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Love at first sight - Comments
Good plot! Just slow it down a wee bit maybe? (And double check grammar! I have the same problem with grammar so don't take it personally)
Other than that I like it!
Xxx
Ps after Christmas I will get my computer so I will be writing better,longer,and faster (I'm on my tablet right now)
@Ms Alyssa Hood
Thanks I'm glad you liked it!
3/22/15