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surviving the bite

chapter 14

Niall's p.o.v
She walked out and the room literally lit up when she walked into the room. There's no words to describe how beautiful she is, I mean her dress looks perfect on her, we walked out of the hotel room.
"You look stunning Rach." I said as we sat in the limo.
"You already told me that." she said laughing.
"Well would my lady like a glass of champagne" I asked in a old fashioned tone.
"Well yes Mr Horan I would love a glass of champagne and if you don't mind me asking where are you taking me?" she asked. I poured her a glass of champagne and poured a little bit of blood making the champagne turn a golden orange colour.
"Ah my darling I would tell you but wouldn't that ruin the surprise?" Niall chuckled sipping his champagne
"Niall please tell me please." Rachel said. I shook my head grinning.
Rachel’s p.o.v
We shortly arrived to a fancy restaurant which was not quite modern but wasn't too old. It looked perfect as we walked through the doors. It was huge inside. There were romantic lights all over the walls and ceiling. On each table there were small candle and small booths at the end. We were lead to our little booth at the end by our waitress. Whilst walking through I could hear live music, it was so elegant and beautiful, and our table was in the perfect spot. It was private but it also had a great few of the stage.
"Niall this is perfect!" I exclaimed looking at our table.
"Only the best for you Rachael" he smiled. He pulled out my chair for me and I sat down smiling
We ordered our food and talked about nothing until the waitress brought our food. I saw her looking Niall up and down and biting her lip.
"Anything else I can get you" She asked Niall and it seemed she was talking about more than food.
"No thanks. Rachael do you want anything?" Niall said. The waitress frowned as she was forced to look away from Niall. I shook my head nervously. The waitress walked away after eyeing Niall a few more times.
"Niall she was totally checking you out" I whispered.
"I couldn't tell I was too busy checking you out Rach" He replied and I blushed.
"I love it when you blush." Niall said as he stroked my cheek.
"And I love it when you're you." I replied. We both leant in and our lips crashed together. I realised how much I have missed Niall's lips, even though it hasn't been long since I last kissed them but there is something that makes me not able to stop craving him.
"Why don't we go home now?" Niall said. My smile faded but I agreed as he lead me out of the restraunt and to the limo.
Niall opened my door and I stepped in. The whole drive I looked out the window. i I really didn't want this evening to end. I saw the turn off to the hotel but we drove straight passed it.
"Um, Ni we drove straight pass the turn off." I said
"Don't worry princess we are taking a longer route home." he answered and I him smirk. What has this boy got planned?
The entire drive I begged for him to tell me where we're going but he kept shaking his head. Then he put a blindfold on me.
"Niall please tell me!" I begged.
"Nope!" He replied and I knew he was smiling even though I had a blindfold on.
He guided me along except I kept tripping over. Then he picked me up and carried me in his arms. I could smell his cologne and I snuggled into his chest. He placed me down gently and removed the blindfold
The first thing I saw was lots of string lights woven through the trees over a tent that was also covered in these lights. Next to the tent was a small camp fire with a blanket on the floor and I wandered around the small area and looked into the tent. There were a few more lights but there were 3 quilts 2 blankets and a whole bunch of pillows. It looked so cozy and I can't wait to lie in there with Niall. I turn around to see Niall smiling nervously.
"Do you like it?" he said.
"Are you seriously asking? I don't like it I absolutely love it, almost as much as you." I said pulling him in for a kiss.
"I want to show you something." Niall said leading me over to the floor next to the camp fire and he pulled out his guitar and he sat down and patted the spot next to him for me to join.
Niall sang little things except he changed the lyrics so they were all about me.
Niall finished the song and I was in tears at how beautiful it was. I have always loved Niall's voice it sounds like an angel singing.
"Oh my gods Rach are you ok." Niall said wiping my tears away.
"yeah I’m fine it's just i love you so much Niall that song it was perfect i don't even know how you managed to do that i mean you changed them, i mean you changed them about me, you’re the most perfect person in the world." i said and i kissed the kiss was full of love and passion, we pulled away after a few minutes.
"i can't take all the credit the boy's helped out as well and I’m not the most perfect person in the world." Niall said.
"but i bet you did most of the work and Niall your flaws are what make you perfect i can't point any out by the way." i said.
"me and Louis wrote most of it and no i can't be the most perfect person ever because you are." he said making me look him in the eyes. I smiled as I saw his eyes sparkle under the moon light. I tilted my head slightly as I stroked his cheek. He started to lean in and I followed and our kiss lasted for a long time I don’t even know how long but since we don’t need to breathe we could last forever.
“so do you forgive me for earlier? Niall said.
“of course I do since you went through a whole lot of trouble to get this perfect, plus I knew you didn’t mean it I mean you have only been a vampire for 2 days and already you have been under a whole lot of strength an outburst like that is normal.” I said.
“but you still didn’t deserve it.” Niall said.
“but you’re doing brilliantly at this, you’re so strong you will get through this.” I said he let a small smile creep on his lips. “now can we please lie in the tent it looks so comfy?”
“of course we can.” He said I turned around to walk into the tent but I was swept of my feet and into Niall’s arms I looked up at him you could see him glowing from the moon I snuggled into his chest.
“don’t get yourself comfy yet.” Niall said.
“it doesn’t take much to get comfy in your arms.” I said Niall tripped over the tents edge and we both fell into the tent we both looked at each other and laughed.
“are you ok?” he said pushing my hair out of my face.
“of course I am.” I said I flipped myself over so I was on my side and snuggling into Niall’s chest I can honestly say I never ever want this to end I want to be with Niall forever I honestly don’t think I could live without him.


enjoy this chapter it was wrote by the both of us :)
@Liam Payne is mine



I love it

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@Harry's kitty kat
Thats what i have named it and i have posted the first chapter i would update but im at school unfortantly haha

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I think immortal life sounds really good!! <3

@Harry's kitty kat
aw i'm happy i'm making another one it's fun writing i've always had a passion for writing i suspose and aw i'm glad it is your favourite fanfic i literally looked back at the begining of the first story and i can tell that it's improved like my writing was shit at the beginning haha i still don't know what to call the next one i have an idea and it's immortal life but i'm not sure any ideas? <3

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Ahahaha I'm so glad you're making another story and yes, your really good!!! This is my favourite fanfic <3