Hearts In Pain - Comments

I believe that Harry genuinely wants to make this work.Yeah his libido is probably a contributing factor but I have more faith. He just needs to put this Jennifer chick in check. As much as I want him to be the one to do it, I would not be surprised if Charlotte ended up snapping on her. I am Tyra Banks rooting for H. Hopefully he doesn't screw it up! Abel's pancake fit reminds me of the many stand offs I've had with my newly six year old nephew over dinner and such so I totally know what Charlotte has to deal with. Can't wait to read more!

Fix pancakes.... are they broken? I didn't know you "Fixed" food. I thought you cooked it

Well of course...I'm braced. Gotta always be prepared and braced for fanfictions and stories...learned that the hard way...Aka; Dark, Styles Effect, Hybrids and a lot of other honorable mentions...*sniffles.*

@PerciaxXXx
There will def be drama coming soon :) So luckily you are braced already lol.

I know there's going to be drama comin' pretty soon...I'm bracing myself for future heartache.

Aspirin...check!
Tissues...check!
Trash can...check!
Icecream...check!
Kitten...Check-wait, what...

@CrumpetsAndTea
Yes, I as the author agree about Jennifer being a bitch and that she has to go. Hopefully Harry can get rid of her but then again I also like drama so time will tell ;).

I really love writing dad Harry ngl. Usually I don't like kid fics or writing kids but sometimes I do and this was one of those times when I liked it. I also think Harry's heart is in the right place even if at times Charlotte may doubt it or if at times his actions aren't the best at proving it.

Thanks for the comment :) I loved hearing your thoughts.

Oh boy, so much to talk about!

Firstly, let's address the elephant in the room: Jennifer is a bitch. She's got to go. She's too much of a threat to their marriage. I almost wanted to to jump through the screen and grab her by her hair when she said it was Charlie's job to stay at home. She clearly doesn't know her place and it's going to have to Harry's job to remind her.

That being said it makes me feel good to know that Harry's heart is is in the right place and that he choses to be faithful to Charlotte and is still very much attracted to her. And he seems like a great dad to Abel too. The partying has just got to stop. I know he's young but he's still a father and a husband. He needs to get his priorities in order. It's not fair to Charlotte to have to stay home while he parties.

All in all though this challenge may very well have potential. Can't wait to read more!

@mirandakane
I know I will!

@PerciaxXXx
Thanks :) I hope you like it as it continues.

Interesting...definitely subscribing for the next updates to come!

@CrumpetsAndTea
Oh I'm so glad to see someone from 1DFF found this fic again :). I also have it up on ao3 with more chapters but am slowly moving it over here as well. Hoping it will make me inspired to work on it more too.

I agree though that I think having a baby and getting married so young has a lot to do with how they view their marriage as well. Even if maybe they don't know it or are in denial on that.

Thanks for the comment and hopefully you continue to like this as it develops :).

I remember briefly seeing this story on 1dff.com when it was still up. This is an interesting start! I'm pretty sure getting married and having a baby so young has a lot to do with the way Harry and Charlotte view their marriage. I'm eager to see how things turn out for them!