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A Rock Star Christmas Carol - Comments
@xRock_Mex
I don't think the story is for everyone lol but I love writing it and chapter 9 will def be a good comic relief. I'll be working on chapter 9 soon, I can't wait
I freakin' LOVE this!
Why haven't you got more readers? Your writing is outstanding, I adore it and absolutely love the humour! x
This is priceless!!! I loved the demon twist to it, and the Edgar Allan Poe reference was ace my friend!!!
@JasperRenee
lol I needed a comedy moment to end wit, that chapter made me sad and I was writing it. I try lol, but next chapter really gets the ball going
@JasperRenee
Thank you :-) and Niall is actually supposed to be a 2D character, at least right up until the end. I'm working on chapter 5 right now and should have that out tomorrow, but next chapter will explain Niall more clearly, because when I re read I was like 'Niall needs a little bit of history and I think 5 will clear that up for a lot of readers, because another reader told me the same thing and he does come to life a little more as the story progresses. I think humor for such a bleak story was the right direction, I love writing humor, but it always has to be incorported into a dark story for some reason. More to come, expect the next chapter tomorrow (Sunday)
This story is a riot!! I love the comedy you incorporated into it!!! Though I would suggest maybe a Niall POV since he can't talk it kind of just feel like hes there you know... a very 2-D character especially compared to you pr others... other than that quite phenomenal work actually!!! Keep it up I hope to see an update soon!!!
@xRock_Mex
Thank you :-)
12/20/16