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Summer tragedy

Meeting them

I wake up and get ready then go downstairs to see my mom making pancakes, my favorite. While I am eating my mom asks me where I wanna go today. I think of all the places I wanna go and come up with the beach. My mom said that would be fine but she wasn't planing on getting wet. After I finished eating I went upstairs and put my bathing suit under my clothes, then waited for my mom to get ready.

At the beach I took of my top and bangs to show my bikini and headed strait for the water, on the way I saw the five guys I saw at the mall. When I got in the water it was really warm and nice. I was loving it, then I felt two hands behind me and freaked. I turned around to see it was one of the boys will all the other boys behind him. They said "I don't think we got a chance to fully introduce ourselves I'm Niall said the one with his hands on me now removing them, and that's Zayn, Harry, Louis, and Liam." I was frozen all I mangers to get out was hi, them after a few seconds I said "umm I'm Rebbeka." Hi they all said at the same time. We splashed each other around a little bit but it was now time for me to go. I tolled the boys then went to turn around but Niall said Rebbeka wait I turned around and he said "I know I just met you but I really like you and I would love if you would be my girlfriend, so Will you be my girlfriend?" I stud their surprised at what he said, but I had my answer.

I said Niall I.........


AUTHORS NOTE
haha cliffhanger, so what do you think Rebekka will say yes or no? Find out in the next chapter.

Comments

Niall's from Ireland, not Italy
@BlackCherriez
No I am on my iphone bc my computer is kinda broken but ya sorry for any errors
Ali horan Ali horan
7/26/13
Good! Are you using a word processor like Microsoft Word to write? There are a few spelling and grammatical errors that can easily be fixed if you were on a word processor. Other than that, good job! Update soon!
BlackCherriez BlackCherriez
7/26/13
@makayla0717
Thanks I will if you have any ideas tell me and I might just put it in the story
Ali horan Ali horan
7/26/13
its good keeping working on it!
makayla0717 makayla0717
7/26/13