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Hate Breaks Us Apart

Im tired of feeling alone

Louis's POV:

Im not exactly sure what's going on around me. Im in a blin haze. I hear screaming. Not sure if its my own. All i see is blurry, but I can feel arms around me. I think its Niall, but Im not sure.

Then I lose it. "AMANDA!!!" I scream, breaking free from the arms, and stumbling through the crowd. My vision is regained, but I am extremely unbalanced. "Louis!" Calls Niall frantically.

I get close to the shore and am about to dive in when someone grabs my arm. I turn to see a complete stranger with jet black hair staring at me. "Louis. She'll be ok." He said. It wasnt strange to me that someone knew me. That happened all the time. It was strange that he thought he knew what would happen.

I brushed his arm off me, and turned back to see Amanda getting hauled out. There was blood. Lots of blood. I felt dizzy. The world was spinning. Then I blacked out.

Nialls POV:

Louis was on a rampage. I had to stop him before he did something rash! I spotted him looking at someone weirdly. That's when I noticed they were bringing Amanda out. To my horror Louis turned. He had never been good with blood, and passed out.

I rushed to him, to find a stranger holding him up. "Thank you." I said, and te stranger stared up at me. His eyes seemed to be staring into my sole. I shook it off, and took Louis from the stranger.

Paramedics had noticed Louiss fall, and swarmed. Well te ones who werent loading up Amanda. He was taken from me, and brought into one of the many ambulances on the scene. I rushed after the paramedics.

"Wait!!!" I yelled, shoving past people frantically. Finally one came over to me and said "We will be taking him to the hostpital on 2nd street." Before rudely leaving me. Well I guess they did have to hurry.

Borh Ambulances sped away, and the reporters were going crazy. What one said really ticked me off. "After the fall we have word that Louis Tomlinson from One Direction had been spotted on the scene. This means that we were in the presence of a celebrity!!!!"

I lost it. They were completely neglecting the fact that someone might die! Even though Amanda was Louiss wife, all they cared about was Louis. I rushed over to the guy, and grabbed the microphone away.

"Yes. Louis was here. But you know what else? His wife might die! Yes. Shes the one who fell. And all you care about is Louis was here. You people disgust me." I yelled, shoved the microphone back at the reporter, and stormed away.

Somehow in the madness I found Harry and Riley. Riley was sobbing, and Harry was crying. He was holding tightly to her, I sighed. I had never had a relationship like that. I know it wasnt the time or place to think about this, but I couldn't help it.

"We need to go! Louis's on the way to the hostpital too!" I declared, stalking off through the crowd. They followed me, not saying a word. They could tell I was pisst. We climbed into a cab, and sped off through the streets.

Back in a waiting room. I hated this. We sat in te hard chairs, just staring at the ground. Harry cleared his thoat and said,"We should probably call people." I sighed, and got to my feet.

"Ill call the boys." I suggested. They picked up on the 2nd ring. "We saw the news!" Exclaimed Liam. "I think you should come down here." I said sadly. I hated to do this to Macy, but if Amanda was going to die she needed to say goodbye.

We talked shortly, but the doctor came out and I hung up. "Amanda Tomlinson." He called out, and we stood. He walked over looking sad. My mind raced. He began to speak.

"Amanda had experienced extreme injuries. She had broken 3 ribs, her left arm, and has been paralyzed from the waist down." He reported. I couldn't believe Amanda would never walk again.

"There's more." He said. We looked up at him wondering what else could go wrong. "She had suffered severe head injuries so even if she does make it, there's no telling what could go wrong."

I realized with a pang. She already couldn't talk. Could things et worse?

Notes

Hey! Sorry this chapter sucks, but Im a little rusty:). Hope you like it, and the next chapter will be better:) please comment rate and subscribe:). My goal is to get this story under "Popular" :D

Comments

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