When We Met
Up All Night
Mia's P.O.V
I went home and go to my room. my mom walks in." hey hun, what happened your not supposed to be home until 10" she says." uhm nothing i just wanted to come back home" i lied." well okay, get washed up dinner is almost ready" she says. i go and get into the shower when i finish i dry off and put on some pajamas. i go downstairs and sit at the table." we are having spaghetti and meatballs, and did you wet your hair" my mom asks." no why everytime i take a shower you ask did i get my hair wet?" i ask. " i don't want that hair color in my food" she says." my hair color doesn't come out" i say. my phone starts to vibrate, i pick it up and look at it. it's a text from harry:
To: Mia
From: Harry
can i take you to a party tomorrow night.
i don't text him back." who was that?" she asks. " no one " i say. " mia answer the text it's probably that green eyed boy what's his name again?" she says," harry and i need to get some fresh air i'll be back" i say. i get up from the table and go outside. i text harry back:
To: Harry
From: Mia
sure what time??
i gotta get up early tomorrow morning i have to go to the airport. i go back inside i see my mom cleaning i always help her clean but this time i go upstairs to my room. she comes in. " hey why didnt you help me you always help me clean after dinner" she says " i didnt feel like it" i say." ok, hun whats going on?" she says." nothing i just want to go to sleep night" i say. she leaves out. i lay down and go to sleep.
(Next Day)
my mom comes in my room and wakes me up. i get up and put on some clothes." go get your friends" she says." can i take your car" i ask. " sure keys are in my room" she syays i go into her room i look on her dresser and see the keys then i see some envelopes. i pick them up and look at them:
dear allie,
when can i see you
-james
i put the envelopes down i grab the keys and leave. i get into the car and drive to the airport. i get stuck in traffic on the way there." ughhh" i say. i text macy:
To: Macy
From:Mia
i might be a little late picking you up... traffic!
i put my phone down. macy texts back when i get out of traffic. i didnt look at it i didnt want to get into a car accident. i get to the airport and see macy and emma. i get out and hugged them. " guess what? harry asked me to come to a party tonight you wanna come with me?" i say. " of course we do!" they both say. we are all crazy over them.
I went home and go to my room. my mom walks in." hey hun, what happened your not supposed to be home until 10" she says." uhm nothing i just wanted to come back home" i lied." well okay, get washed up dinner is almost ready" she says. i go and get into the shower when i finish i dry off and put on some pajamas. i go downstairs and sit at the table." we are having spaghetti and meatballs, and did you wet your hair" my mom asks." no why everytime i take a shower you ask did i get my hair wet?" i ask. " i don't want that hair color in my food" she says." my hair color doesn't come out" i say. my phone starts to vibrate, i pick it up and look at it. it's a text from harry:
To: Mia
From: Harry
can i take you to a party tomorrow night.
i don't text him back." who was that?" she asks. " no one " i say. " mia answer the text it's probably that green eyed boy what's his name again?" she says," harry and i need to get some fresh air i'll be back" i say. i get up from the table and go outside. i text harry back:
To: Harry
From: Mia
sure what time??
i gotta get up early tomorrow morning i have to go to the airport. i go back inside i see my mom cleaning i always help her clean but this time i go upstairs to my room. she comes in. " hey why didnt you help me you always help me clean after dinner" she says " i didnt feel like it" i say." ok, hun whats going on?" she says." nothing i just want to go to sleep night" i say. she leaves out. i lay down and go to sleep.
(Next Day)
my mom comes in my room and wakes me up. i get up and put on some clothes." go get your friends" she says." can i take your car" i ask. " sure keys are in my room" she syays i go into her room i look on her dresser and see the keys then i see some envelopes. i pick them up and look at them:
dear allie,
when can i see you
-james
i put the envelopes down i grab the keys and leave. i get into the car and drive to the airport. i get stuck in traffic on the way there." ughhh" i say. i text macy:
To: Macy
From:Mia
i might be a little late picking you up... traffic!
i put my phone down. macy texts back when i get out of traffic. i didnt look at it i didnt want to get into a car accident. i get to the airport and see macy and emma. i get out and hugged them. " guess what? harry asked me to come to a party tonight you wanna come with me?" i say. " of course we do!" they both say. we are all crazy over them.
Ok so love the story but try using less texting talk and more story grammar your a great wrighter and i think you got a verry special talent
3/9/14