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When You Let Your Heart Win

Chapter 53

Louis’ POV

“Can we go somewhere today?”
“No.” I mumbled as I kissed down her body.
“Babe, please?”
“No.” I replied again and bit her hip which made her jump and pull on her restraints. I did it. It took me a few days to figure it out, but I finally tied her to the bed.
“Plea...se! Louis!” She started out in a normal tone, but I shoved my hands underneath her bum and bite her pelvic bone and that turned into a squeak/moan.
“Please do that again.” I smiled looking up at her as I kept my position and bit her pelvic bone again.
“N… no!” She squealed trying to close her legs, but I kept them pinned to the bed. “Please, stop.” She begged rolling her head back. “I’m trying to have a conversation with you.”
“Okay.” I sighed kissing the skin I just branded. “What’s up, baby?”
“Can we please go out today?” She asked as I came face to face with her again.
“Why? Don’t you like our activities we’ve had in here the past two days?” I whispered leaning down and started to nip at her neck.
“It’s not that…” She stopped, most likely biting back a moan. “Please stop.”
“Mmm uh.” I shook my head and moved to her collar bone.
“Fucking hell, Louis, stop.” She shivered.
“You have goosebumps.” I smirked and rubbed my nose against her skin. “Did I do that?”
“Yes, now stop.”
“Okay.” I laughed getting to my knees, in between her legs and looked at her. Every inch of her. She’s beautiful. “If we do go out today, what do you want to do?”
“I don’t… care. Louis William Tomlinson, stop!” She squealed whenever I pressed my thumb to her clit.
“I’m not doing anything, babe.”
“Put your fingers somewhere where I can see them.” She growled.
“That was sexy, babe.” I smiled.
“Can you please stop being a sex crazed ape for five minutes?” She panted laying her head back against the pillow.
“That’s a long time.” I said as I ‘thought’ about it. “And you being tied up and ready for me, it’s hard to concentrate on anything else.”
Then untie me.”
“Nope.” I smiled popping the p. “Hurry up, your five minutes is running out.”
“Let’s just go do something.” She rushed. “Rent a boat, go snorkeling, something, anything…”
“But me penetrating you?” I asked moving his penis up against her clit.
“We’re leaving tomorrow, please let’s do something other than…”
“Scream each other’s names?” I asked hovered over her again.
“How are you still in the mood?”
“Because you’re my wife.” I whispered with a big smile.
“And you’re my husband but I’m tired of being in this position.” She frowned.
“But you weren’t in this position an hour ago.” I smiled and kissed her and moved to her ear. “You were on your hands and knees.”
“I know that.” She blushed looking away from me.
“That’s still amazing.” I laughed grabbing her chin and made her look at me. “I’ll rent a boat and we can go to a deserted island.”
“We’re not having sex all day.” She huffed from the look I must of gave her.
“Not all, just most.” I smiled proudly.
“When are you making that call?”
“After we’re done here.” I smiled. “I can’t leave you aroused.”
“I’m aroused? Really? Go figure.” She sarcastically laughed.
“You’re aroused.” I nodded lifting all of my weight onto my hands. “If you’re not, I’ll get you aroused.”
“Sh.” I shushed her. “Relax and enjoy what’s about to happen to you.” I looked into her eyes deeply and with a passion I bet she has never seen before, I leaned my head down and kissed her intensely. I noticed she was surprised by my actions, but I couldn’t help myself. She’s mine. Forever.
“Lou…” She mumbled into the kiss.
“Yeah?” I parted from her and looked down at her.
“I…” She stopped and smiled. “I love you.”
I’ll never get tired of hearing that come from her.
As I pressed my lips against hers again, I kissed her with an intensity that would have been way out of place if we weren't into each other as much as we are. I drew my lips away from hers and began to kiss off to the side of her mouth. I slowly made my way down the side of her jaw and down the side of her neck, as she inhaled strongly.
“What cologne did you put on?” She moaned.
“Versace.” I smiled against her. “Shh.”
“Sorry.” She apologised with a small giggle.
As I dragged my tongue down her collarbone, kissing my way down. As I kissed the top of her breast, she moaned a loud moan, altering me to lick her nipples, setting her off into another loud moan.
“Please untie me.”
“No.” I smiled and continued to kiss down her body, onto her belly, still kissing her on the way down. Noticing her hands tightly grasping the sheets that had her tied, my hand worked it's way down to her thigh, warmly caressing her perfect body. I listened to her enticing moan as I lifted her bum up slightly, deeply sighing as I looked over her entire body and knowing I’ll only get to see her this way for the rest of our lives.
“Babe?” She whispered peering into me with a burning desire to allow me to continue into the sweetest of all parts of her body.
“Patience.” I smiled and kissed my way down to just before the top of her arousal. She was moaning in full throttle now, her breathing was noticeably getting heavier, gasping for breath on almost every moan. Without making any contact with where she actually wanted me to touch, I stopped moving down her body. Her looking at me with a burning passion that cannot be expressed by words, made me want to take her, she craved for me to do everything possible to her. I quickly kissed and tongued my way up her inner thigh and finally where she wanted me most.
With my middle and index finger, I spread the lips and went all out, I struck hard and fast, with incredibly powerful tongue-work that made my mouth sore almost instantly, and Teddy didn't make it a secret. Her screams and moans rattled the room and echoed off the walls. I slid my arms underneath her bum and grasped her lower back firmly. With the added leverage, I pulled her into me while pushing my face further into her, I was determined not to stop until she could feel amazing. That's when it happened, she screamed out. If we were in a hotel or our house, she’d be well heard.
"Oh my god. Oh. My. Go-oddd, Louis!" And in a heartbeat, her body tensed up sharply and she quickly tugged onto my restraints I had her in and squeezed with the intensity of her shrieking orgasm. “Jesus Christ.” She panted as I pulled my mouth away from her and watched her shake.
She’s beautiful.
“Did you like that?”
“Ye-yes.” She panted.
"I'm not done just yet.” I whispered. “I'm not stopping until you can't stand." I smirked and before she could protest, I pulled my right hand out from underneath her and slid it down her hips. When she went to speak again, it quickly silenced as I thrust 3 fingers into her. Remorselessly, I twisted my fingers as I draw them out and thrust them back into the parts of her my tongue was unable to reach. I pulled my left hand out from behind her to allow myself to readjust, letting me kneel right below her. With this new position, I was able to get Bear to lift her legs up above me, so her thighs were now resting on my shoulder, with the rest of her legs wrapped around my upper back.
I didn't want to spoil the fun and drive in her just yet, I figured I would draw it out, have her come a few more times before I finally gave her a finale she deserved. I found myself leaning over her body, practically laying on top of her while I drill my fingers deeper into her. She couldn't talk, every time she tried to say something, her breath would fall short and her words would turn into a loud moan. She was shaking and her hands were trembling, practically begging to be let free and pull me closer. She kept trying to make out words with her lips but would fall short every time she tried to speak, it was like her throat was telling her not to distract me. I leaned in and placed my left hand underneath her head while I passionately kissed her lips. She responded immediately, viscously forcing her tongue into my mouth. She worked my tongue as if it were vengeance for her orgasm earlier. Her mouth was as wet as her vagina, she must have been salivating this whole time.
I eventually broke free of her erotic kiss with a satisfied smirk on my face. Her response was not quick enough, as I thrust a fourth finger into her. The squishing sounds of my fingers pushing deep into her were loud enough to alert anyone on the outside of the bedroom, thankfully, we were safe, pretty much in the middle of an ocean and away from people. I drilled deeper into her, as though I was trying to pass through the vaginal walls and reach into other parts of her body. The only thing stopping me from penetrating into her as deep as I wanted to go was my thumb, cuffing off at her lips. I keep slamming my hand into her, each thrust shooting some juice out of her and onto us. I peered into her eyes as I stopped thrusting my hand into her. With my only finger not currently pleasing her to her wildest dreams, I massaged her lips as she looked at me with a severely worried face as she could probably imagine what I was thinking. She almost pleaded me to not thrust my entire hand into her. I was about to deny her, and push her to another orgasm, but she was quick with her reaction, swiftly sliding her leg down and placed her foot onto my pulsing erection.
“Untie me.” She growled.
‘Things are about to get interesting.’ I thought to myself as I leaned over her and untied the bedsheets I tied around her hands.
Within seconds, she was pushing me against the bed, she held both my wrists down as she threw her thigh over my body, riding just above my waist as I got ready for what she was about to do to me. By this time, she began to hump her way up my torso, rubbing her clit up and down my stomach. But she surprised me whenever she whipped around and pushed her back end in my face, instinctively, I slid two fingers in her, she couldn't control her urge, I felt a quick cool air over where my throbbing erection, followed by a warm breath and instantly, took, what she could, into her mouth.
“Fuck, Teddy.” I growled.
As she ‘went to town,’ I was keeping her lust satisfied by thrusting my fingers in her again. With my other hand, I decided to try something I always wanted to do. I slid my hand up her body and rested it on her bum. "Trust me?" I asked.
“With my life.” She stopped assaulting me for a second to answer then returned to her assault, so I took my index finger slid down to where I wanted it, right on the rim off her bumhole. I pressed my tongue to her while I massaged her bumhole. I leaned my face closer to her and began playing with it using my tongue. My new motions, made Teddy lift herself off my dick and moan like it was her job.
“Fuck, Louis.” She moaned as she ground herself against my face. As she kept moaning, I couldn't resist anymore. I leaned up, threw her off me and viscously tossed my body at her.
Next thing I know, I'm laying on top of her, pushing fully in her. Her pulling me as close as possible, resulting in her chest being pressed up against mine, her tongue in my mouth, I honestly couldn’t have this any better. She slid one hand down past my hips and she began kneading my bum as her other hand was kneading her breasts, while I was reaching for her legs. Pressing my hands firmly on her thighs, I spread her legs outward and started drilling her harder and faster. At this point, we were both screaming.
After a vigorous hours of nonstop lovemaking, we were both ready to let go of everything we’ve built up. I couldn't hold it in anymore, my dick was swollen with come and ready to burst open inside of her. I could feel every every time I thrusted into her. My face was turning red and I couldn't contain myself any further. I leaned in and passionately pressed my lips to Bear’s. As surprising as it’s not becoming, she embraced aggressive tongue-play. However, just as I feel myself about to burst open, I felt Teddy tightening intensely around me. She came and this time, it was far too much for me to handle, I released everything I had stored in the past few hours. Teddy’s moaning gave me the ambition to nut as hard as I could and spill everything I had to give into her.
“Whatever got into you just now…” She started but had to stop and catch her breath, which made me smile. “Fuck, bring him out more often, please.”
“I’ll try.” I weakly laughed and leaned my forehead on her collar bone.
“Are you going to get out of me?” She asked and laughed whenever I shook my head. “Okay.” She whispered and kissed behind my ear before starting to play with my hair. “You’re disgusting.”
“What?” I asked leaning up.
“You’re all sweaty.” She laughed. “You’re gross.”
“Have you seen yourself?” I smiled.
“Obviously not.” She smiled softly.
“Wanna take a nap?”
“Yes.” She nodded as fast as she could. “But we were going to ren…”
“It’s still early.” I cut her off and pulled out and as I pulled out, I smiled. She came just as hard as I did. “That’s so hot.” I smiled placing my hand on her and felt just how hard she came.
“Don’t.” She jerked, but I pulled her thigh back. “Louis…”
“I wish I pulled out and watched you come.” I whispered slipping two fingers in her then back out slowly.
“Please, stop.” She begged.
“One more thing.” I pleaded with a smile.
“What ‘thing’?” She asked, and my answer was placing my hands on her inner thighs and pushed them to the bed as I leaned down and licked up everything that came out of her.
“Fuck, Louis.” She whimpered. I love that sound.
“Keep your legs there.” I practically threatened looking up at her.
Once she nodded, she laid back and I leaned back down, kissed her clit before moving down to her opening, moving her lips with my fingers and shoving my tongue in her. She must of been caught off guard, because she jolted towards me, causing me to laugh some and her to moan even louder.
I told her I wasn’t stopping until she couldn’t stand.
“Why are you acting like you’re in trouble?” I laughed looking at her.
“Uhm, because I may or may not of brought a bikini…” She lightly laughed.
“Seriously?” I looked at her with amusement.
“Yes.” She pouted. “I blame you.”
“Me?” I laughed. “Why am I to blame?”
“You woke me up too soon.” She continued to pout as I pulled her into my side. “I’m tired.”
“Sorry.” I smiled.
“You better be.” She playfully huffed as she snuggled into me some more.
“I’m like 45% sorry.” I laughed softly and kissed her hair. “Lay down and relax. The boat ride is like fifteen minutes.”
“If I lay down and relax, I’ll fall asleep.” She shook her head and turned some and flung her legs over mine. “Even though it’s really tempting.”
“Teddy, just lay down.” She’s so stubborn.
“Mmm uh.”
“I need to learn how to deal with a stubborn person.” I sighed picking her up and placing her onto my lap, where she laid her head on my shoulder and hugged my waist. I give her five minutes until she’s sleeping.
“I’m not stubborn.” She yawned.
“Don’t fight with me, babe. You’ll lose.” I smirked as I started to draw small shapes onto the top of her thigh.
“I lose every battle whenever we go up against each other.”
“Because I’m awesome.”
“Okay, cocky git, calm down.” She giggled lifting her head some and leaned up and kissed my neck quickly.
“You insult me, yet you kiss me.” I nodded. “Nice.”
“You’re a kissabe person.” She shrugged snuggling back into her old spot and started to mess with my shirt. “You’re going to have awkward tan lines.”
“Is that cue to take my shirt off?” I asked.
“Mhmm.” She nodded looking up at me.
“What do I get in return?” I teased.
“A massage.” She shrugged sitting up straight to allow me to take my shirt off.
“What kind of massage?”
“Well since you’re you, I’m guessing I’ll be massaging your dick.” She rolled her eyes and laid against me again.
“With your tongue.”


i'm sorry if this scared you away
i have no idea why, but i'm really insecure about this chapter
like too much sex, i guess :/
sorry, i don't know

hey new subscribers,
i see you
VOTE why don't cha? :)

if any of you follow me on tumblr,
(sorry that this is stupid)
but i'm like obsessed with my page right now
because i finally grew a brain and learned how to properly use it other than posting and reblogging
(^ like i said, stupid. just had to say it)

but yeah anyways, i went home Tuesday afternoon for like two hours
when my step mom came home, i packed a bag and booked it
i hate it there and can't be there for long or i die of boredom

i'm mad at Louis
like look at him


but yeah...
story wise
what do you think?
if you hate it, i'm sorry
on my little update but not a chapter thing, i said a lot of drama is about to happen
what do you think it is?
what do you want it to be?
what do you want to happen in upcoming chapters as well?

but yeah, i won't read comments for like a day because i'm scared you all hated this
so yeah
just kidding i'll keep refreshing the page nonstop like i always do

after you read and perhaps comment, go read We're A Secret and Snake Eyes

until then, here's something 100% true ✌


i'm so fucking done with him and that fucking tongue
but just imagine what that tongue could do to you
i'm legitly sobbing and not okay


AAAHHHHH I love itttttt I can't wait to see what you come up with next!! Asss always you produce the most well written chapters and I'm so in love with this book.. oh did I say in love? I meant obsessed

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Omg I literaly got an email from the website that you updated! Gonna read the story from the beginning now :) Thanks for making my empty 1D heart a little less empty!

OutofStyles OutofStyles

Still here babe!! Not on the site actively but I will come back to support and love on you!!! Muah!!and yassssssssss Louis new single is everything. I fell in love.

Mixedthoughtz Mixedthoughtz

I'll literally always be here lol this is my number 1 favourite story!!! I even recommended it to many of my friends and a few of them don't even like 1D but they absolutely love the story :) And call me a very hopeful optimist but there is a big part of me that believes we will have either one more tour or another album in a few years' time. But until then, this story holds me together

Much Love ~Liz <3

LyssaMarie2447 LyssaMarie2447


I'm trying to. I promise. I just changed everything around and got a new and better PC, so I'm hoping. I'm still in love with this story and Louis (even if he's back with Eleanor). I've been rereading this lately and it's such a good story line and I want to finish it for people that are still around, but I feel like I lost a lot and with them not even being a band anymore, but I promise I'm trying. hopefully around next week I'll sit my ass down and get to work.
But thank you for still being here. you're the fricken best.

luckylo luckylo