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surviving the bite

chapter 33

Louis p.o.v
“he does have a point I can’t watch him grow up and get to the point where he dies , and I can’t cut him out of our life’s when we move around.” I said.
“can’t he have the choice of becoming like us?” Harry asked.
“he could, but I don’t know I mean Niall hasn’t took this well and he struggling to get used to it, and I think since Liam is really kind and nice it will be even harder for him, than how it’s been for Niall.” Rachel said.
“I guess, but we took the change well.” I said.
“but you were more in control and you just accepted it Niall isn’t and neither will Liam, and Harry remember when you killed your first person how much that hurt for you.” Rachel said.
“can we just drop the conversation.” I said.
“are we going to tell the boys about this?” Harry asked.
“not until it’s time for it all to happen, I’m going to check on Niall goodnight.” Rachel said.
“I’m going to bed night Haz” I said and went to my bedroom.
Gregg’s p.o.v
I was lying in my bed thinking, It’s funny tonight I can remember a lot but I keep having blanks spots and I keep remembering little things like I remember Niall sitting on his old bed but he wouldn’t look at me he was cupping his head in his hands but I can’t remember why, I remember Niall telling Rachel to compel us? I don’t know what that is, but I remember Niall leaving and he was in a rush. But these memories are just blurs.
Rachel’ p.o.v
“Hey Niall don’t think about the future alright everything will work out just think about now, you already have a lot on your mind we don’t need anything else worrying you, you need to just focus on enjoying yourself and doing what you love.” I said.
“how can I focus on singing when I want to kill everyone in there.” He said.
“for one you need to think positive, two you need to enjoy yourself that’s how Harry and Louis did it they just enjoyed themselves which distracted them from the blood and they got over it.” I said he turned over to face me.
“it’s not that easy.” He said.
“Niall we have all been through this, and you have 9 friends who are here to help you three of them being vampires and one being a werewolf” I took a hold of his hands and he smiled” look you have people surrounding you who have been through this and who are involved in this crazy supernatural world some vampires go through this alone and are left to either be killed by a hunter or gain control and live their lives with this secret on their shoulders for eternity and don’t forget I know how your feeling, I can feel everything your feeling so don’t think that your alone” I said.
“how come I can’t feel what you’re feeling.” He said
“because your new and you can’t focus on mine at this moment it’s all because your emotions are blurring into one h-“ I said but Niall cut in.
“Hunger, I know.” He said.
“do you want to watch a film to get your mind off things?” I asked.
“sure, but what film?” he said.
“how about kick ass,” I said.
“sure” he said we went back into the sitting room and watched the film by the end Niall’s mind was off of things but he still didn’t seem himself.
*next day*
By the middle of the night Niall decided he wanted to be alone so he went for a walk around town since it’s his hometown he wants to just enjoy being in the familiar surroundings of Mullingar and he didn’t get back until five minutes ago. Everyone was up and rearing to go for the show. I walked over to the kitchen where everyone was eating and sat on the bench.
“why do you always sit on the bench, why don’t you actually join the table we don’t bite you know” Louis said.
“ I just enjoy sitting on the benches, I guess it’s because when I was with Megan we used to sit in my kitchen and we made all sorts and after we would just sit on the benches listening to music and chat and have a laugh and Lou you have lots of money and you have nice furniture in your house/ hotel rooms and you sit on the floor.” I said.
“what’s wrong with sitting on the floor it brings back memories of when you’re four years old and you go to school and when you’re in reception you sit on the floor so it brings back those simple times where nothing matters.” He said.
“really Lou?” I questioned.
“na that’s a whole bunch of shit, I just like to sit on the floor.” He said.
“you know you always do things the hard way.” I said and laughed.
“yeah, it makes things more fun.” He said.
“ok Lou you can stay in your little bubble and do what you want and when you want to join us you can.” I said.
He smirked “ you know technically I am in my own bubble since I have my little force fields with me.” He said.
“oh yeah guys you should see what he can do go on Lou show him” I said with the biggest smile on my face.
“Come on Harry” he said to Harry.
“no, no way am I doing that again.” Harry said.
“come on Harry don’t be a party pooper, just do it.” I said.
“no do you know how much that hurts, why can’t you do it.” Harry said.
“no I want you to do it, I can’t hurt Rachel.” Louis said.
“now why can’t you hurt her?” Harry asked.
“because she has helped me through so much and I just can’t hurt her.” Louis said.
“wait so you have known her for almost 9 months and you can’t hurt her but you have known me for 3 years and your wanting to hurt me.” Harry said.
“no it’s because your my brother, so it’s better, come on when you get your ability you can use it against me to hurt me or I will be your test subject shit I shouldn’t have said that what happens if you get something like you can control lightening and you electrocute me.” Louis said and everyone laughed.
“You can’t take that back you have to do that, you said it so you have to do it.” Harry shouted excitedly.
“no way, I’m not getting electrocuted.” Louis said.
“how do you know I will be able to electrocute someone I could get ability like I might be able to be invisible how is that going to hurt you.” Harry said.
“well for one It could be something worse that electrocuting someone and you could turn invisible and when I’m onstage you could pull my pants down or something like that so no I’m taking back my word.” Louis said.
“no you can’t do that.” Harry said they both started to wrestle on the floor, attacking each other but of course Louis was stronger being an older vampire but Harry was just as smart as Louis but they weren’t giving in.
“Louis, this is the time to show them your new trick.” I said into Louis mind. He smirked and focused and Harry went flying off of Louis.
“what the fuck.” Harry said and Louis laughed.
“stand up.” Louis said, Harry stood up and everyone watched Louis, Louis focused and we saw a little ball form in his hand it looked like a bubble and then he moved his hands and the ball flew out of his hand and hit Harry back against the wall everyone was shocked.
“How did you do that?” Liam asked.
“I was bored one night and I did something and it turned out it did this. And I’ve been practising so I can hit certain targets instead of taking out the full room, it’s actually better like it doesn’t take any of my power away and it doesn’t make me weak.” Louis said.


ok i have no reason on why this chapter hasn't been posted i've just wrote it and i've just been enjoying my last few days of my summer holidays i go back on tuesday and i don't want to go, and i'm moving house which isn't great but i've had to look at houses with my mam and dad and basically we are renting and we have 10 weeks to be out of this house so i don't know how often i'll be writing since i will be moving and i'm back at school which is my last year so i'm going to be really busy, i will try to update as much as i can, anyway who's seen this is us i haven't yet but has everyone who has seen it enjoyed it?


I love it

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@Harry's kitty kat
Thats what i have named it and i have posted the first chapter i would update but im at school unfortantly haha

Emmaaaa Emmaaaa

I think immortal life sounds really good!! <3

@Harry's kitty kat
aw i'm happy i'm making another one it's fun writing i've always had a passion for writing i suspose and aw i'm glad it is your favourite fanfic i literally looked back at the begining of the first story and i can tell that it's improved like my writing was shit at the beginning haha i still don't know what to call the next one i have an idea and it's immortal life but i'm not sure any ideas? <3

Emmaaaa Emmaaaa

Ahahaha I'm so glad you're making another story and yes, your really good!!! This is my favourite fanfic <3