~Be MY Boyfriend~? - Comments

You Should do more!

This is a really good story :)

Really good :)

Really good :)

@PennyTommo
Your welcome! And thanks!! :)

@ThingsICant
OMG, literally when i read your comment, i almost cried!
thanks soo much! ur the best <3

This is really good I love it!

LOVE IT DO MORE!

First of all, great story!! You are an amazing writer with some crazy skills. Love it! I know for a fact that this story is going to be a hit. I was your age when I first wrote my first fanfic and look how it turned out four years later. You can do the same. Be creative, and let your imagination take place.

Love the story and if you need anything I'm just a message away.

P. S. Keep people on their toes, surprise them, that help this story.
-Xx-

@Directioner love98
Thank you so much sweetheart.
Chapter 2 is ready! ;)

Well it is an amazing story so far especially since it is ur first :)

@PennyTommo

@Directioner love98
Thank you soo very much.
That means a lot because it is my first.

I really liked this chapter!!

Hi, This is my very first fanfiction.
Please read it.
I hope you enjoy..Please give me feedback on things you feel I should improve on.
Thanks <3
Stay FabuLouis-Penny