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When You Let Your Heart Win

Chapter 28

"Teddy, don't think like that."
"Lou, I don't know what else to think." I frowned as I watched her pick up stuff for herself and Lux. "He misses her."
"I miss her too, but that doesn't mean anything."
"But you didn't date her."
"Teddy, Louis is crazy about you." She laughed turning towards me. "The way he talked about you, way before you started dating, he's been crazy about you. Stop being a girl and trust that he loves you."
"But she's evil!" I pouted and stomped my feet and acted like a child. In the middle of a market. Jesus.
"Oh woman!" She laughed harder and placed her hands on my shoulder. "Do you see her here?" She asked and I shook my head no. "No. Do you see him glued to his phone texting her?"
"No but he is texting her."
"'Hey's and 'how are you's." She smiled then shook me. "Stop being insecure and trust that he loves you and only you!"
"Okay." I smiled grabbing her hands off my shoulders.
"But then again, this better prove to him that you love him." She shrugged going back to her shopping.
"How do you figure?" I snorted.
"You're jealous that he's talking to his ex and jealousy shows just how much someone cares." She smiled elbowing me softly. "Go talk to him and yell at him some if you have to, just stay with us."
"I won't let her get on a plane, so it's not an option." We heard behind us and turned around and saw Louis leaning up against a shelf. "Walk with me?"
"Go." Lou pushed at me.
"Go grab me some ice cream?" I smiled.
"Of course." She nodded as I walked towards Louis but walked past him. Cold shoulder for at least two seconds.
"Babe?" He whispered walking after me.
"Not here." I mumbled walking out the market and into the empty parking lot. Seriously, do people live here?
"Well we're not getting on a bus full of people and going to fight." He responded and grabbed my arm before I opened the door to the bus.
"Okay, you don't have to man handle me!" I pushed him off after he pushed me up against the side of the bus.
"Sorry." He frowned grabbing my hand and sighed whenever I pulled away. "Give it to me."
"Yell at me. Scream. I don't care. Lay it all out." He shrugged. "But just know, just because I texted her saying I missed her doesn't mean I'm going to mess up what we got."
"But you miss her." I whispered.
"Babe, I've seen her for pretty much every day since I've known her. It's a piss poor excuse but it's strange not seeing her." He explained.
"That is a piss poor excuse." I whispered looking down at my hands.
"I'm not messing around, I don't ever plan on messing around on you, and you better believe that, because I honestly mean it." He said, in I think one breath.
"You cheated on El with me and you told her you wouldn't do such a thing."
"Bear, I've loved you as long as I can remember." He laughed slightly as he placed his hands on the side of my face and lifted my gaze to his. "I loved you since Hannah, after Hannah, before Eleanor, during Eleanor and I'm going to love you way, way after Eleanor. I am not going to mess any of this up. If I knew you'd have these kind of doubts, I wouldn't have even said one word to Eleanor."
"Okay." I sniffed and fisted his shirt.
"If you don't kiss him, can I?" Liam's voice was heard from above us, which made us look up and see him and Niall ease dropping out the window.
"Go away." Louis laughed slapping the window shut, but they reopened it.
"But baby, I loved you during Hannah and before Eleanor and during Eleanor." Li joked.
"Go away!" He laughed harder and slapped the window shut again before looking back at me. "Are we okay?"
"I'll think about it." I smiled.
"Okay, then I guess I should tell you I told Eleanor I asked you if we could try for a baby and that I love you more than I ever loved her." He looked over my shoulder and sassed a little.
"Okay, I thought about it." I giggled throwing my arms around his neck and kissed his chin. "I'm not mad at you. But if that bitch's name shows up on your phone again, I'm going to go over to her house and punch her face in again."
"I wonder if you broke her nose..." He thought out loud.
"I hope I did." I giggled. "If not, I'll go over right now and this time I will break her nose."
"Now, now, now let's not get to nasty." He smiled opening the bus door. "I might like it."
"Pervert." I huffed slapping his chest.
"Hey, you're really hot whenever you're pissed." He laughed. "Gives me a massive hard on."
"Louis!" I scolded.
"What?" He laughed looking around. "Nobody heard."
"Yeah we did." Zayn said poking his head into the front room of the bus. "Harry's going ape shit and trying to make Lux forget what she just heard."
"Like she knows what ha... Ouch!" He stopped mid-sentence whenever I elbowed him in the ribs.
"She's got ears and she's starting to pick up words. So shh!" I shushed him then walked into the room where everyone but Lou and Paul were. "Got enough food, Nialler?"
"Never, babe." He shook his head with a wink.
"Do you want to have a Teddy/Niall night here soon?" I asked leaning on the table and propping my head on my hand.
"Yes!" He smiled. "Last time you didn't stay with me all night."
"Sorry, babe." I frowned.
"Where'd you go?" Harry asked.
"I apparently went to check on Louis after a night out of partying and I passed out on his bed." I shrugged.
"Then when she came back to her room the next morning, she was just in her knickers." Niall said with a mouthful of crips.
"Did you two have sex before Doncaster?" Liam asked motioning between me and Louis.
"Nope." I shook my head.
"Even though I was wasted, thanks to Harry." Lou 'tipped his hat' towards the other half of Larry Stylinson. "I would remember if I was in that." He winked over towards me.
"Don't act like I'm a thing." I huffed. "You just got out of the dog house, don't get back in too soon or you'll be there for a good while."
"Love you." He sang as Lou walked in with shopping bags.
"Everyone on?" Paul asked walking back and counting heads. "Good. We'll be in Miami in about an hour. We're not stopping anymore, so I hope you got whatever you need for the next hour. If not, tough shit and deal with it."
"Always the charmer, Pauly." I giggled.
"Always, babe." He smiled then went back up to the front.
"Who bought whipped cream?" Niall asked as he searched through Lou's bags that he's helping unpack.
"I did." Lou raised her hand then went back to unpacking.
"I don't know." She shrugged. "Louis told me to get some. Ask him."
"Why'd you want whip cream?" I asked looking up at him as my head was on his lap.
"For stuff." He smiled. Cheekily. Fuck.
"What food is on this bus that is good with whipped cream?" Zayn asked looking up from his phone.
"I didn't say it was for food. I got it so I could lick it off Teddy." He laughed and everyone, not including me, because I saw this coming, let out a disgusting sound.
"Mate, seriously, keep that shit to yourself." Niall mumbled as he took a seat. I guess he's not hungry anymore. Ha.
"So uhm, why didn't I know about this?" I whispered.
"Because it was a last minute thing." He smiled.
"But why do you two need whipped cream?" Liam asked.
"To spice... well sweeten up the bedroom." Harry whispered.
"No need to whisper." I giggled.
"Yes I do!" He exclaimed then pointed at Lux that was on his lap. "This beautiful thing is innocent and I don't want... her knowing any of that kind of stuff."
"I feel sorry for his kids." I laughed.
"They'll be beautiful and perfect and yours will be bad and... bad." Harry fought for words and came up empty.
"Nice try, dimples." I giggled.
"Go home." He mumbled.
"Grow up." I stuck my tongue out at him.
"I love you." He smiled.
"I love you too."
The next hour was filled with Harry and Lou playing with Lux, me playing on my phone while Louis played with my hair as we held small conversation, Zayn and Niall playing FIFA, I don't see how someone can play that game nonstop, and then Liam was doing whatever Liam does on his phone. So either texting Sophia, playing a game or tweeting. In less wording, this drive is boring. Just like every other drive is.
"Get up! We're here!" Paul yelled from the front of the bus.
"Thank God!" I murmured shooting out of my seat and went to mine and Louis' bunk and grabbed my bag.
"Someone's in a hurry to get off the bus." Niall laughed.
"Yeah, you boys stink." I joked.
"And you're too girly!" He joked back.
"Mhmm. Cute." I smiled and ran off the bus.
Sun, fresh air, shower, here I come.
"So la da di da di
We like to party
"Babe, that's enough."
"It's been stuck in my head since I've heard it." I pouted as I stood in the shower.
"And I don't want it stuck in my head, so knock it off." Lou laughed as he did whatever in the bathroom.
"What are you even doing?" I asked leaning away from the water.
"Stripping." He said like it was nothing.
"Because I'm joining you." He laughed and stepped in.
"But I'm almost done." I frowned turning around.
"Then you'll be extra clean." He smiled turning us around so the water was hitting him, making a cool chill travel through my body, and he must of noticed because he laughed and pulled me under the water with him.
"Thanks." I mumbled laying my forehead against his chest.
"Mhmm." He hummed kissing the top of my head. "We can't be in here long."
"That's why I was taking a quick shower, num nuts." I giggled.
"I just wanted to see you wet and naked." He shrugged.
"Of course." I rolled my eyes then leant up to kiss him.
"You should know by now, babe." He mumbled with a smile into the kiss.
"Yeah I should, but I'm not that bright." I giggled kissing him once more then let go of him and walked out of the shower.
"Hey." I giggled as I wrapped a towel around me.
"Why'd you get out?" He asked sticking his head out.
"Because I'm done and you need to get to the arena." I responded ringing out my hair.
"Come with me."
"I'm going to try to get ahold of Perrie." I smiled as he turned me around to face him. "Get a towel, please?"
"What's wrong with going around naked?" He smirked.
"Nothing." I shook my head. "You just don't have time."
"Time for what?" He smiled pulling me up against him.
"Anything but to get dressed and down to the lobby."
"But..." He trailed and pulled my towel. "You look really good."
"I don't need that anymore, so use it." I smiled and walked out of the bathroom.
"I love you." I sang as I grabbed a bra and underwear. And nothing else. Like why? I'm going to be in this hotel for the rest of the day and night while he goes take care of One Direction business.
"I'm sexy and I know it
Know it
Know it
"You didn't change your ringtone yet?" I smiled as I jumped onto the bed.
"Didn't get around to it yet." He laughed. "Answer that, please?" He asked.
"Sure, babe." I replied and answered his phone without checking who it is. "Hello?" No answer. "Uhm, hello? Anyone there?" I asked then pulled the phone from my ear and checked the caller ID. Eleanor. "Seriously?"
"Babe, can you grab me a pair of boxers?" Lou asked, pretty loudly and the line clicked. Haha, bitch.
"Yeah, just a second!" I yelled back and texted El quick.

To El
It's Teddy, as you know, since you just called and hung up whenever I answered, can you leave Louis alone? You two are over and done with. He left you for me. It's time for you to realise that. Reread your conversation from earlier. He asked me to try for a baby two weeks into our relationship; we've also talked about getting a new place and about marriage IN TWO WEEKS. Just move on. He has.

Harsh, but nope, I don't care.
As I saw the text was delivered and that she read it, I got up and grabbed him a pair of boxers and while I was at it, I grabbed him a pair of pants and grabbed a shirt. Why not be nice?
"Here, babe." I said as I walked into the bathroom, where he was towel drying his hair. Naked. Damn.
"Thanks." He smiled as he grabbed his clothes from me. "Who called?"
"Eleanor." I rolled my eyes. "Apparently it wasn't too important since she hung up after you asked for a pair of boxers."
Then his phone rang again. If it's Eleanor again, shit's about to go down.
"Go answer that?" He asked kissing my cheek. "And if it's El, be nice."
"I already sent her a text." I shrugged walking back into the room. "It's a little mean, but hopefully she'll catch the drift and leave you alone."
"Hello, Harold." I smiled answering the call.
"Where's Louis?"
"In the bathroom getting ready." I sighed. "Why do all of you have to go to whatever you're doing today?"
"Because he's in the band, babe." He laughed. "Tell him to hurry up, we're ready to leave."
"Alright." I nodded. "You're in the lobby, right?"
"Alrighty. I'll tell him."
"Right. Thanks, babe. Bye."
"Bye." I said then hung up. "The boys are ready, hurry up and get down there before the kick you out. Their words not mine." I giggled.
"Yeah, yeah, yeah." He laughed walking out and throwing his t-shirt on.
"You look nice." I smiled.
"So do you." He winked standing in front of me. "What'd you say to El?"
"Read it." I shrugged handing him his phone. "Be mad at me later or whatever."
"I won't be." He smiled then leant down to kiss me. "I'll be back, whenever."
"I'll be searching Netflix and hopefully talking to Perrie."
"Alright." He smiled then kissed me again. "I love you. Don't leave wearing that."
"I won't." I laughed.
"Don't stand by the windows either." He laughed. "They'll take pictures and sell them to horny men."
"Oh my God, go!" I giggled and pushed him away from me.
"Love you!"
"Love you too." I laughed.
What a weird boyfriend I got.


well I have some news
I haven't updated my other story in a month and i'm stressing
so the next few days (hopefully), I will be doing nothing but writing for that story
if it takes a month for me to write that chapter, i'm sorry
it'll take a month
I will try my hardest to get that done and get back to this
i'm going to be skipping [maybe a lot] of time in, not the next but the chapter after that
then the big drama, I said in the last notes, will happen
I already have two and a half chapters for that, so they'll be like two or so days apart
so yay? :)
if not comment and bitch at me
I do apologize
I just got a whole lot more response from this story than I have the other
and this is a Louis story
and he's my boo
and I like picturing myself as living the life of Teddy
so yeah
again i'm sorry
but this chapter;
what do you think?
I honestly think it's stupid
but then I say that on a lot of chapters
but I honestly think this is the worst one yet
so yeah
tell me what you think


AAAHHHHH I love itttttt I can't wait to see what you come up with next!! Asss always you produce the most well written chapters and I'm so in love with this book.. oh did I say in love? I meant obsessed

LyssaMarie2447 LyssaMarie2447

Omg I literaly got an email from the website that you updated! Gonna read the story from the beginning now :) Thanks for making my empty 1D heart a little less empty!

OutofStyles OutofStyles

Still here babe!! Not on the site actively but I will come back to support and love on you!!! Muah!!and yassssssssss Louis new single is everything. I fell in love.

Mixedthoughtz Mixedthoughtz

I'll literally always be here lol this is my number 1 favourite story!!! I even recommended it to many of my friends and a few of them don't even like 1D but they absolutely love the story :) And call me a very hopeful optimist but there is a big part of me that believes we will have either one more tour or another album in a few years' time. But until then, this story holds me together

Much Love ~Liz <3

LyssaMarie2447 LyssaMarie2447


I'm trying to. I promise. I just changed everything around and got a new and better PC, so I'm hoping. I'm still in love with this story and Louis (even if he's back with Eleanor). I've been rereading this lately and it's such a good story line and I want to finish it for people that are still around, but I feel like I lost a lot and with them not even being a band anymore, but I promise I'm trying. hopefully around next week I'll sit my ass down and get to work.
But thank you for still being here. you're the fricken best.

luckylo luckylo