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surviving the bite

Chapter 50

Niall’s p.o.v
We went back to the hotel to see Liam and Ally sitting on the settee.
“Hey Li are you ok?” I asked.
“I’m fine how have you been today with the blood thing?” he said.
“He almost lost control in an interview” Louis said.
“Niall you need to be careful” Liam said.
“I know it’s just extremely hard you won’t understand unless you become a vampire, blood is seriously the best thing ever and it’s just so hard to control yourself like think of a food that you love so much and you could eat nonstop well bloods like that but other food isn’t anything compare to that so you will eat it and then you will get hungry and crave something and what you crave is your favourite food and you won’t be able to do anything until you get it and think every minute you become more and more hungry until the point where you can’t take it anymore and you need to eat but the thing is all the time this is happening all I can smell is blood so it’s hard to focus on doing something with all of it around” I said.
“At least you controlled yourself this morning otherwise I would be dead” he said.
“I didn’t Louis managed to do something to help me” I said everyone in the room turned and faced Louis.
“What?” he asked.
“What did you do to help Niall?” Harry asked.
“well you see I have this cool power called a force field and I realized that I can put a force field in front of someone to block certain things right and since I can do this I put on around Niall and It blocked out your smell and that’s what he ended up doing during an interview so if you watch that interview you will see I’m not interacting as much as I’m trying to keep my force field up to stop Niall from killing someone in the audience or for him losing control” Louis said.
“Wait you can do that?” Rachel said.
“Yeah I can” I said.
“I want to test it.” Rachel said.
“Anyone willing to bleed?” Louis said.
“What about Niall?” Harry said.
“He can do it with Rachel” Louis said.
“I’ll do it” El said Louis smiled and he stood El next to him he kissed her forehead.
“I’ll heal you with a bit of blood afterwards ok?” Louis said.
“Louis it’s a small cut it isn’t going to kill me” El said Louis held the knife over the palm of her hand and slit it the smell of blood quickly filled my nostrils and I felt my fangs come out and my eyes turn red but the smell soon disappeared.
“This is amazing Lou you could really held Niall with this” Rachel said.
“That is pretty awesome” Harry said.
“Wait is it working on you I was only focusing it on Rachel and Niall?” Louis said.
“Yeah you need to still practise on who you’re aiming it towards” Harry said.
“Or maybe I don’t trust you I mean you did kill El once” Louis said.
“That was the scariest 20 minutes of my life!” Harry said.
“Your lucky she’s alive otherwise I would have killed you” Louis said.
“Wait when will I get my power?” Harry asked.
“I think it’s anytime from now onwards you might show signs of it developing because Louis was just weird and showed up out of the blue” Rachel said.
“So did yours develop slowly or was it like Louis?” Harry asked.
“mine was slowish it was on, off one minute I would hear some random persons voice then it would go and it continued like that for a few weeks until I had everyone’s voices scrambling around my mind nonstop and then I learned to control it and only focus on certain people” Rachel said.
“So what could my ability be?” Harry asked.
“Anything it really depends on what you were like as a human” Rachel said.
“So what does it mean if Louis has force fields?” Liam said.
“He was mischievous so he got this so he could be very annoying, I’m joking I’m not sure what It means sometimes it can reflect your human personality others can just be chance” Rachel said.
“yours reflected you, you were very quiet and selective you kept to yourself so basically you got the power of mind reading to be more open like a book and to understand people and make you become more confident since you could read someone’s mind and connect with them instantly” I said.
“I guess your right” Rachel said.
“anyway we need to think about this the vampire is back in his normal body what are we going to do?” Liam said.
“kill him” Louis said.
“we already knew that I mean how last time Niall got killed well changed but at the same time killed” Liam said.
“that’s why your not going to be there Liam” Harry said.
“no I’m going I’m not letting you guys kill him without me” Liam said.
“we need Liam he’s a hunter now remember him and Emma together will be a great team we need them both” Rachel said.
“fine but Liam I swear to god if you get turned into a vampire or worse killed I will kill you!” Louis said.
“how are you going to kill me if I’m already dead?” Liam said.
“I’ll bring you back and kill you!” Louis said.
“but you don’t want me dead so your plan is an epic fail” Liam said.
“we need to get the vampire near us like out on the street like so it looks like someone is defenceless and then we can attack” Rachel said.
“but didn’t he have all those minions” Zayn said.
“he did they saw us kill them and the once that weren’t killed took off so he must have no one” Rachel said.
“but who are we going to have to lure him out?” I asked.
“Liam he’s the only human it’s the only way it will work I’m pretty sure he wants Liam now I mean he has 3/5s of One Direction as vampires he only needs Liam and Zayn but Zayn is a werewolf so it won’t work so it just leaves Liam” Rachel said.
“when are we going to do it?” Liam asked.
“the sooner the better” Rachel said.


hello everyone i just want to say thank you to a few people who have been commenting and saying how much you love the story it means a lot to hear things like that and i do my best to answer the comments but my account on HarryStylesFanFiction isn't working and i can't access it meaning i don't get notifications saying who's commented from that website so sorry about that.
anyway's I'm wondering what do you guys want after this story would you like another book or should i stop the series like seriously what would you guys like just comment and i'll have a look and decide what to do.


I love it

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@Harry's kitty kat
Thats what i have named it and i have posted the first chapter i would update but im at school unfortantly haha

Emmaaaa Emmaaaa

I think immortal life sounds really good!! <3

@Harry's kitty kat
aw i'm happy i'm making another one it's fun writing i've always had a passion for writing i suspose and aw i'm glad it is your favourite fanfic i literally looked back at the begining of the first story and i can tell that it's improved like my writing was shit at the beginning haha i still don't know what to call the next one i have an idea and it's immortal life but i'm not sure any ideas? <3

Emmaaaa Emmaaaa

Ahahaha I'm so glad you're making another story and yes, your really good!!! This is my favourite fanfic <3