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Hate Breaks Us Apart

Doug

Louis's POV:

I knew where we had to take the shoe. I had a friend around here. Doug Anderson. He was a total tech nerd. If the shoe had finger prints, he would be able to tell whose they were. I had never wished for someone else to have touched Amandas shoe more than now.

Well thats a weird thought. It is true!

Amandas POV:

My heart pounded. "So Amanda. Good to see you again. NOT!" Yelled the voice, and I heard someone else snickering. Like what? "Who are you!" I called out, squinting into the darkness around me.

"Oh you know me, but I don't belive you've met my assistant." Came the voice. "Whoa whoa. Assistant?" Came a slightly higher voice. "Yes Makenzie. Assistant." Replied the first voice. I held in a laugh. They were bickering like children.

"Why are you the leader!" Whined the voice I guess was Makenzie. "Because the plan is made for me!" Explained the first voice. "C'mon Susan." Whined Makenzie. Susan sighed. "Fine. My coworker Makenzie." Sighed Susan.

"I recognize your voice." I called out, trying to sound brave. Visions of guns, and all the stuff I had gone through playing in my head. I was going to need some serious therapy after this. If I got out that is.

"You should. I've met you before." Said Susan in a snotty voice. Then I heard the clicking of heels on cement. Light flooded the room hurting my eyes. At first I could see nothing, blinded by the light.

When my eyes adjusted I saw the two girls standing in the corner. Twins. I recognized the one on the left. "Hello Amanda." She sneered. I gulped. This was the girl I had found sleeping with Louis.

Louis's POV:

"DOUG!!!!" I yelled, pounding on the door. The others watched me curiously. Non of them had ever met Doug. It was me, Liam, Harry, and Riley. Zayn stayed at the hostpital with Niall and Macey. Perrie was taking Jade home.

The door swung open. Now I know when you hear computer geek you think obese nerd. Well....Doug isn't. He actually works out regularly. On the contrary, Doug is tall, muscular, and quite the ladies man I must say.

"Louis?" He asked, confused. I hadnt seen him in awhile. "Hey! I need your help." I declared, holding up the shoe. "Um...come in." He said, confused why I was holding a woman's shoe probably.

I didnt have time to explain though. With every passing minute, I had no idea where Amanda was. "I need to you identify the finger prints on here. No questions asked. We don't have much time." I told him.

He nodded, and slipped on rubber gloves. Laying the shoes under a scanner, he began rapidly typing. At first, my picture appeared on the screen followed by info on me.

"Allergic to." Laughed Harry, but I cut him off before anyone heard. "Moving on." I called to Doug, blocking the screen. Next came Amandas picture and information. A lump formed in my throat, I missed her.

"Anyone else?" I asked. He continued typing. Suddenly the screen showed a picture of an old man. "Mr. Andrew Walker." Read Doug. I saw he was living in Atlanta Georgia. "Thanks Doug! Could you print this out?" I asked.

I had no idea why Andrew Walker took Amanda. This all seemed weird. Doug handed me a sheet, and we raced out the door. Hopefully this guy knew something about Amanda.

We got outside, and suddenly there was a screech! "THERE YOU ARE!" Yelled a voice, and I saw the fan from the bathroom heading over. "Thought you could ditch me eh?" She asked, laughing.

We all stared at her. How had she found us? That wasnt important. "Listen.....we really have to go." I said, and hurried the others for the car. "Wait!!!" She cried, following us.

"Please take me with you! These creepy guys followed me here, and I don't want to walk alone." She cried, on the verge of tears. "Guys? Where?" I asked. She pointed, and I saw Jay and Max.

"They're supposed to be in jail." Whispered Harry. I nodded. We stood frozen. Then Max saw us looking, and the two started over. Even from here I could see their guns.

Notes

Hey:). Sorry this chapter is coming late and is kind of horrible. I still don't feel the best, so I did the best I could:). Thanks to all the people playing my new charcters!! I will mention you on the next chapters note, but I forgot to look up your screen names:p.

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Comments

Update? Like now? I neeeeeed to know what happens next!! I neeeeeed too!

@Harry_Louis_Niall_Liam_Zayn
Aw thank you so much(:

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6/16/14

I'm soooo happy you are going to start updating again!! This is absolutely one of my favorite stories on this site!! :) :D

luv u so much as an author.
OMG!!!!!! Update please!!!!!