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Crossroads - Comments

@nvrmind
Welcome new reader! I'm so glad you've joined us! This review has really made my day!

River certainly goes through a lot dealing with Harry and it's great that she has a pretty stable support group around her. Each one of her friends and family is so important!

You're the first reader to catch the "perfect man" in Harry's character description. That was definitely purposely done because Harry and River are far from it, together and apart. From the outside looking in, Harry and River seem to have it all, but neither one of them is happy. Harry's character profile is definitely worth exploring.

I'm glad you mention Ryan because he's always the odd man out. It's not at all hard to tell that he has something against Harry. What that is we shall find out but you might be on to it already. Hannah is so sweet!

While we do see a lot of River and Kate's relationship, it will be interesting to look at River's childhood and how growing up with a young single mother affected her. Harry's family is a totally different story and they definitely leave more to be desired. I think you're right. River does seem to have a fear of being a single mother. I think it stems from the void she seems to feel from not have a traditional, nuclear family. She wants it so bad for herself and her baby that being a single parent would be like a major failure to her. Not sure if we'll get any flashbacks of Harry and River but we will certainly discover more of their relationship.

One thing you should know about me is that I absolutely adore when readers ask me questions and give me deep analysis of my stories. I love interacting and talking with readers so don't be shy about asking me questions! Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to review! There's an update coming very soon!

CrumpetsAndTea CrumpetsAndTea
2/18/19

Just started reading this and I've got a lot to say and ask. First of all, the characterisation is brilliant! Each character that has popped so far carry their own significance and seem to affect River's life in one way or another. The characters are complex and River is honestly mesmerising! She's really strong to be dealing with Harry's shit especially while being pregnant because a woman is really vulnerable during that time and needs support.

Secondly, I couldn't help but notice you've put "the perfect man" under Harry's picture in the character section. But that's the thing, isn't it? Neither him nor River are perfect in any way that's why this story is so compelling! Harry certainly has flaws inflicted by time and I can't wait to discover what they really are.

Ryan is pretty special in his own way. To River he's the support she needs sometime but I think he's harbouring bitter feelings for Harry and I might, might have an idea why. (He still calls River by her maiden name.) And I really love Hannah for being who she is!

As for River's mother, I need to read more about her because she seems like a pretty sweet mother and I really want to know how growing up with a single mother affected River. I can't say the same about Harry's family so I'll need more to figure out why his mother seemed like she didn't like River.

Also, does River have any fear of being a single parent? And I also want to know more about River and Harry's history, like how did they meet and stuff.

So many questions, I apologise. You're killing with this story!

nvrmind nvrmind
2/17/19

@CrumpetsAndTea
I've got an army out here baying for blood, I can't hold them back much longer.
If Harry is cheating I'm letting them loose. We'll steal River away and hide her somewhere

notinuseanymore notinuseanymore
1/20/19

@tumblruser99
Honestly, River is a totally catch. I'm sure anyone would be happy to take her away from Harry. *Cue Steal My Girl* You are the very first reader to suspect that Harry is cheating and it's probably the most interesting theory yet. Hold the ammo though until we have reasonable evidence lol.

I'm so glad you're enjoying this! Thanks for reading and re-reading there's an update coming in the near future!

CrumpetsAndTea CrumpetsAndTea
1/20/19

Harry's cheating... I am sure of it. Let me kill him, let me punch him in his adorable nose

If he is cheating I am leading an army into battle

notinuseanymore notinuseanymore
1/18/19

I just wanna punch you in the face, Haz. Come on Man. Step up or I'll happily take River away from you -waves Bi Pride flag-

I'm really loving this story, I keep re-reading it because it's that good

notinuseanymore notinuseanymore
1/18/19

@Alita Mae
Welcome, new reader! I'm so happy you could join us!
You've perfectly analyzed Harry and River's relationship dynamic. River can easily come off as whiny and demanding (although she is pregnant) and doesn't always give him credit where his credit is due. You really hit the nail on the head here : "when he doesn't mistreat her.. he just doesn't treat her at all I guess." Lol. I have to laugh because it's so true and part of what makes Harry so complex. He's very stingy with his emotion but still gives off the vibe that he deeply cares about River and his unborn baby. You may very well be on to something when you mention that Harry may not have been taught to express his emotion which could result in the way he act now.

I already like you as a reader because I LOVE your thoughts! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!

CrumpetsAndTea CrumpetsAndTea
10/25/18

I love this story! I just stumbled across one direction fanfictions after years of not doing so and I fell in love with this. The plot, the characters, it all seems so intriguing and real. I can feel the tension between the two. It seems like River gives Harry a hard time, when he doesn't mistreat her.. he just doesn't treat her at all I guess. He does have some cuestionable actions that make me so mad. It seems like he was never taught how to express emotion or act accordingly to them (like when he said there was no need to act like he cared bc he loved her a few chapters ago). I really hope they can figure it out and Harry agrees to therapy or they can solve it some other way. I already like them so much. Hope you update soon! Lots of love!!

Alita Mae Alita Mae
10/25/18

@caprisun
There appears to be a glitch and this comment duplicated itself.
Wow, this is such a nice review! Thank you so much! I'm so glad you're enjoying it! Thank you for reading!

CrumpetsAndTea CrumpetsAndTea
10/10/18

Wow, this is such a nice review! Thank you so much! I'm so glad you're enjoying it! Thank you for reading!

CrumpetsAndTea CrumpetsAndTea
10/9/18

Wow, this is such a nice review! Thank you so much! I'm so glad you're enjoying it! Thank you for reading!

CrumpetsAndTea CrumpetsAndTea
10/9/18

Wow, this is such a nice review! Thank you so much! I'm so glad you're enjoying it! Thank you for reading!

CrumpetsAndTea CrumpetsAndTea
10/9/18

This story is exceptionally good- like I can't explain how great the plot and characterization actually are! I've read several of your other works and I have to say you write amazingly good! Keep up the good work xx

caprisun caprisun
10/8/18

@cataclysmic
Welcome to the party! I'm so happy you could join us!

I like you already because I adore readers who give well thought out reviews and insight. I agree absolutely everything you've said. A lot of River and Harry's problems could be fixed through communication and while Harry constantly seems like that bad guy he does care in his own way.

I'm not entirely sure if you've read through all the chapters yet but River seems to have a good support circle lined up. As for Ryan, his likability may be subjective later, he's kind of hard to read but Hannah would make a great friend for River.

I'm so glad you say that because it seems I spend all my spare time studying the stages and symptoms of pregnancy so it's nice to know all my research is paying off.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

CrumpetsAndTea CrumpetsAndTea
7/14/18

Just joined the party of readers and I'm glad I did so......

From what I've gathered, River and Harry both seem unaware of the roles they both need to play in order to have a healthy married life. Of course with River being pregnant and Harry busy with god knows what, it's clear there's a major lack of communication that's leading to more problems for them. River needs support, but the person she needs it from isn't there. And perhaps that's why she isn't ready to confide in anyone.

I loved the fact that Harry though majorly an enigmatic asshole, seems to care for River and his baby even if he doesn't act like it. If only he could be more vocal! With his mood swings, one would think he is the one expecting the baby! And I still don't know whether I like Ryan yet. It seems to me he isn't fond of Harry.

Hannah is probably the one friend River needs but won't admit. I feel like it would be good for her to have the support of someone who has grown through the process to guide her.

And I also love how thoroughly planned out and written the progress of pregnancy is. You don't come across many stories who have thought of every little detail. It's a work done well. Looking forward to what comes next. Until next time!

cataclysmic cataclysmic
7/13/18

@twoghosts
Hannah is certainly sweet and would make a really good friend to River, especially during this time in her life. While every girl needs their mom it might be helpful for River to get somewhat of a break from her mom.

Harry, Harry, Harry. That man is an enigma. But I think you're right, he has his moments where he can self reflect and acknowledge that he is wrong, even if he doesn't apologize. But therapy is something these two could totally benefit from. That compliment makes me so happy because I've been doing research up to my ears on pregnancy. If you looked through my laptop history you'd probably think I was pregnant myself!

Thanks so much for always reading and reviewing!

@mirandakane
With out giving any spoilers I'm just going to warn you, you're probably going to hate Ryan in as time progresses. I agree, Hannah does make for a good friend and that Harry does show he cares in his own little way. Hopefully River begins to see that for herself.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

To me Hannah's the type of friend who'd never let you face anything alone. River's mother most probably wants to help her through the pregnancy herself but if she wants to confide in someone else it shouldn't be a problem.

I feel like Harry's got some time to think and reflect while being away and realize that he acted like an ass but I'm not sure how long he's going to be like that. Though I still think that couple's therapy is the best option and yes River should go see someone herself if Harry doesn't come around soon because God knows insecurities can actually destroy relationships.

So far it's only River apologising and even though feelings aren't something to apologise for Harry should at least try to convey them to her. I'm still rooting for a girl but you're at liberty to decide the gender of course. Lastly the way you write about pregnancy and the hormonal changes is spot on and I'm always looking forward to read more!



twoghosts twoghosts
7/5/18

Just finished chapter three and do not trust Ryan at all and want him as far away from River as possible lol. I still feel that way even more so in this chapter than in the first chapter.

I do like Hannah though and I kind of hope River and her become friends...maybe. Though I disagree with River thinking a stranger cares more because Harry in this chapter did seem to care about her pregnancy from what he said. Someone who didn't care wouldn't google things or tell her not to drink coffee or take things easy..so yeah he cares. I think River just doesn't notice or doesn't want to notice.

I'm kind of hoping they have a boy but a girl would be cute too.

mirandakane mirandakane
7/5/18

@mirandakane
Welcome back!

I'm not really sure how far you've read into the story so I won't give any spoilers but I agree that Harry is maybe not the best at showing his emotions but he does care in his own way.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

CrumpetsAndTea CrumpetsAndTea
6/24/18