Reviews, Critiques, and Honest Opinions - Comments

Sorry if I asked too much! I know it’s super long!

Title: Cambridge, Year Two and Cambridge III
Author: there’s a few but Niall’s_Strawberry_Red seems to be the one in all of them
Boy: Seems to mainly be about Louis and Harry but idk, I’ve only read a few of the newest stories.
Link: Here.

Okay so there’s this story that I saw recently, it’s “Cambridge III” and it looks really good but it’s the third part of a series and I’m not sure if I should read it so if you could give even the first or second one a quick once over just so I could know cause I really like the look of the third one but the others are super long and Idk if I should read it or if I should just start on the third one or what. The story is not mine, just saying. I’ll post the form now n a minute :)

besides the whole character talking thing- I'll work on it.

Thank you so much (: If you can, could you let me know what the little mistakes were? I'd like to know how to fix them. Thank you again, love.

@abygail.bauman
Chapter

Title: Payne of the Past
Author: Allie Miller
Which boy(s) it's about: Niall, Liam
Content Rating: R i think
Link :http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/85711/Payne-of-the-Past/
Genre(s): Teen Romance

@aintnohollerbackgirl
I'm just curious- how will I get the review? Is it going to be a personal message or a chapter on this book..?

@Prinny1321
For reviews that are requested by someone other than the author, I won't be criticizing. I will simply read and review the story, and let people know the pros and cons of reading it. I've decided to do this, simply so people can request me to read a 50 chapter story and let them know if it's worth their time. I will be stating things like "If you like this concept, this is the story for you." Or "If you are overly sensitive, you might not like this specific story."

I understand your concern, I too am an author. I'm just here to help, but I heavily believe in playing nice and just being a kind human being. :)

Title: The Donation
Author: abygail.bauman
Boys: mainly Harry but has all of them eventually
Content Rating: R
Link: The Donation
Genres: Action, romance, and tragedy

I love the idea of a reviewer who's actually going to follow through so I hope when someone requests a review, you'll actually do it.

As an author on this site though, I'd be pissed if you were reviewing my story and criticizing it if I haven't asked you to somewhere where I'm not going to see it unless I go looking... that's what the comments section is for... if someone hasn't asked for you to constructively pick their story apart in a review then don't and don't do it on the request of others either...