You Complete Me - Comments

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hey its katie im Mikey's_Wife add me as a author

thanks.

@Lukesgirl_forever
Ok.

Good tip. I am sorry. It is my fault for making it go to fast. I will make it go slower. This happens a lot because I have so many chapters in my head and I write it all down in one.

@Mikey's_Wife
Well your chapter are short. Show her feelings. Make them longer. Think you'd get more voted that way

@Savanna and Niall
Its ok thanks for being honest!! I meant it to be like love at first sight!

Wow. This was rushed. Like a lot. I read the first chapter and Michael just gave her his number? Now there meeting up! Wayyy to rushed. Sorry to be harsh:(