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CRAZY WORLD(On Hold)

Chapter Twenty-Five

Victoria's P.O.V

It has been a couple of hours since me and Louis showed up at Liam's house. Cheri is still unconscious and hasn't moved at all. She is still breathing that's all we know, she possible might be in a coma. I really pray that she opens her eyes, because I can't live without her she is my best friend. I got up from my spot on the couch and walked over to where we set Cheri down. I knelt down next to her and grabbed ahold of her hand, I was gripping it tightly,

"Cheri, I know you can hear me. Can you please wake up; I need you right now, I need to know you are okay." I said as tears started to form in my eyes, I don't wipe them away because the will just cause more to fall.

There was no response at all no movement, and she didn't grip my hand at all. This cause for my throat to make a funny noise because I was trying to choke back the tears, but I finally let then fall. I can't believe my best friend might not ever wake up again. We will never have our late nights where we had to sneak out without her parents finding out. We won't be able to stay alive together forever. If only I went to find Cheri when I had that funny feeling, I could have saved her. If I went with my gut I would be laughing with Cheri right now over something that wasn't even funny.

A year rolled down my cheek, I shut my eyes closed tight trying to stop them from falling but it was no use years just kept falling. I looked down and noticed that a tear fell on Cheri's hand. I gently wiped it away with my thumb, with that I felt something grip my hand. And I looked up to see Cheri's eyes opened

Notes

Woooohhoooo Cheri is alive!!!!


XxBreanne

Comments

I like the new chapter and how Louis was so understanding
XxNaalaxX XxNaalaxX
11/26/13
@That'srightI'mThia!
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XxNaalaxX XxNaalaxX
11/18/13
We'll try :-) @XxNaalaxX
Omg! This is so amazing I luv it so much! Please update soon? :)
XxNaalaxX XxNaalaxX
11/18/13
Thank you! @XxNiall's PrincessxX