. " so, mia you coming to the party tonight" liam ask. " yeah can my friends come to?" she says. " sure, especially red head" i say before anyone of the boys can. macy looks at me, i wink at her. " uhm, guys look who's coming." zayn says. we look and see harry's ex-girlfriend taylor swift. she comes to the table," hey boys and harry and girls" she says. " what do you want taylor?" harry asks her," no reason to be angry harry." she says. " what is it?" zayn says," nothing just wanted to say hi" she says. we all look at each other then at her we all say " hi ".she frowns and leaves. " well we gotta go ill see you later" harry says. " see ya red head" i say to macy. we leave and go to where simon is " i wonder what simon wants us to do now" i say. " probably to work on our new movie" liam says.
me and my friends get back to my house. we go upstairs to my room. i get a text from harry:
To: Mia
From: Harry
ill pick you up at eight tonight
" guys harry is picking us up at eight OK " i say, they nod their heads. i go downstairs and see my mom " mom im going to a party tonight" i say " ok emma and macy going with you?" she asks. " yeah" i say. i go back upstairs in my room. " so, what happened on you and harry's date?" macy asks. " well, we went out to eat then we went to their place and ... we kissed!" i say. " oh my gosh give us some more details" emma says. " it was awesome but i felt uncomfortable when he rubbed my leg" i say. " why he's Harry Styles!" macy says. " so, i got uncomfortable i don't like when boys rush a relationship" i say i was totally lying to them. " hey how about we have lunch with them?" macy says. " sure ill text harry" i say. i take out my phone and text harry:
To: Harry
From: Mia
do you and the boys wanna have lunch with me and my friends??
To: Mia
From: Harry
sure meet us at nando's
" okay lets go to nando's" i say. they scream. we go downtstairs " mom we are going to nando's" i say, " okay have fun girls but not too much" she says smiling. we go to nando's and wait for the boys. when they come the girls scream silently. " hi" harry says. the boys smile and wave. they sit down harry sits next to me and smiles. " who are they?" louis asks.
Niall's P.O.V
we meet up with mia and her friends. " these are my friends emma and macy red head macy brunette emma" she says. i look at macy. " hi red head" i say smiling. she smiles, i turn to emma and she smiles so i smile back at her. " so, mia you coming to the party tonight" liam ask. " yeah can my friends come to?" she says. " sure, especially red head" i say before anyone of the boys can. macy looks at me, i wink at her. " uhm, guys look who's coming." zayn says. we look and see harry's ex-girlfriend taylor swift. she comes to the table," hey boys and harry and girls" she says. " what do you want taylor?" harry asks her," no reason to be angry harry." she says. " what is it?" zayn says," nothing just wanted to say hi" she says. we all look at each other then at her we all say " hi ".she frowns and leaves. " well we gotta go ill see you later" harry says. " see ya red head" i say to macy. we leave and go to where simon is " i wonder what simon wants us to do now" i say. " probably to work on our new movie" liam says.
Ok so love the story but try using less texting talk and more story grammar your a great wrighter and i think you got a verry special talent
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