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Is This True Love or Have I Gone Mad?

Santa Monica Beach

I'm on my way to Santa Monica Beach with my family. The only thing is that since I'm nineteen, i pay for my own room while Mom, Dad, and Emma share a room. this is going to be fun.
I put in my headphones to listen to my favorite boyband, One Direction. We're going to be there soon (I realize), so i put my purse on my shoulder. I take out my ear buds and put my phone in my purse.
As we get to the 5-star hotel, there is a crowd. my dad and I smoosh through the crowd to the front desk.I get my room key and he gets his. We're on the fifth floor. I think some people heard where we are because I heard girls call us lucky. I wonder why.
I get to my door when i see people "sneaking" by every room trying to look through the peephole. I ignore it, they're probably looking for someone. i open the door and set everything down. a few minutes later, I hear knocking on my door. Who could that be, I open the door and look out to see a door down the hall open with someone's eyes looking at me. Ew. The next thing I see is the hotel manager.
He starts, "You forgot your phone."
"Oh, thanks, I must have dropped it." I say.
I close the door then put on my swimsuit. Our hotel isn't that far away from the beach. I put a shirt over my bikini then pull up some shorts. I put on sandal, and I'm out the door. I get to the beach where it's practically empty and take off my shorts, shirt, and flip-flops. I get out to the ocean and then the waves pick me up. Now it's too big. I start to drown.
"HELP! HELP!" I'm screaming. I close my eyes thinking this is the end, but wait, what is that I feel? It's strong hands carrying me out. I black out.
-Two Minutes Later-
I'm awake, but I don't open my eyes. I feel a pair of soft, gentle lips on mine, forcing air into my mouth . I open my eyes just barely. LOUIS TOMLINSON! He starts to get upthen he offers me a hand, I take it.
"Thank you." I say.
He replies back (now I can see the other four boys of One Direction), "You're welcome. Grab your stuff, I'll take you home, love."
"Why don't we all take her home?" I hear one of the boys say.
"Good idea." Louis says in reply.

Notes

Sorry for any mistakes this is my first time posting. I have like seven other stories, but i don't know if I should post them. Please tell me what you think. If you like it that fantastic, so please subscibe, comment, and rate I think it is. Sorry. And tell me if you would like my other stories. Thanks for reading!

Comments

@Chloeloves1D

Thank you so much for reading, I'm actually about half way done with the next chapter.

metomlinson metomlinson
8/6/14

I love this story update when you can!

Chloeloves1D Chloeloves1D
8/6/14

@lyrics.tell.my.story
i might not be able to up date for a bit because i have family staying with me starting today, and im going to have no privacy

metomlinson metomlinson
4/26/14

I'm still here please continue :)

broadway.bound broadway.bound
4/24/14

@LouisLady
with my next story, i will remain anonymous cuz the rating might be different, ill message the info tonight, ive been waiting for winter break to start. thnx

metomlinson metomlinson
12/27/13