Yours, Sadly Enough - Comments

@Aaliyah_Styles

Yeah it wouldn't happen for a couple chapters.

@xXBeautifullHateXx
Oh man I would LOVE to co-author but I can't. Hopefully you find someone but do far I think you're doing just fine on your own.

@xXBeautifullHateXx
Oh man I would LOVE to co-author but I can't. Hopefully you find someone but do far I think you're doing just fine on your own.

@Aaliyah_Styles
Thank you! Currently working on the second chapter. I might see if someone wants to cowrite.

@xXBeautifullHateXx
True. I can see that.
I like your story so far I think it's promising. Voted

@Aaliyah_Styles
Thanks for the advice. Not what I was aiming for at all, but I can see the similarities. The reason they aren't scared is because they've known about it their whole lives and they've accepted the fact.

This reminds me of the hunger games with the beginning how her mom is braiding her hair then her sister giving her something to remember her by and "the choosing". Lol but I would think they would be more scared and emotional I mean..they're gonna be slaves.
Other wise this looks like a good story. Looking forward to rwading it