London Calling - Comments

@raybansncoffee
sorry I just saw this!!! I was rereading London Calling on my phone (LG Slide life) and I saw you responded but couldn't respond until I had a computer. I will go read your other story now but i can't promise the same insights- I'm happier now and might've lost my artistic edge

H

Anyone who is interested in reading the real chapter 28 and finishing out this fic head to read the end posted under my new account since I evidently can't get in to it under my original login. http://www.harrystylesfanfiction.com/Story/88873/London-Calling/

@hotforharry
Okay...so evidently there is no way to contact anyone that has anything to do with moderating this page. My facebook account has started to block me from even being able to log in to post anything. I have a new chapter posted on my Tumblr for this. AND I'm getting ready to post the first two chapters of a whole new story. I'd love to hear what you think of both because your insight to what I was writing was incredible. :) I may have to start posting under this user name since I no longer have access to the original username, which sucks.

So evidently this website now hates my Facebook log in and I can't get in to post the new chapter. :( It's posted on tumblr read it visiting raybansandcoffee.tumblr.com

Love to hear the Niall story this was a great read

@hotforharry
I'm not even sure how to begin about how much your comment means to me. This is a piece of writing I've poured a lot of myself in to over a several year period, with an extended break in the middle. I have before started with the first meeting but felt that this story was better to start when the story gets good. As much as I have mapped out in my head how they met and how their friendship developed I know as a reader that sometimes it is more fun to learn about characters in the telling of a story between characters and not as t happens. And you're right I've left out at least half of the story, probably more. We miss out on how they meet and 7 years in the middle of their relationship. The comparison to friends, well thank you. I try my best to take something that will be universally likeable like Harry Styles falling in love and make it different. I'd never read fan fiction based on him and an older woman and as he's dated plenty of women older than me (I'm 33) it felt like a reasonable idea to me. I'm working on the next chapter right now and your words are just the fuel I need to get through the scene I'm in right now. Thank you!!! A million times thank you!!!

OH MY FUCK
okay so I just feel like I need to let this out. This was maybe the best-written fanfiction I have ever read. By far the most original despite it being a typical Harry Styles love story. You write with this confidence that makes this story not only believable but also creates a feeling for the readers that the story is writing itself--and only the best stories can do that. for starters you cut half the story out. And what I mean by that is you didn't include how harry and annie met. WHICH IS GENIUS. Because in my favorite unfinished stories there is always a pattern of really boring chapters before they just give up. So, whether you noticed it or not, you secured the momentum of the story by having it be part of its exposition. On top of that you make everyone in the story so connected (reminded me of friends honestly) again from so early on that the awkwardness was avoided wholeheartedly. On top of that you kept the story only focused on the actions of harry and annie. There was no prolonged stint of whether or not someone's relationships were okay and having annie work as a matchmaker was genuis and logical. Logical because for her to be the outsider she would naturally see everyone most objectively. Genuis because it then gave annie a connection to every single other plot point of the story, which made you feel further connected to the story. I really hope you are as proud of what you have written here as I am amazed, because truly it is a masterpiece and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Best of luck to you and I'd love to read any future endeavors.

Everyone stay tuned....there is something new coming soon. Annie, Harry and their friends deserve a proper ending and it's headed their way. Once that happens there is always potential for more though Always In My Head - A London Calling Series. Anyone as excited as I am?!

@pancakes.
Thank you SOOOO much!! I'm glad you enjoy the setting of the story and that I was able to surprise you with an update. It's been misery having writer's block for this long, luckily I had some distractions that provided inspiration. And thank you for the congrats...I'm super excited. A regular schedule instead of retail should provide more time to write. :)

Oh wow; I totally wasn't expecting an update any time soon and then smack/bang here one comes tumbling in! I absolutely adore the mature setting in which this story takes place - always have and always will.

ps: congratulations on the job :)

Woohooo! I love the new chapter! I totally passed out before you finished but I just read it and yay! Totally worth the wait!!! <<<<3333

@beccah19xoxo
Thank you so much!! Hopefully I'll get the time to write soon. I've had lots going on with work and unfortunately hurt my back and I've been on an ice pack for a few days. As much as that should help the writing it hasn't. Haha. But I SO appreciate you reading the story and your excitement.

Can't wait for the update . Best story

@Neverland
YAY!!! Thanks for being my mental and emotional support through these last few chapters. I owe you!

Yay!! I love the new chapter!! So excited for Harry and Annie! <<3333

@stealmyfangirl

Tiny heart....LIE. You have more than a tiny heart. And thank you...the ending was a bit more spontaneous than I had planned but I was half asleep and sort of in love with them.

Loved the new chapter! The ending was so sweet my tiny heart just melted

@raybansandcoffee
Awe yay! I love you too ma'am! Loved it! Can't wait for more. :-)

@NikiD @KmackB
You two both make me laugh and smile so much. I love how you've both been so awesome with the motivating texts...occasional pictures of H...and encouragement. The writers block has sucked and you two have kept me from giving up. What would I do without you? I'd cry...that's what I'd do.

I need you to wake up so I can talk about this chapter! You've been holding out on me. It's fabtastic. But seriously, text me ASAP. Okbye.
K