The demond inside - Comments

OKAY! I am the author for this and the account that this story is posted on does not work anymore so i am going to post what i have so far so from chapter 1 to chapter 8 plus i will be updating on this account form now on with the help from jimmy_stylinson

@jimmy_stylinson

I can do the POV's but the dirty Louis i'm not so good at so i'll like get my friend or even you could help me if you would like to becuase this is my first time writing and all so Yeahhh but message me if you would like to help jimmy_stylinson :)

hehe dirty Louis. Can you change the POV's so the we can hear about a different character's part?

@jimmy_stylinson

Thank you so much if you have any feedback i would love to hear it!

Awesome story!

@Katie Tomlinson

You are welcome

@XOMalina TomlinsonXO

Thanks it means a lot because this is my first

@XOMalina TomlinsonXO

Thanks it means a lot because this is my first

Great story

@Niall's Potato

Thank you so much :)

@Katie Tomlinson
I just started my first fanfic recently too. You're doing great! Cool cover too, btw :)

@Niall's Potato

Thanks! this is my frist time so i'm like a noob at writting fanfiction but it means a lot to me to hear you like it <3

This is really good! There's so many ways this could go and stuff. Keep it up! :)