Higher Standards - Comments

@leah94rose
It's great, the only thing i would suggest is that you space your paragraphs out more- it makes it easier to read or to find your spot
- update soon!!
l.b.

I've finally finished reading and now I can review!

I really liked the start of this with the setting being Post 1D and Harry supporting his sister. I'm always a sucker for Harry and Gemma interaction! The introduction of Alyce as well. She seems sassy and edgy and I think that's what intrigues Harry. I also like the fact that they haven't immediately clicked. A lot of fanfics make it so the girl and lead boy click right away but I think it makes it a bit of a challenge if they're not so crazy about each other from the start. What A Feeling is one of my favorites as well! I love the Fleetwood Mac sound and it gives me this sort of warm fuzzy feeling in the inside when I listen to it.

Your punctuation and grammar are on point! The only constructive criticism I can give is maybe to space out your lines a bit more. It kind of strains the eyes and makes certain things hard to read without the spaces.

This was great over all! Can't wait to see what happens next!!

@leighbear28
Thank you so much! :) any constructive criticism or questions or comments are always appreciated :)

Great work! Keep it up!
l.b.