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When You Let Your Heart Win

Chapter 12

Louis' POV
I went to bed with a smile on my face and I woke up with a smile on my face. Last night was... well words do not describe it. And waking up to Teddy in my arms just makes everything even better.
Her laying on her stomach, hair all sprawled out, she's honestly the most gorgeous girl I have ever laid eyes on. Fans say I should be illegal because of my looks, but no. Teddy is the one who needs to be illegal. Lads take second, if not third takes whenever she walks by. She has the rarest grey eyes, which I have never seen in my lifetime, beautiful smile, amazing laugh. Hell, Teddy Nichole Parker has flawless written over her. And she’s mine. I hope. At least she is to an extent.
I feel like a complete prick for cheating on El, but I think everyone knows how I feel about Teddy. Ever since she walked into Maths four years ago, I was a goner. Hannah knew it, Stan knew it, shit I even think my mum knew it.
She pushed me to get my driver’s licences, she pushed me to try out for the school play, she pushed me to do better after I failed my last year and her and Hannah pushed me to audition for The X-Factor. I owe a lot to Teddy as well as Hannah.
Hannah. I ruined that relationship and friendship perfectly.
This is why I am never quite or sit still for a long period of time. I think too much.
“Louis?” Mum whispered poking her head in. Please don’t notice that under this sheet, we’re naked. “Oh you’re up.” She smiled. “Breakfast is ready if you want any.”
“Yeah.” I nodded. “Give us a minute?”
“Sure.” She smiled closing the door silently.
“Bear?” I whispered rolling onto my side, a third of my body on her and kissed her exposed back. “Wake up.”
“Mmm uh.” She mumbled. “Tired. Go away.”
“Get up, sleeping beauty.” I smiled as I continued to kiss her back. “Mum said breakfast is ready.”
“She was in here?” She jerked her head up.
“Her head was.” I laughed rolling her over onto her back and smiled as she smiled. “Mornin’, Bear.”
“Morning.” She replied closing her eyes.
“No, wake up.” I urged as I moved some hair out of her face.
“No.” She giggled rolling on her side and snuggled into me. “Two minutes.”
“That’ll turn into twenty.” I snorted kissing her shoulder.
“Exactly.” She smiled against my chest.
“Babe, get up. We gotta get on the road and avoid traffic.”
“We’re going back to London today…” She trailed looking up at me.
“Yes.” I smiled.
“I’m going to be the town’s slag.” She frowned.
“They won’t know anything.” I assured. “If anything happens, ignore them.”
“Easier said than done.”
“I’ll be here.” I smiled. “If something’s said, I’ll defend you with two spoons and a tub of Ben & Jerry’s.”
“You’re amazing.”
“Not as amazing as you are.”
After another five to ten minutes of fighting with her to get out of bed, she got dressed, as did I and went down for breakfast. It’s now Monday, so Dan is rushing around to get to work as mum is trying to shove him some breakfast. Yes it’s weird to see my mum with someone else other than my father, but if she’s happy, whoever it is, I’m happy too.
“Morning sleepy heads.” Mum smiled.
“You know me, never wanting to wake up.” Teddy smiled taking a seat beside Lottie.
“Did you have fun last night?” Mum asked all of us as she set pancakes in front of me and Bear. “How was Despicable Me?
“I loved it.” Fizz smiled.
“It was so much better than the first one.” Phoebe agreed.
“I wouldn’t know because I didn’t see the first one.” Teddy said taking a sip of her tea as everyone turned to look at her. The girls, like she was mad, Dan, mum and I amused. “What?”
“How did you not see the first Despicable Me?” Lottie asked.
“Easy, I never went to see it was it was in the cinemas or when it came out on Blue Ray.” She smiled.
“I… you’re so strange.” She shook her head with a smile.
“I know.” Bear giggled. “Strange is in and fun.”
“Speaking of last night…” Mum trailed looking at me and Teddy.
Oh fuck.
“What’s this I hear of you two inviting my daughters down to London for the last week of summer holiday?”
Oh thank God.
“It’s Teddy’s idea.” I pointed at her.
“Hey!” She huffed dropping her fork and looked at me. “Don’t get me in trouble.”
“Oh you’re not in trouble, poppet. I think it’s a wonderful idea.”
“Score!” She yelled throwing her hands up in the air, making everyone laugh.
“I gotta go, love.” Dan announced with a small laugh still in his voice.
“Alright, dear. I’ll see you tonight.” Mum smiled kissing him quickly, causing Daisy and Phoebe to make disgusted noises.
“It was nice to see you again, Teddy. Louis.” He smiled kissing Bear’s cheek then patting me on the back politely. “I guess we’ll see you in a few weeks.”
“Yeah.” I nodded. “Have a nice day.”
“Safe travles.” Teddy called as he walked towards the front door.
“You too. Bye! Love you all.”
“He’s such a sweetheart.” Teddy smiled. “Jay, where did you find him? I need a guy like him. Does he have any single, attractive younger brothers?”
“Thanks.” I scoffed quietly.
“Shush.” She giggled slapping my knee.
“So what time are you two leaving?” Mum laughed as she shook her head.
“I was hoping after breakfast.” I frowned. “I want to dodge traffic, plus I have some stuff to take care of.”
“Aw really?” Fizz frowned.
“I’m sorry, Fizzy. I have to.”
“Girls, he needs to get back to work, you all know that.” Mum sighed taking a seat and finally getting to eat herself.
“You all had a good weekend though, right?” Teddy asked with a big smile on her face, making everyone smile.
I love this girl.
“I had a fantastic weekend.” Lottie smiled.
“Boyfriend free, best brother in the world home.” I sassed.
“No, because Teddy was here.” She smirked as Teddy giggled.
“Does everyone favourite her more than me?” I pouted.
“Yeah, pretty much.” Fizz nodded.
“Fine.” I huffed playfully. “Teddy you can take my last name and be their older sister, I’ll just be Louis from One Direction.”
“I am not taking your last name.” She looked at me with wide eyes.
Ha, oh that sounded bad.
“Oh, come on, Teddy! Being a Tomlinson is fun!” Lottie giggled. Life savour. Thank you, Lottie. Saved my arse.
“I like being a Parker.” She smiled. “I tend to be a Parker for a long time.”
“Are you saying you don’t want to get married?” Mum asked.
“I’d love too, but I’m 20.” She shrugged. “Marriage isn’t in view for the moment and I’m sure it won’t be for a good five or so years.”
“But Louis wants to get married before he’s 25.” Phoebs said.
“Since when?” I asked looking at her.
“Since I said so.” She smiled.
“Nice to know.” I laughed taking my plate to the sink. “And before you yell, mum, I am just putting it in the sink.”
“I’m the mum. I do the cleaning.” She smiled.
“And you still do his laundry.” Teddy giggled.
“No you do.” I stuck my tongue out at her.
“Who did it this weekend?” She smirked.
“Mummy’s boy!” She giggled as I stood behind her chair and put my hands on her shoulders.
“Mum, have you noticed something different between them?” Lottie asked.
“Charlotte.” I hissed.
“It’s just a question.” She shrugged then looked back at mum. “Well?”
“They’re closer.” She advised looking at us.
“I say they’re in love.”
“I miss my bed.” Teddy complained dragging her suitcase into our flat.
“I miss my couch.” I complained with her.
“I miss Harry.”
“I miss you, too, Ted.”
“HAROLD!” She smiled widely and hugged him tightly. Uhm?
“I knew you had a thing for me, Teddy.” He winked my way.
“What are you doing here?” Bear smiled pulling away from their hug.
“We’re all here, babe.” Liam called out.
“Everyone?” I asked walking to the living room, wide eyed.
“Yeah.” He laughed as he waved. “How was your trip?”
“Good.” I nodded scanning the room.
“I lied, I don’t miss Harry, I missed you.” She giggled running over to her and Zayn and plopped, softly onto Perrie’s lap.
“I’ll pretend that didn’t cut me deep, babe.” Harry faked hurt, then turned to me. “Care to talk?”
“Uh…” I trailed looking at Eleanor. She was glaring. At Teddy. Great. “Sure…”
“Good.” He smiled pulling me into the kitchen. “You had sex!”
“What?! We did not!”
“You did too.” He smiled even bigger. “She’s glowing, you’re obviously glowing. You had Teddy Bear sex.” He smirked wiggling his eyebrows.
“No we didn’t.” Fuck. “Okay fine, but don’t say anything.” I pleaded.
“Luckiest lad in the world.” He bounced. “Was she any good? How tig…”
“Finish that sentence and I’ll rip your balls off.” I growled.
“That good, huh?” He smiled.
“Amazing.” I smiled. “Better than amazing.”
“What are you going to do…”
“You stupid bitch, he’s my boyfriend!”
“Shit.” I groaned turning around quickly and dashing for the living room. “Harry, help me.”
“Nothing happened, you delirious cunt!” Oh, when she talks like that, claws are about to come out.
“I saw the pictures!” El yelled whenever I walked into the room. “You’re interested in him, but he’s not interested in you!”
“HA! Did you see pictures of our tongues down each other’s throats or something?!” Teddy yelled, trying to get out of Liam and Zayn’s hold, while Niall held back El.
“What’s going on?!” I yelled looking between them.
“Princess here thinks she can come in here, where I live and trash talk me.” Teddy growled.
“Why don’t you just go back to Doncaster and do us all a favour!” El yelled making Teddy’s face go red with anger.
“Why don’t you go back to Manchester and pretend like you’re a student there and go out, get shitfaced and fuck your ‘gay’ friend, Max!”
“Bear, stop!”
“No!” She yelled looking at me. “She has no fucking right to speak to me like I’m a piece of trash!”
“Because you are!”
“Shut up!” I barked, then took a breath. “What. Happened?”
“She’s in love with you.” El snorted. “I saw the pictures. How she looked at you. I have you and she can’t deal with it.”
“You honestly think I’m jealous of you?!” Teddy yelled trying to get out of Zayn and Liam’s grip. “Who did he take to Doncaster with him? Who does he live with?” She snorted. “Babe, I think you’re jealous of me.”
“Me jealous of a complete and utter nobody?” El laughed. “Oh, yeah, I am so jealous.”
“Can we just stop this?” I pleaded.
“You don’t have a job; all you fucking do is shop at Top Shop and drink fucking Starbucks and hold Louis’ hand and pose for pictures whenever there’s a camera taking pictures of Louis! You don’t even go to school and I’m a nobody?!”
“Teddy, enough!” I yelled making her look at me. “You don’t know anything about Eleanor because you never took a second out of your time to.”
“Excuse me?” She spat, hurt written all over her face as she looked at me. She stopped trying to attack El and just stood there emotionless, making the boys loosen their grips around her. “Why would I want to get to know someone who is only using you for your money? She’s not worthy getting to know.”
“Shut up.” I snapped at El and looked back at Teddy, who was on the verge of tears. “Bear, you’re my best friend, you could of tried.”
“So you’re choosing her?” She asked, knowing I’d know exactly what she meant. Fuck.
“Louis?” Harry whispered jabbing me as I just stood there looking at her. Trying to read how everything went wrong.
“Fine.” She sniffed, shrugging off Liam and Zayn and ran out of the room.
“Louis, what the fuck?” Harry shoved me, before he and Perrie ran after her.
“Thank God she left.”
“Get out.” I said through clenched teeth.
“You just made me choose you over my best friend. You had no right to jab at her when I told you nothing is going on between me and Teddy. Get out.” I spat. “All of you.”


ohhhh a Louis chapter :))))
since you all didn't answer my questions from last chapter's notes, I'll ask again;
whatta think?
whatta think will happen with Teddy and Louis?
Louis and Eleanor?
Do you all like Teddy? Like do you think she's too bitchy or anything else?
do you honestly like this?
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AAAHHHHH I love itttttt I can't wait to see what you come up with next!! Asss always you produce the most well written chapters and I'm so in love with this book.. oh did I say in love? I meant obsessed

LyssaMarie2447 LyssaMarie2447

Omg I literaly got an email from the website that you updated! Gonna read the story from the beginning now :) Thanks for making my empty 1D heart a little less empty!

OutofStyles OutofStyles

Still here babe!! Not on the site actively but I will come back to support and love on you!!! Muah!!and yassssssssss Louis new single is everything. I fell in love.

Mixedthoughtz Mixedthoughtz

I'll literally always be here lol this is my number 1 favourite story!!! I even recommended it to many of my friends and a few of them don't even like 1D but they absolutely love the story :) And call me a very hopeful optimist but there is a big part of me that believes we will have either one more tour or another album in a few years' time. But until then, this story holds me together

Much Love ~Liz <3

LyssaMarie2447 LyssaMarie2447


I'm trying to. I promise. I just changed everything around and got a new and better PC, so I'm hoping. I'm still in love with this story and Louis (even if he's back with Eleanor). I've been rereading this lately and it's such a good story line and I want to finish it for people that are still around, but I feel like I lost a lot and with them not even being a band anymore, but I promise I'm trying. hopefully around next week I'll sit my ass down and get to work.
But thank you for still being here. you're the fricken best.

luckylo luckylo