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When You Let Your Heart Win

Chapter 16

Louis' POV

'Have you and Eleanor broke up?'
'Who broke up with whom?'
'Is it true you cheated with your flatmate/best mate, Teddy Parker?'
'How long have you and Teddy been having this affair?'
Let's just say, I've heard everything today. Three interviews, all those questions, I'm pissed and ready to go home and forget everything.
I haven't been on Twitter, but the way the interviewers are talking, people are talking and even El may be talking. It's just aggravating. Everyone makes mistakes, but I don't see my actions as a mistake.
"What?" I jumped and turned to Harry.
"Are you okay?" He laughed.
"Yeah, I'm just ready to go home." I sighed rubbing my face.
"To Teddy." He smiled.
"That too." I smiled back.
"Don't go too rough on her." He winked then got out of the car quickly.
"Chicken shit." I laughed to myself before driving away from the curb.
Since my mind was running, the drive home was quick and when I drove into the driveway, I sighed in relief to find nobody hanging outside.
Let's just say, I grabbed my phone, turned off the car and bolted for the front door.
Five hours is long enough for a day of interviews whenever they're stressful.
No answer. Alright... Living room's empty, kitchen's empty. Did she go out? Nope. Sleeping. In her bed. Pant-less. Woman. She’ll probably set on fire if she goes around this house in pants/shorts.
"Bear?" I whispered crawling in behind her and kissed her shoulder.
"You're so annoying." She groaned.
"But I want you to wake up." I laughed softly.
"But I want to sleep."
"But I want to cuddle." I smiled as she turned over and cuddled into me.
"No." I replied making her eyes snap open.
"What's wrong?" She asked scooting up so we were eye level.
"Interviewers were dicks, plus I wanted to see your eyes." I smiled.
"You're an idiot." She giggled. Now my day is better. "What'd they ask?"
"About El and how long we've had this 'affair' going on." I laughed.
"Like three days before you broke up." She huffed as I smiled at her. "You're a creep."
"No I'm not." I laughed.
"Then stop smiling at me like that." She smiled hiding her face into my chest. "I missed your smell."
"I missed my cuddle buddy." She giggled.
"Ditto." I replied again.
"That was the longest week of my life." She frowned looking up at me.
"Ditto." I whispered before kissing her.
"Hmm. I missed that too." She smiled.
"Didn't we say this all last night?" I asked.
"If we did, we did. I'm just saying it again." She shrugged with a laugh. "Just know one thing, though."
"What's that?"
"I'm never going that long without all of those things, ever again." She warned flipping us onto my back.
"Good." She smiled and kissed me quickly. "Now that we have that settled, what are we doing on this date?"
"Wear pyjamas." I replied sternly.
"Pyjamas?" She looked at me like I was mad.
"Yup." I nodded then leaned up to kiss her again, but this time, longer.
"Our... Date... Better... Not... Be... In... Bed." She got out between kisses.
"It's downstairs." I smiled flipping us over and hovered over her. "But dinner can be right here."
"Very, very tempting." She smiled pulling me down and before our lips could be reconnected, my phone just had to go off. "Cock block of the century."
"Sorry." I apologised rolling off her and fished my phone out of my pocket. "Hello?"
"Why do you sound so out of breath and irritated, Louis?"
"Prick, what do you want?" I huffed down the phone line.
"Paul just called about tour." Harry started. "It starts back up next week."
"Yes, Harry, I knew that." I sighed.
"Then why am I now just hearing about it?!" He yelled.
"Because you never listen. He was just reminding you." I laughed as Teddy started to giggle.
"Tell your girlfriend to stop laughing at me."
"She's not my... Shit, gotta go." And I hung up and looked at Teddy. "I didn't ask you out..."
"You did this morning?" She questioned.
"Not the date, Bear." I shook my head. "Like boyfriend/girlfriend ask out."
"Oh." She frowned slightly. Oh, shit. Work quick, Louis.
"So..." I trailed rolling on top of her again and tilted her chin up. "Teddy Parker, will you be my girlfriend?"
"That sounds weird." She giggled.
"Bear?" I sighed.
"Sorry." She giggled once again before pressing her lips together in a tight thin line. "But yes, Louis, I will be your girlfriend." She smiled wrapping her arms around my neck.
"So we're official?" I smiled.
"Mhmm." She hummed nodding her head.
"What's today? July what?" I asked looking for my phone.
"The 15th." She smiled making me stop and her smile disappear. "What?"
"Today's El's birthday..." I trailed and Teddy, well she thought it was the funniest thing ever. "Bear?"
"So-sorry." She laughed covering her mouth. "Whew."
"I'm glad you think it's funny." I smiled leaning down to kiss her exposed collarbone and left my lips there.
"We're not telling anyone." She sighed.
"Why not?" I mumbled against her skin.
"Because I don't want to be sought out as 'the slag that ruined Elounor.'" She huffed.
"You didn't ruin it. I did." I whispered leaning up and looked down at her. "I made the first move."
"Everybody doesn't see it that way." She shrugged.
“I’m sorry.” I frowned.
“It’s not entirely your fault.” She smiled. “Now get off me and let’s get food.”
“You don’t want to sleep anymore?” I snorted as she lifted my arm and snuck out.
“Nope, my sexy boyfriend woke me up.” She giggled as she walked towards the door.
“I like that.” I smiled following her. “So girlfriend, what do you want for dinner?”
“Honestly, you, but we have a date down stairs.” She teased then stopped and turned around and looked at me. “Downstairs?”
“Since when do we have a downstairs?”
“Since we’ve moved in?”
“WHAT?!” She yelled and covered her mouth. “Sorry.”
“It was cute.” I shrugged.
“What’s downstairs?” She asked, mouth still covered. She’s cute.
“Since you don’t know, I’m not telling you.” I smiled turning her back around and walking us towards the kitchen.
“Damn it, Louis.” She whined.
“What?” I laughed.
“I hate surprises and I want to know, but I don’t know where to look.” She pouted turning around. “Tell me.”
“Show me.”
“Definitely not.”
“Louis.” She whined.
“Teddy.” I whined back.
“You’re mean.” She pouted jumping up on the counter by the stove. “And now you get to make dinner.”
“You would of burned the flat down.” I smirked.
“I WOULD NOT!” She yelled.
“Yeah you would.” I teased.
“No I wouldn’t!” She protested. “I make you breakfast…”
“When you’re alive.” I cut her off.
“You’re an arse”
“But you love my arse.” I smiled pushing her knees apart and standing between them and kissed her.
“Yeahhh.” She sighed pushing me back. “It’s like the best arse on this planet.”
“That’s a lie.” I snorted.
“Who has the best arse then?”
“You.” I smiled.
“Oh.” She’s blushing. I finally got Teddy Nichole Parker to blush. Took about… six or so years.
“Red’s a lovely colour on you.” I smiled poking her cheek.
“Stop.” She laughed. “Louis!”
“Alright, sorry.” I laughed. “What do you want for dinner?”
“I don’t know.” She shrugged. “What do we got?”
“Food?” I laughed. “I don’t know, let me look.”
“No!” She whined wrapping her legs around my legs and held me to her. “I don’t care right now.”
“So you just want to sit here and starve?” I laughed placing my hands on her waist.
“No, but you can join me in the ‘no pants’ club.” She smiled then looked at my chest. “Shirt can go too.”
“But you’re wearing one…” I trailed tugging on my shirt she was still wearing.
“But I like this shirt.” She pouted. “I look good in it too.”
“You do.” I nodded quickly, which made her giggle.
“Let’s make a deal.”
“Since I’m already pant-less, you gotta get rid of yours. Fair and square.” She said as she let her eyes go downward.
“That’s fair.” I smirked stepping back a step, unbuttoning and unzipping my pants and pushed them down my legs and kicked them to the side. “Better?” I asked moving back to my original spot.
“With those briefs? Yes.” She nodded biting her lip.
“Don’t do that.” I groaned moving my thumb up to her lips and released it.
“I like when you strip.” She giggled, but was completely serious. “You should do it more often.”
“I didn’t have to persuade you?” She gasped.
“Nope, because you’ll be stripping too.” I whispered pulling her into me. “Now… that shirt… needs to come off.”
“What’s wrong with your hands?” She whispered back.
“You’re a tease.”
“Fine.” She sighed leaning back and stripped off my shirt and throwing it, too I think the table? I don’t know. Who cares? “Better?”
“Mhmm.” I nodded kissing her collar bone.
“No, don’t do that now.” She whined leaning away. “Shirt. Off. Now.”
“So bossy.” I smirked, lifting my shirt off. “You look like you’re about to combust.”
“Because I am.” She moaned. And I’m done playing nice. That just made me pull her close and kiss her like my life depended on it. “What about dinner?”
“Deserts first.” I laughed against her lips.
“Fine by m…”
“Loui…” We are now a deer caught in headlights.
“You two break up, but you can’t get your key back?”


WARNING: this is A LOT!
so let's just start this now...

I love you all. thank you <333333
NOW... onto Lilo.
you may need new panties because


single Liam has ALWAYS been the sexiest Liam

can you imagine how imma act whenever Eleanor is out of the picture?!
Louis will be hotter than the mother fricken sun!
but how I reacted to the picture and gifs is shown below
(not in order)

i'm just like not okay
but okay, whew.
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AAAHHHHH I love itttttt I can't wait to see what you come up with next!! Asss always you produce the most well written chapters and I'm so in love with this book.. oh did I say in love? I meant obsessed

LyssaMarie2447 LyssaMarie2447

Omg I literaly got an email from the website that you updated! Gonna read the story from the beginning now :) Thanks for making my empty 1D heart a little less empty!

OutofStyles OutofStyles

Still here babe!! Not on the site actively but I will come back to support and love on you!!! Muah!!and yassssssssss Louis new single is everything. I fell in love.

Mixedthoughtz Mixedthoughtz

I'll literally always be here lol this is my number 1 favourite story!!! I even recommended it to many of my friends and a few of them don't even like 1D but they absolutely love the story :) And call me a very hopeful optimist but there is a big part of me that believes we will have either one more tour or another album in a few years' time. But until then, this story holds me together

Much Love ~Liz <3

LyssaMarie2447 LyssaMarie2447


I'm trying to. I promise. I just changed everything around and got a new and better PC, so I'm hoping. I'm still in love with this story and Louis (even if he's back with Eleanor). I've been rereading this lately and it's such a good story line and I want to finish it for people that are still around, but I feel like I lost a lot and with them not even being a band anymore, but I promise I'm trying. hopefully around next week I'll sit my ass down and get to work.
But thank you for still being here. you're the fricken best.

luckylo luckylo