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surviving the bite

chapter 37

Rachel’s p.o.v
“so you can eat now and not be suspicious, now you just need to control the thirst and control your abilities since your still not used to stopping or starting running” I said.
“I guess so, but really in this time we can’t really be worrying about me we need to worry about the vampire I mean what happens if say he gets into your mind or Louis or Liam’s or any of the girls.” Niall said.
“we will figure it out don’t worry.” Liam said patting his back Niall took a breath in that he didn’t need and his eyes turned red, but he shook his head and shut his eyes and re-opened them and they were back to blue and he sighed.
“you’re getting the hang of it” Louis said.
“it’s too hard though.” Niall said.
“well it’s possible I mean we all did it and so can you” Harry said Zayn came back into the room and sat down on one of the settees.
“hey Zayn what did she say?” I asked.
“she said she will try and find out by asking that guy she’s training with or her grandma but we may have no luck” he sighed then he looked up and realized that Niall was still standing by the bench and there was a half eating chocolate bar.
“did you eat that Niall?” Zayn asked.
“yeah I did.” Niall replied.
“ok then” Zayn said and he went back to his phone.
“you’re not curious into how I ate it and didn’t throw up” Niall asked.
“nope I would have heard you throw up so you ate it and i’m guessing it was just part of the process of getting used to being a vampire” Zayn said.
“ok enough with this we need to figure out how to stop the vampire getting into our minds.” I said.
“why do we need to do that?” Liam asked.
“if he gets into one of our minds then that’s it he could make yourself kill yourself.” I said.
“ok I’m with Rach we need to stop that.” Liam said suddenly nervous.
“what about vervain could that stop him getting into our minds I mean it stops vampires from messing with us.” Zayn said.
“but your supernatural Zayn he can’t get into your mind that way it just won’t do anything so we are stuck” I said.
“I have an idea, but I’m not sure at how well this will work.” Louis said.
“what is it?” Harry asked.
“I could maybe try to put force fields around us, I mean it stops anything getting in so maybe it will stop him getting into our minds.” Louis said.
“you can’t do that Lou, you won’t be able to hold them for that long.” Harry said.
“I can do it I mean they are going to be smallish so it might work or maybe whatever arena we are playing at I could put a field over the arena making sure people can get out of course.” Louis said.
“but once your force field is up there’s no way of getting out it simply keeps someone in or someone out of it.” I pointed out.
“well let’s try this, Harry come on” Louis said getting into the middle of the floor.
“no way! No!, No!, No I am not doing that you almost killed me last time!” Harry protested.
“well if it wasn’t for me nocking you out we would never have knew about the vampire so think yourself lucky now come on and help.” Louis said.
“no I’m not going to be killed!” Harry shouted.
“I’m not going to kill you, it’s a simple little test it will be fine nothing will happen.” Louis said.
“no last time you said I wouldn’t get hurt and I did so no I don’t trust you” Harry argued.
“seriously you don’t trust me , you have known me for three years.” Louis said.
“still you didn’t tell me about you being a vampire I did completely trust you” Harry started to say but Louis butted in.
“wait so what you’re not going to trust me now because I didn’t tell you about the biggest, scariest change in my life, I had to kill people if I told you when you were human you would have freaked out probably left the band and did something crazy!” Louis shouted.
“that’s not true I mean you were my best friend and still are I mean it’s not that I don’t trust you it’s just, I don’t know I mean what happens if something goes wrong again and I actually get killed.” Harry said.
“you won’t” Louis said.
“Louis, Harry just calm it, I’ll do it” Liam said.
“thank you Liam, right I’m going to try something and I want you to walk towards the force field you might see where the bubble is, but just walk against it.” Louis said.
“alright , but what’s this going to prove?” Liam said he stepped in front of Louis and Louis focused.
“Alright Liam walk against it.” Louis said Liam did as told but bounced into the middle of the bubble on his butt.
“what was that meant to prove?” Liam asked slightly annoyed.
“sorry, just try again please” Louis said.
“alright.” Liam said he tried it again and he put his hand out to touch the bubble and his hand went through but the rest of his body bounced back to the middle.
“for fuck sake” Louis muttered.
“go on Lou try it again, just focus.” I said
“try again” Louis said Liam tried again and he got half of his body out then he bounced back and he looked at his hand and realized there was blood.
“Niall needs to go” Liam said I turned to face Niall and he his eyes turned red and his fangs were out and he started to charge towards the bubble when he hit it he bounced back and Louis fell to the floor knocking his concentration I ran over to Niall and tried to pin him back but he was too strong as the hunger took over his mind and motions. Harry came next to me and helped me pin him.
“are you alright to hold him whilst I get a blood bag?” I asked Harry was holding Niall down with all his strength but Niall wasn’t going to have it and Harry shook his head.” Liam, Zayn someone just get a blood bag from the fridge.” I shouted as Niall frantically thrashed in our grip against the wall. Zayn came over and he took the lid off putting it up to Niall’s mouth and Niall bit Zayn and Zayn dropped the bag which I caught and put up to Niall’s mouth and he soon calmed down.
“what just happened?” he questioned.
“you went on a blood frenzy and took a bite out of Zayn, oh my god Zayn!” I shouted I dropped Niall and checked Zayn who collapsed on the floor.
“Zayn is it deep?” I asked.
“I can feel the venom spreading through my body, but my wolf side is fighting it.” He whimpered.


ok i'm so so so so sorry about the delayed update i would be lying if i said i had writers block i just have been trying to get into a routine for school this was my second week back so i'm more in a routine but as well i've been a bit ill so i have been getting in from school and i've just been so tired and i haven't been able to write and i also kept forgetting to write but i will try to get back into a routine for writing i'm so sorry about not updating!
@Emmaaaaa :)


I love it

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@Harry's kitty kat
Thats what i have named it and i have posted the first chapter i would update but im at school unfortantly haha

Emmaaaa Emmaaaa

I think immortal life sounds really good!! <3

@Harry's kitty kat
aw i'm happy i'm making another one it's fun writing i've always had a passion for writing i suspose and aw i'm glad it is your favourite fanfic i literally looked back at the begining of the first story and i can tell that it's improved like my writing was shit at the beginning haha i still don't know what to call the next one i have an idea and it's immortal life but i'm not sure any ideas? <3

Emmaaaa Emmaaaa

Ahahaha I'm so glad you're making another story and yes, your really good!!! This is my favourite fanfic <3