Perfect - Comments

Please update!!!

Pleeeeeeeeeease update!

@Ayat

Soon my friend. Soon :3

I love how you combined Liam's part in the music video with your story! It's very entertaining to read your stories and I hope you update soon! <3

@Allie Miller
Thank you! There should be an update for this either later tonight, or tomorrow :3

Lol yeah I've gotten sick on the tilt a whirl a couple times.. But its my favorite ride so I can't help but go on it... Great update by the way really loving the story so far

@AllyPayne1998
Your welcome and thanks so much

@AllyPayne1998
Aha,, this is another great chapter! Can't wait to read more :) xx

@AllyPayne1998
Aha,, this is another great chapter! Can't wait to read more :) xx

@AllyPayne1998
Aha,, this is another great chapter! Can't wait to read more :) xx

Thank you! Glad to hear it! And I will definitely check it out :3 xoxo Ally Payne xoxo

@sammie_1d_fan

I freaking love this so far update soon and please check out my new story please...

Lol never mind, I ended up updating! Hope you like this next chapter! :D

@KatieXo

I can't update tonight, but I will get to it as soon as I can! :3

@KatieXo

As much as I can! I will update tonight for sure though! :D

@KatieXo

I can tell this is going to be good! :) how often will you be updating? Xx

@AllyPayne1998

@Allie Miller
Thank you! xoxo Ally Payne xoxo

Great start :)