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surviving the bite

chapter 67

Louis p.o.v
I looked over at Rachel who had no idea what to do and I guessed that Niall wouldn’t either.
“it really is pathetic you know your way of living come one we’re vampires we kill for a living so why not enjoy it come on Louis I know you enjoy the taste of the blood, wouldn’t you love to drink your pretty girl Eleanor dry I know you crave her blood Louis you don’t admit it but you do crave it. “ Harry smirked.
“I don’t want to drink her blood!” I snapped.
“of course you don’t I know you think about it 24/7 come on Lou I thought we were friends shouldn’t we enjoy the hunt, the blood and the kill together” Harry said.
“you’re not my friend your his inner vampire!” I said.
“I’m still a part of him he just keeps me hidden” Harry said.
“I don’t care” I said through gritted teeth.
“oh I know that look you want to hurt me but you don’t because well I’m Harry aren’t I” Harry said smugly.
“fuck off!” I shouted.
“oh am I getting inside your head... I am aren’t I this could be fun” Harry said circling me.
“you know I could just rip your heart out” Harry said he rushed over to me and put his hand through my chest and gripped my heart.
“Harry no!” Rachel shouted.
“just one rip and your dead” Harry said.
“come on Harry you’re in there somewhere you have to stop this” I begged his hand tightened on my heart I felt tears escape my eyes as the pain became so intense and I looked into his black soulless eyes. “please Harry you need to take control” I said I saw something flash in his eyes as a speck of green flashed but it turned black again.
*Louis keep going* Rachel mind messaged me.
“Harry come on remember our friendship our memories, the band come on you have to remember and take control” I said his eyes flashed again.
“Harry remember when we first met on x factor, when we got called back and put into the group, recording our first single, album our first tour remember when we moved in together the time I attempted to make a meal for us and I almost burned the house down. Just remember something and take control” I pleaded Harry’s eyes flashed repeatedly and he pulled his hand out of my chest and he gripped his head.
“stop, stop, stop!” Harry shouted.
“Harry remember when you became a vampire remember the times we did all the vampire stuff that no one could and it was just our secret and we helped each other out and had fun with this secret remember everything we’ve been through” I said Harry
Fell to the ground and he gripped his head before pouncing at me and pinning me against the wall putting his hand through my chest again gripping it tighter and I felt the pull on my heart making me gasp.
“Louis, oh my god!” Harry shouted he pulled his hand out of my chest and held me up as my legs gave way.
“you pick your times to come back” I laughed.
“don’t laugh I just almost killed you and ew I have your blood all over my hands.” He said.
“I’m happy you came back at this time though otherwise I would be dead.” I said and he hugged me.
“thanks for bringing me back” he said.
“how did it actually help?” I asked.
“it made my side become stronger again with all the memories and it made my side just take over but already I can feel that side wanting and trying to come back” Harry said.
“you can feel it?” I asked and he nodded.
“it feels aggressive and jealousy and just pure evil” he said.
“don’t worry we will get this sorted out” I said.
“but I don’t want to kill any of you” Harry cried as his legs give way and I gently placed him to the floor he gripped my shirt making me have to sit on the floor since I had no choice but to move I rubbed his back to help him sooth.
“you can come back now Liam I know you’re out their” I said and Liam walked into the room.
“Harry what’s wrong” Liam asked rubbing his back.
“I almost killed Louis so god knows who I could kill next” Harry said through his tears.
“Harry it’s not your fault” Liam and I said.
“it is, I shouldn’t have got the tattoo it’s all thanks to that” Harry said.
“that could have easily been me though” I said.
“you were smarter though you didn’t get one” he said.
“Harry non of this is your fault ok, remember when my emotions were off and I had so much guilt I wouldn’t leave my room you told me that it wasn’t my fault I wouldn’t believe it would I but I came to realise it wasn’t because i was just so angry about what happened with Rachel that I didn’t like what I saw and i didn’t know how to switch my emotions off and I did it accidentally this is like that it’s not your fault you didn’t know, you shouldn’t be involved in this so don’t worry about it” I said.
“but what if I did kill you before that would have been my fault for not stopping it” Harry said.
“it wouldn’t have, it’s not you so if you killed me it wouldn’t be you and your trapped in there so you couldn’t do anything and it wouldn’t be your fault” I said.
“but then I would feel guilty for not stopping it” he said.
“you shouldn’t this isn’t your fault and I could see you trying to break out” I said.
“how?” he asked.
“in your eyes your eyes flickered green for a split second” I said.
“and that’s why you kept going” he said and I nodded.
“you should get some blood Lou and you should really change your clothes your covered in blood and Harry you should get changed and clean up since you’re also covered in blood” Rachel said.
“what am I meant to do Rach?” Harry asked.
“what do you mean?” Rachel asked.
“like what am I supposed to do i can’t live in this house with all of you I’m just going to end up killing someone” Harry cried.
“Harry your not going to kill anyone” I said.
“how do you know that? You don’t so you can’t say that Lou if I get in that same position with someone else what am I supposed to do they might not have a close enough bond like you and I have which might stop them from stopping me and I might kill them” he cried I held him closer and put my chin on his head.
*Rach help* I said through my minds.
“Harry you need to keep thinking about what Louis was saying to you to make you come back ok focus on memories and people you love it will help you it might trap your inner vampire for a while” Rachel said.
“I won’t be able to already I can feel it trying to take over” Harry said.
“stay close to Louis at least that way we know if anything get’s out of control we will be able to get you back” Liam said.
“but what happens if I want to spend time with Emma?” Harry asked.
“keep Louis close by maybe just outside of the room so if anything went wrong it can be fixed” Niall said.
“ok” Harry said.


ok i have been meaning to do this for 2 chapters but i kept forgetting about it
but all credit goes to @J.J. for giving me the idea to do this with Harry and i hope you guys enjoy the chapter :)


I love it

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@Harry's kitty kat
Thats what i have named it and i have posted the first chapter i would update but im at school unfortantly haha

Emmaaaa Emmaaaa

I think immortal life sounds really good!! <3

@Harry's kitty kat
aw i'm happy i'm making another one it's fun writing i've always had a passion for writing i suspose and aw i'm glad it is your favourite fanfic i literally looked back at the begining of the first story and i can tell that it's improved like my writing was shit at the beginning haha i still don't know what to call the next one i have an idea and it's immortal life but i'm not sure any ideas? <3

Emmaaaa Emmaaaa

Ahahaha I'm so glad you're making another story and yes, your really good!!! This is my favourite fanfic <3