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My Big Win

Shopping

Harry's POV

I get Louis to come shopping with me before he goes and sees Hayley to tell him my good news. We meet at the mall and I take him into a jeweller.

"Why are we here?" He asks me

"Because I'm going to propose to Hayley!"

"Wow! Congrats mate! Isn't it a bit soon though?"

"No, I don't want to lose her. This way if she says yes we can't leave each other."

"Sounds Perfect"

"How are you going to propose?"

"I don't know but what I do know is that you need to take her out today."

"Sure."

Once We walk in I see the ring that Chloe showed me in the magazine and I fall in love with it because it is so perfect for my girl. http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=91384803 I purchase it and head home.

Louis's POV

I go and pick up Hayley from her house and I decide to take her to a nice restaurant for lunch. I pull her chair out for her to sit down and I notice that she has been crying.

"What's wrong Hayleyboo?"

"Nothing."

"Tell me I know something's wrong. I promise I won't tell Harry." She hands me her phone and shows me her twitter that has over 3 million followers and then I scroll down and see all the comments. They are all so bad I don't even want to think about it.


"Can I have a look at Harry's page?"

"Sure." I scroll down and he has hardly got anything.

"How come I have the name to a different twitter account?"

"Because when I started getting hate I made a 2nd account to give to Harry and you guys so you wouldn't see all the hate."

"So Harry doesn't know about this."

"No, please don't tell him." She begs

"Sure but he will find out sooner or later."

.......

I decide to text Harry to see how everything is going.

To: Harry Styles
From: Louis Tomlinson

How's everything going? Boobear

To: Louis Tomlinson
From: Harry Styles

It's fine. Bring her back to our flat. How is she? Has she opened up to you?

To: Harry Styles
From: Louis Tomlinson

A little bit. Don't worry about it mate. She's okay. Your lucky she is opening up, otherwise I don't know what would've happened to her.

To: Louis Tomlinson
From: Harry Styles

Louis, your scaring me. What is going on with her?

To: Harry Styles
From: Louis Tomlinson

Mate, it's not my place she will tell u when she's ready.


"Louis?" She asks

"Yes Hayley. What's wrong?"

"I feel really faint. I'm going to the bathroom."

"Sure."

......

About half an hour later I am still waiting and I go and see what is wrong.

"Hayley?" I say knocking on the door. No reply. I look under the stall and see she is on the floor.

"Hayley. Wake up!" I scream at her.

"Yes? Where am I?" She asks

"Unlock the door so I can see you." I demand. She unlocks the door.

"I passed out. I'm sorry."

"It's fine. Why do you think you passed out?"

"Because I haven't been eating for a week."

"Why?"

"Didn't you see the comments? I'm a model Louis. I am not skinny and I don't look like the girls on covers of magazines."

"They are all photoshopped. Don't listen to the fans they are just jealous. Harry loves you just the way you are and that's all the matters."

"But you have to say that he's my boyfriend and it's not enough."

"Hayley lets go shopping and choose you an amazing outfit then you can surprise Harry when we go back to my flat."

"Okay sounds good."

.......

We arrive at the mall and we go grab a few dresses and Hayley goes and tries them on.

"This one?" http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=91384717

"No to promy."

"This one?" http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=91384951

"To hipsterish."

"This one?" http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=91385007

"To casual."

"This one?" http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=91385083 She walks out wearing a gorgeous white dress with silver lacing on the top half.

"Perfect!" I say as she runs up and hugs me.

"Do you want to go and get something to eat?"

"Maybe. I just want a small fries or something."

"Okay. Give me the dress and you go and get the food."

"Okay. Meet you back around here?"

"Sure."

......

I buy the dress for Hayley just as she is coming back into the shop with the food.

"LOUIS!" She yells at me.

"Yes?"

"You didn't have to buy that for me."

"Yes I did. Now lets get back home."

Comments

Im Sorry but please update, what does simon advise?
iloveeveryone iloveeveryone
7/23/13
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iloveeveryone iloveeveryone
7/22/13
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Amazing Story!! Please keep updating
Directioner5674 Directioner5674
7/21/13