Rancho Bonita - Comments

@finding.neverland
LOL thanks for that! Spent most of my life in UK, so no I don't know much about USA...it pays to do research.Will change it to Cali then...

This is really good! It's well written and I'm intrigued on what's gonna happen next :)

(oh and just a side note I don't know how familiar you are with US geography but just so you know there aren't beaches in Arizona)