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The Slut

Chapter 19

Sky's POV

" Alright c'mon guys. We're here," Louis shouts. We all jump up.

Harry grabs my hand and squeezes it, " No one finds out." I half smile at his words and quickly look away. Niall quickly got out the car and ran straight in. Zayn helpe me out along with Harry.

" C'mon," Harry wraps my arm in his. We walk into the building to see beauty all around us.

Pink, black, white, and purple strayers hanging around the room. We see a brunette on the dance floor practicing her dance with an older man. I know that man.

" Baby, look they're here," the older man says. The girl quickly spins around with a huge grin on her face.

My eyes widen and I freeze in place.

" OMG!!! This is really- what the fuck are you doig here?!" She shouts as she sees me walk in with the guys. I feel my face go red.

" Shut the fuck up Jasmine!" I yell back.

" Woah, woah, woah. Do you two know eachother?" Harry wraps his arm aroun my waist keeping me close.

" That's the bitch my brother dumped!" Jasmine yells.

" Ya because hes a man whore! Chris is a duck head! And you're a dumbass if you haven't realize that!!" I yell back!

" I heard my name!" A male's voice yells from a room to the far left.

" What the hell are you doing here?!" Chris yells, " Jass did you invite her?!" He snaps at her.

" No! She just showed up with them!" She yells back.

" Ok everyone needs to shut the fuck up! Stop the fucking yelling!!" Harry shouts.

I jump at his loud voice and end up in the arms of Zayn.

" You need to leave, goodbye. Security!" Jasmine snaps her fingers and points at me.

" Either she stays or we all go with her," Liam says.

" Ok bye!" Chris yells. Harry and Zayn grab my hand. Once we turn to leave Jasmine shouts to us,

" No! Please dont go! She can say, I dont care! Just dont come anywhere near me!"

We all smile. The boys head over to that room to the far left that Chris came out of.

" Sky! Darling! How are you?" Jasmine's mom comes running over to me with her arms wide.

" Hi," i say softly.

Notes

What do you think is gonna happen at the party?

feedback loves! Feedback=a chapter!!!

Comments

I've never been a fan of fanfiction myself, however, I was quite curious as to what fans write about their beloved boy band. I have to admit I find some of these stories to be amusing. I am a writer. It almost inspires me to write a fanfic. Then, I realize how much of a waste of time it is. That is for me. For you however, I believe you have a talent. I have to admit, as revolting as it is you really give me a clear image of the sex scenes. I would have to agree with the pizza girl. Your sex scenes aren't very realistic. I do realize that you probably won't see this. I suppose I am a bit mad to waste my time on a paragraph that you probably will never see. Still, I like to get my opinion out there. I have hopes, that one day, you will look back on this story, and see my comment. I believe that you have a talent. The plot is of something out of a novela. I would hate for you to waste such skills. You should consider writing to be a career path for you. It's a great passion, to create a whole world, that belongs to you. Anything you want to happen, will. I certainly hope that you do something with it. I can feel the passion in your words.

You certainly are creative with your sex scenes aren't you? Word of advice, it usually doesn't happen that fast. Good job though. Your stories really keep me on my toes.

@Harrys_wife1114
The guy they put for Chris is from an unpopular polish film that I love

@MysteryWriter

What do you mean?

Harrys_wife1114 Harrys_wife1114
4/29/14

Hey it's Dominik as Chris! <3