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surviving the bite

chapter 73

Harry’s p.o.v
I felt Zayn pull me up from the ground drapping my arm over his shoulder whilst holding me up, I managed to make out the outline of the house as he walked foward. As we walked in the house Liam shouted to Zayn.
“hey Zayn do you know where my laptop is I’ve been looking everywhere and oh my god what happened?” Liam shouted as he walked into the room. Zayn lay me on the settee and I closed my eyes.
“I don’t know he just collapsed out of nowhere” Zayn said.
“get in contact with Rachel, Niall or Louis something might be off” Liam said rushing around the room trying to find his phone.
“Harry how you doing?” Zayn asked.
“my head feels like it’s being stabbed by a thousand needles” I said shakily.
“I can’t get in contact with Niall try Louis or Rachel” Liam said i pulled out my phone and clicked on Louis name to call him but it went straight no voice mail.
“Louis isn’t picking up either” I gulped.
“I’ll try Rachel” Liam said and after a few seconds he put his phone down it’s not even ringing it’s just going straight to voice mail meaning their phones are either off or broken” Liam said.
“meaning?” I asked.
“ I don’t know” Liam said.
Louis p.o.v
I shouted in pain as the pain was still running through my head.
“stop... just stop!” I shouted through gritted teeth.
“and why should i?” she questioned.
“because if you kill me your going to kill your little plan!” I snapped.
“stop it right now!” the man said and the pain stopped through my head, I propped myself up against the wall before slipping down it.
“take him somewhere else we need him alive” he said, two vampires came in and grabbed my arms before the two of them took my arms and started to drag me, I was too drained to even fight back so I went limp in their arms, as I looked back at Rachel and Niall I saw they were both ready to snap.
Arrived in a plain room that had a single bed and very little furniture but they locked the door as they left, as I looked around the room I realised that the room was like a shoe box it was very small and I could barely take 5 steps.
Niall’s p.o.v
“what do you want with Harry!” isnapped.
“something” he replied.
“I know that now tell me what you want with him” I growled.
“wow the little leprechaun has found his voice well done” he said sarcastically rolling his eyes. Before I knew it I managed to pin him to the wall before the girl muttered some more words and I felt a pain in my head which made me fall to the floor, my guess it’s the same thing she did to Louis. I looked over at Rachel and she was behind the girl and she grabbed her head and snapped it straight off releasing me from the pain.
“what did you, you’re going to pay!” the man roared.
“shit” I mumbled I grabbed Rachel’s arm and we ran through the twisted corridors.
“we need Louis” Rachel said stopping me from running.
“where did they take him?” I aksed.
“I’m not sure” Rachel said.
“you take right I’ll take the left if you don’t find him meet me outside ok” I said.
“ok, but be careful Ni” she said.
“don’t worry I’ll be fine just promise me you won’t get hurt and promise me that you will get out” I said.
“i can’t promise that but I can promise you that I love you” she smiled.
“I love you too please don’t get hurt” I said.
“I won’t remember it takes a lot to take me down” she laughed.
“I know it does “ I said we both leant in our lips moving perfectly in sync until she pulled away.
“we don’t have time for this, I’ll meet you outside soon” she said as she ran off, I sighed as I ran through the corridor coming across the first door which was locked, I looked around the corridor trying to find something to break the door down with until I forgot I could just kick it down, as the door broke in two a group of five vampires stood up from their original positions looking at me as if I was the prey, any second they looked like they would kill me.
I predicted right as I was pinned to the wall I pushed him off of me as I ripped the table leg off and stabbed it through his heart. I did the same thing grabbing two more table legs and taking them in both hands.
“who’s next” I smirked as I stood my ground.
Rachel’s p.o.v
I ran up the corridor until I came by five rooms which could possibly have Louis in them. I tried the first room but the door was locked. I put my ear against the door and focused my hearing so it would be at it’s maximum hearing but I couldn’t hear anything.
“chase is a fool to have let those vampires in here “ a voice said as it got closer.
“it’s better them being in here being held captive instead of them out in the street where they can stop everything instantly” someone else said. I quickly hid around the closest corner and stood as still as I could as two people one vampire one werewolf walked past.
I’m doing this the hard way why didn’t I just listened out for Louis thoughts, I thought to myself, I closed my eyes as I listened out for any sign of Louis’ thoughts. But with no use.
“hey you!” a man shouted , I turned around to find it was one of those werewolves from that pack that kidnapped Zayn.
“hey remember when you kidnapped Zayn” I said as he got closer.
“Zayn?” he questioned.
“your part of Issac’s pack” I said.
“was now he isn’t the alpha anymore, Chase is” he said he stepped foward growling . I ran through the corridors away from the corridor I was in trying to find my way out with a werewolf chasing me “this couldn’t get any better” I mumbled under my breath.
Niall’s p.o.v
I wiped the blood off my hands as I looked at the mess I had made with killing so I walked out, I need to find Louis but I can’t just keep smashing the doors down, there will be more vampires inside. I stood in the middle of the corridor as I shut my eyes and I focused on my senses trying to focus one onto Louis scent or to hear him.
After a few minutes I managed to hear a small mumbling sound.
“Louis?” I called out.
“niall?” he questioned.
“you can hear me?” I questioned.
“yes Niall I can hear you where the hell are you?” he said.
“in the corridor which room are you in?” I asked.
“the last one I think” he said I kicked down the last door and there sat Louis on the floor.
“Louis why didn’t you kick the door down?” I asked.
“I haven’t got the strength, I need blood whatever that witch did she managed to drain me of all of my energy and I need blood remember Perrie said I would need blood more” Louis said.
“come on let’s go” I said I held Louis up and took him out into the corridor.
“Niall run” Rachel shouted. I turned around to come face to face with a wolf which knocked me to the ground Louis fell to the side whilst I was dragged down the corridor where I struggled with all of my strength to keep the werewolf from ripping my throat out.


i finally managed to have some time to write as i have actually had nothing to do tonight so here is a chapter and i hope you enjoy i will hopefully get to update from next week onwards since this week i have my english to focus on but the week after is my last week at school before christmas meaning i should have plenty of time to update :)


I love it

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@Harry's kitty kat
Thats what i have named it and i have posted the first chapter i would update but im at school unfortantly haha

Emmaaaa Emmaaaa

I think immortal life sounds really good!! <3

@Harry's kitty kat
aw i'm happy i'm making another one it's fun writing i've always had a passion for writing i suspose and aw i'm glad it is your favourite fanfic i literally looked back at the begining of the first story and i can tell that it's improved like my writing was shit at the beginning haha i still don't know what to call the next one i have an idea and it's immortal life but i'm not sure any ideas? <3

Emmaaaa Emmaaaa

Ahahaha I'm so glad you're making another story and yes, your really good!!! This is my favourite fanfic <3