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When You Let Your Heart Win

Chapter 24

"Alright lads, tomorrow we have a full day but it'll be our last day here and you have the day off, so go have fun, but not too much where you'll get arrested and sent back to the UK with revoked visa's so Tuesday morning when I pound on your door, you better be up and ready to get on here and ready to leave." Paul announced to us as we got onto the boys' tour bus that'd take us back to the hotel.
"Louis and Teddy." Harry lamely coughed.
"Suck it, Curls." I huffed at him from acrossed the bus.
"You two, shut it." Paul rolled his eyes and snapped.
"Ohhh looks like Paul isn't Team Teddy anymore." Zayn laughed.
"He always will be." I waved off. "We have our moments."
"Anyways." Paul laughed. "I was thinking we could all have dinner tomorrow night?"
"I don't see anything wrong with that." Liam nodded.
"I'm up for it." Niall mumbled through a mouth full of crips.
"Of course you are. It's food." I giggled as he showed me a mouthful. "Gross."
"Love you." He winked at me as I continued to giggle.
"I'll text you all the details whenever I know them." Paul nodded as he looked down at his phone.
"Can we go to like a five star restaurant and dress up nice and fancy?" I smiled and got a lot of moans and groans from the boys.
"C'mon Teddy."
"We just want a chill dinner, nothing where we have to wear a tux."
"Fine." I pouted and propped my legs on Louis'. Speaking of Louis, he's really quite... "Babe?" I whispered leaning into him.
"Are you mad at me?" I frowned.
"No." He shook his head quickly. "Just thinking."
"I'm not mad at you. I swear." He assured and pulled me onto his lap.
"You better not be." I sighed and laid my head on his shoulder. "You owe me a night filled of fun."
"And you'll get it."
"See you lot tomorrow?" Lou asked as we all stepped out of the lift.
"Yeah, see you at dinner or before."
"I'll be at the pool all day tomorrow." I smiled.
"You do need some sun on those legs." Niall joked.
"Look at you, Irish!" I huffed.
"She's got a point, mate." Liam laughed.
"Of course I do!" I laughed with him. "He's paler than the wall."
"I burn easily." He whined as he dug through his pockets for his key card.
"There is this thing called before sun, spray it on then go out in the sun." I offered. "You'll look burnt later in the day but the next morning, wallya! You're tan."
"Listen to her, mate." Harry nodded. "When she goes out all day, she gets a sexy tan."
"Sexy?" I scrunched my nose up and looked at him.
"Babe, when you get as tan as you do, it's sexy." Louis agreed.
"And what I'm not 'sexy' in the winter?!" I huffed.
"You wear too many clothes so I couldn't tell." Liam held his hands up.
"I'm going to go call Perrie." Zayn laughed slightly then walked into his room. "You coming, Ted?"
"No!" Lou yelled grabbing my waist whenever I started to follow him.
"What?" I pouted. "I didn't get to talk to her last night."
"You got plans." He reminded me.
"Oh!" I blushed. "Tell her I love her!"
"I hope I have earplugs." Harry whined. "Who has the other side of Louis and Teddy's room?"
"Me why?" Niall asked with a worried tone.
"Wanna go out or something?" Harry asked as Louis started to pull me to our room.
"Why?" Then Niall looked at us. "Uh, yeah, let's go and shoot some pool."
"Bye!" Lou yelled then pushed me in our room.
"Impatient are we?" I giggled whenever he slammed the door shut, ran-ish towards me, picked me up and dropped us onto the bed.
"Very." He mumbled as he kissed me hungrily. "You have no idea how hard it has been to hide a boner."
"I think you did a good job." I giggled as he laughed against my neck.
"I'll have to check twitter later to see if anyone saw it." He smiled getting to his knees and stripped off his shirt while I took my cover up off and my tank top.
"You do that." I nodded and pulled him back down so I could kiss him again. "Did you get condoms?"
"Yup." He nodded as he kissed down my arm, making my bra strap fall down as well.
"Yup." He laughed.
"I'm glad he's always prepared." I breathed heavily as I flipped us over. "Even if he doesn't use them."
"Can we not talk about Harry?" He asked as I started to kiss down his body.
"Mhmm." I hummed as I got to his pants and sat up on his thighs. "So you've hid a boner all night, huh?"
"Take my pants off and you'll see." He smirked.
And I did. Slowly.
I popped his button as I kept my eyes locked on his and slowly unzipped his zipper before bending down and kissed below his belly and above his pelvic area, which made him moan.
"Please, let's not tease."
"But that's the fun part." I pretended to whine as I got to my feet and pulled his pants and boxers off and made sure I grabbed the condoms out of his back pocket. "Well babe, you weren't lying." I giggled and took off my pants and underwear before I reclaimed my seat on his thighs.
"You always take your pants off before I allow you to." He growled sitting up, but I just pushed him back down.
"Don't sit back up, either." I warned.
"And if I do?" He smirked sexily.
"I'll torture you." I smiled and grabbed him.
"You always do." He moaned throwing his head back.
"I do not." I giggled and moved up some. So close, but still too far away from touching. "So, babe? Since I'm in control, what do you want me to do?"
"Put those pretty lips around me." He answered lifting his head and looked at me with pleading eyes.
"That's exactly what I... won't do." I smiled whenever he groaned.
"Shh." I whispered, pumped him one more time before laying his penis against his stomach and positioned myself on him and rolled my hips on his penis.
"Fuck you're so wet." He moaned grabbing my hips and forcefully grinded me on him.
And now I'm a moaning mess. The top of his head hitting my clit at the right amount of force, feels fucking fantastic.
"Hmm?" I moaned grabbing his right hand and grinding a little harder.
"Please let me touch you." He begged before I nodded my head, giving him the okay to touch me. And he did. His chest was pressed up against mine in a heartbeat. "This needs to go." He kissed down my shoulder as he pushed my bra straps down then unclasped it and threw it wherever in the room before he cupped my breast and started to suck and kneed away.
"Uh, baby." I moaned and rotated my hips faster. "Louis..."
"What?" He whispered flipping us over and continued rubbing himself against my wet folds. "I love how wet you are." He smirked leaning up on a hand then with his other he started to rub my clit with his thumb then stick a finger or two in.
"Lou... oh fuck." I moaned bucking my hips into him.
"What do you want, baby?" He whispered grabbing himself and started to rub his head against my clit forcefully. "I wonder if I can make you squirt."
"No... ahh! Not today." I squealed at the amount of pleasure he was sending through my body. "Louis, please."
"I'm really tempted to just push in and go." He whispered as he pushed in, but drew back out.
Didn't he say no teasing?
Oh that's right. I said that's the fun part.
Fuck you, Teddy and your big mouth.
"L..." And he keeps popping his head in. "God damnit, get in already!" I huffed scooting down closer to him, which made him slip in deeper.
"Fuck, Teddy! Stop!" He growled pulling out. Now I'm moaning because he's not touching me at all.
"Louis?" I whispered, from the bed, spread open like an eagle. "Baby?"
"We should see how long you can keep quite." He whispered picking up a condom package, tore it open and rolled it down his length and walked back towards me. "How long do you think you can go without making a sound?" He asking grabbing my ankles and pulling me to the edge of the bed until we were touching.
"Not long." I laughed bucking my hips up some to get some kind of friction.
But I didn't. Because my boyfriend is an arse and likes to see me suffer.
"I bet you can't be quite for five minutes..." He stopped and rubbed himself against me. "And if you make one sound, you owe me a sexy, sexy photo."
"Deal." I moaned as he kept rubbing himself against me. "Now get in me." And this time, he's not playing around. By the time I go mid sentence, he slammed in like a magnet hitting another magnet. And I had to bite back a ginormous moan.
"Nothing, huh?" He smirked as I shook my head no, a few times. "Are you screaming in your head?" Now I'm nodding like an idiot.
"What can I do to make you scream out loud?" He whispered hotly in my ear then kissed down to my neck and started to suck and bite hard as he started to thrust harder.
Oh fuck how I want to scream out right now.
"You look really hot right now." He smirked leaning up on his hands and looked down and watched himself appear and disappear inside me. "And I really want that picture, so baby, I'm sorry." He smiled evilly, stood up straight, pressed his thumb to my clit and rammed in me life there's no fucking tomorrow.
"Oh fuck!" I lose. I have to take a picture now. But I'm glad I get to scream now. You can feel the weight lifting off my chest.
"That's my girl." He smirked as he eased up on my clit, but started to strum it.
"Babe... hmmm, fuck. I'm gonna come." I squealed, withering around. And I came. Like really hard. Insert inhuman moans here.
"I'm proud of you." He smiled and pulled out and dropped to his knees. "I'm glad you're a squirter."
"Shut up." I blushed leaning up. "Get back in. You're not finished."
"In time, babe." He laughed pushing me back down. "Now relax, I want to see if I can do it again."
"Babe... ohh God!" His tongue is toe until they break off curling. He knows how to work that tongue.
"Stop being stubborn, Bear." He smiled standing up, jammed two fingers in me, palmed my clit and moved those fingers like crazy. God bless this piano playing man.
"Fuck, Louu!" And I came. Again. But this time, it was stronger and longer and my body is completely satisfied.
"God that was so hot." He smiled removing his fingers and licked them clean before leaning over me again. "You okay?"
"Mhmm." I nodded. That's all I could do. I'm still shaking.
"Can I continue?" He asked kissing my lips as he started to move his condom covered penis over my sensitive clit again.
"Pl... please." I whispered as I twitched a little.
Sex with Louis has just gotten a whole lot better.
"Just saying, wow."
"Shut up." I blushed hiding under the sheet.
"Don't be embarrassed!" He laughed pulling the sheet back down and just stared at me.
"You're making me feel uncomfortable." I mumbled trying to look away.
"You're just beautiful." He smiled and leaned down to kiss me softly. "Do you want to go for a swim?"
"It's after midnight, the pool is closed, babe." I laughed as he started to play with my hair.
"So?" He shrugged. "The worst they can do is throw us out."
"Of the pool and maybe even the hotel." I snorted.
"We have the bus if that happens." He smile getting up. "Let's go."
"No." He cut me off. "Get your suit and let's go."
"I'm tired." I pouted sitting up and holding the sheet against my chest as I watched him run around, bum naked, looking for his swim trunks.
"We'll go in the jacuzzi then." He smiled looking at me. "C'mon babe."
"Uh, the things I do for you." I gave in and got up.
"That's my girl." He smiled tugging the sheet off me.
"I've seen you naked how many times? Don't be afraid to run around in your sexy birthday suit." He smiled proudly and threw the sheet acrossed the room.
"You're an arse." I rolled my eyes and turned to look for a bathing suit. I'm actually a little sad. This will be the first time I've used a bathing suit this summer. SUMMER IS SORTAISH ALMOST OVER! Damn you, England and your shitty weather.
"What suit are you wearing?"
"A new one." I smiled.
"Have I seen this new one?" You're smirking. I can tell.
"Nope." I giggled as I grabbed my suit and walked into the bathroom
"I can't go another round, Teddy!" He whined.
"I'm not asking you too." I giggled.
"You practically are."
"How?" I laughed sticking my head out and looked at him.
"You're going to come out of there all hot and sexy and boing I'll be hard."
"We're going to get in trouble."
"Shut up." He laughed and pulled me into him. "You look hot, by the way."
"I have a cover up on." I giggled.
"I can see down it." He smirked as he pulled my cover and bit his lip. "Yeah you're more than hot right now."
"Shut up." I blushed pushing him away.
"Don't push." He whined. "Pushing is rude and hurtful."
"Whatever." I smiled and sighed as we stepped foot outside. "Uh, I miss America."
"Here we go again." He rolled his eyes and walked towards the chairs surrounding the pool.
"Yes!" I yelled with a laugh. "Here we go again! It's always warm here!"
"Not in the winter." He laughed taking his shirt off. "Stop drooling."
"I have a sexy boyfriend." I shrugged. "Sue me."
"I just might." He nodded pulling me over to him and lifted my cover up over my head. "The way you're looking at me, it looks like you're about to devour me."
"Oh I just might." I nodded looking his body over. And just to think not too long ago that was on top of me. Sigh. I love my life.
"Stop staring." He whispered in my ear before diving into the pool.
"I thought we were getting in the jacuzzi?!" I pouted whenever he resurfaced.
"We can get in that later." He smiled shaking his hair rid of water.
"Babe, I'm tired."
"Teddy Nichole, don't make me get out."



so it's been officially 24 hours since I've updated
and here's another one!!!!!!!!!!!!

yeah, I'm Bender
i'm proud of myself
SO! just to clear the air,
I think
so don't freak out and die on me because I still don't know if i'll do a Harry story
but until next time
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Omg I literaly got an email from the website that you updated! Gonna read the story from the beginning now :) Thanks for making my empty 1D heart a little less empty!

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Still here babe!! Not on the site actively but I will come back to support and love on you!!! Muah!!and yassssssssss Louis new single is everything. I fell in love.

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I'll literally always be here lol this is my number 1 favourite story!!! I even recommended it to many of my friends and a few of them don't even like 1D but they absolutely love the story :) And call me a very hopeful optimist but there is a big part of me that believes we will have either one more tour or another album in a few years' time. But until then, this story holds me together

Much Love ~Liz <3

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I'm trying to. I promise. I just changed everything around and got a new and better PC, so I'm hoping. I'm still in love with this story and Louis (even if he's back with Eleanor). I've been rereading this lately and it's such a good story line and I want to finish it for people that are still around, but I feel like I lost a lot and with them not even being a band anymore, but I promise I'm trying. hopefully around next week I'll sit my ass down and get to work.
But thank you for still being here. you're the fricken best.

luckylo luckylo

Are you still going to finish WYLYHW? Sorry if I'm being annoying this story has just been a huge part of my life for so long and I feel like I'm having withdrawals lmao Or wasn't there gonna be a sequel? Did I miss that announcement?

Again sorry if I'm being annoying
Much Love ~Liz <3

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