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Hate Breaks Us Apart

What happened in the room?

Amanda's POV:

I sobbed into Riley's shoulder. Niall was my best friend and now he...he was....NO! I had to stay positive! He wouldn't die! He would beat the odds! My little Nialler was a fighter.

When my sobs slowed, I pulled back. I was too exhausted to cry anymore. "Guys. I think you need to tell her what you told me." Said Riley after a bit. "What?" I asked curious. Zayn turned to me and said,"do you want to know what happened in the room?"

I was shocked. I realized I had seen the result, but not heard what had caused it. I nodded slowly, and Liam moved over and say on the other side of me. "Ok. Here it goes." He sighed.

Liam's POV:

We could see Nathan growing angrier, but couldn't get Zayn to stop. What was he trying at? Nathan had his gun pointed at Zayn, ready to shoot, when the door banged open. Suprised, Nathan spun around, knocking Zayn in the face with the gun and accidentally pulling the trigger.

The shot filled the room, and Niall made a weird scream. We turned, and saw blood pouring from his stomach, his head slumped over. "NIALL!!!!" I screamed. Probably from his training, the officer shot Nathan in the chest.

His eyes rolled up, and he crumpled to the floor. Tom fired at the officer. The officer staggered backwards, and pulled the trigger at Tom. It knocked the gun from his hand, and he fell to the ground clutching his hand. His gun firing once it hit the ground.

This shot hit the wall, and the bullet stuck in the thick wall. Te police officer fell against the wall, clutching his side and his face crumpled in pain. "Niall!" I yelled, but he didnt stir.

"NIALL!!!!!" I screamed, and Harry began to cry. Zayn lost control, thrashing around. He had always protected Niall. And now he had sat by and watched him get shot.

I heard another voice scream, and saw a stunned Amanda in the doorway, taking in the blood covered floor. She saw Nathan soaked in a puddle of his own blood. The police officer in the corner, fidgeting in pain, Niall unmoving, and Tom in the corner.

Then it hit me. Not all of us would get out of this room alive. I had been a lucky one. 3 guns in the room, and I was unharmed. Not even a scratch. I looked over at Niall, and felt guilty.

He was so young. Younger than me anyway. He didnt have this coming. Non of us did. But it happened. Tears poured down my face realizing that Niall may not survive.

His laugh brightened out lives. He was silly like Lou, but not so out of control. He was our little Nialler. At that moment I swore I would never boss him around again. If only he could survive.

Notes

Oh my gosh I was like crying writing this chapter. (Im a Niall girl). Ok. Anyway please continue to vote on sequel or continue, and comment rate and subscribe. At least one more update tonight! Possibly two. We shall see:)

Comments

Update? Like now? I neeeeeed to know what happens next!! I neeeeeed too!

@Harry_Louis_Niall_Liam_Zayn
Aw thank you so much(:

FoodAddict!! FoodAddict!!
6/16/14

I'm soooo happy you are going to start updating again!! This is absolutely one of my favorite stories on this site!! :) :D

luv u so much as an author.
OMG!!!!!! Update please!!!!!