Take My Heart - Comments

btw I'm really really sorry I didn't reply it wasn't that I was ignoring you it was that my computer wasn't letting me log on and I didn't know why and it's only just let me sorryyyy

Lilo is the strongest friendship and they could have such a potentially good relationship (I'm going to send a message to you about it now because I was just discussing it) Larry is not real, not in my opinion. Lilo > Larry by far in my opinion. I ship Elounor and Haroline (though I did find that Caroline was taking advantage of Harry a little)

I don't write a lot. I'm currently writing one for Percy Jackson.

By the way, I now ship and believe in Larry, real hard and believe in it. I think Lilo sounds really cute, but it also sounds like a bromance. Harry and Louis are in love. So why don't you like them any more?

You should!

SOML = Story of My Life

Tbh I've never really written fanfiction about any other fandom apart from One Direction. I used to write Harry Potter for a bit but I've never really got into it.

That's nice, I should go watch their interviews. xD

What's SOML? xD

Yeah, I know it's hard to write about celebrities, because you don't really have an established canon. That's why I prefer fictional fandoms. I haven't been in bandom (or any other celebrity fandom) since I was 14-15. This is all kind of nostalgic for me. xD

@charlie2cute
Well Louis and Liam didn't use to like each other - they were both 'leaders' of the group but they led in different ways (Louis more fun, Liam more serious) and then Louis managed to get Liam out of his shell and then they started going on 'dates' - surfing, bungee-jumping etc. They became closer and closer until Liam broke up with Danielle and then Louis spent pretty much every interview trying to make Liam laugh, and then they started writing LOADS together (they wrote half the songs on Midnight Memories together, though they wrote SOML with the other three and Right Now with Harry but still) and they own shares of the same company and are best best friends.

Note: This may not be 100% accurate lol I'm slightly bias.

I prefer to write in-canon things but the only really in-canon thing is that One Direction are in a band formed on the x factor, I change quite a lot of things.

@matchinghearts


It would be cute, yes, I agree. But I don't really ship anyone besides Larry or Zouis, because I haven't watched a lot of their stuff and I don't really know how everyone interacts in the band. I know a little about Harry/Louis and a little about Zayn/Louis, but not much about anyone else. That's why I prefer writing AUs, 'cause I can draft my own relationships.

I ship them in real life but I don't think they're together it'd just be cute if they were.

@charlie2cute

@matchinghearts
Wow, I am really new to the fandom, I have no Idea what half the things you said there were. Xd When I say I like this or that pairing, I mean just in fanfics, I don't ship anyone in Real Life, that's weird. Xd

@charlie2cute
Good Girls, Try Hard and What I Like About You are my favourite. I don't really like the band though because they tweet realllly homophobic stuff (they use the word f*g, homos, gay (in a negative way)) and made fun of the 'tribespeople' and stuff they've just done some dodgy, racist/homophobic/sexist stuff.

Okay, that's what I will do!

Lol that happens with me all the time.

Larry.... I can't bring myself to like Larry. I used to really ship it and hardcore believe in it but now I'm just like NO. I love Zouis, though my main slash pairings are (in this order): Lilo, Nouis and Lirry. Lilo because WRITING PARTNERS and INSIDE JOKES and BOYFRIEND ARM and 'BECAUSE I LOVE HIM' and 'ME AND LIAM HAVE THIS THING' and ARROWS and MORE THAT I CAN'T THINK OF OFF THE TOP OF MY HEAD. Nouis because 'NIALL IS JUST THE BEST HUMAN BEING' and 'GOODBYE MY LOVER' AND 'NIALL IS JUST /A PRESENT/' and THE WHOLE OF THE TAKE ME HOME TOUR and 'I'D SNOG LOUIS' and SO MUCH MORE. Lirry because DATES (fishing, tango, shopping, machu picchu to name a few) and WHAT MAKES YOU BEAUTIFUL SHENANIGANS and GENERAL SHENANIGANS and THE LAST THING HARRY DID ON WEMBLEY STADIUM/THEIR UK LEG WAS HUG LIAM!!!!!!!!!!!! :((( I love Zouis, Niam, Zarry and Narry as well but not as much lol.

@matchinghearts
Thanks.

I don't actually really know much about 5sos. Would you recommend any songs?

I think that would be fun to do with Emma, yes.

I don't know what I even meant anymore.

So what are your slash pairings? I love Larry, but in my fanfics I always end up shipping Zouis. xD (When I say I love Larry, I mean in theory. xD I am pretty new to the fandom and especially to fanfic.)

@charlie2cute
Oh okay I'll do it again lol and I know right!!

I tried reading After but stopped after I read all the rapey stuff and sexism it was just gross. And wow, you sound better than me and my first language is english!

I saw them in London on the final show of their european leg so I got to see a ot5 hug!!!!! And a lirry one!!! It's a shame you didn't get to see them though :(. Also, I'm gonna make it a bit about 5sos (One Direction were suffering under pressure so they introduced 5sos more and more until 5sos were basically on the same level of fame so it was okay. It's still quite unrealistic but not too bad.)

Yeah, I know. She's hardly my favourite character. I might make her actually a bit of a commitmentphobe, so it's not /always/ the boy. Kristen is my favourite character so far, so thank you!

I might make him a little nicer, though I'm not sure what he would say instead that could be nicer but hold the same meaning? Idk, I might just leave it but I'll try to tone it down.

Thank you, and sure! I actually normally write slash but I'm trying het for a bit. It sounds cool!! I'll be sure to check it out!!

@matchinghearts
Zack's still kind of broken though. But omg, DEREK <3, he's so hawt! xD

Yeah, it's important, even if you are writing fanfic. I just finished reading After (which I hate, btw) and I screamed my head off, from all the grammar/punctuation and spelling mistakes. And English is not even my first language. xD

Yeah, I missed theory concert in Edinburgh. I so wanted to go, but I had no one to come with me. My friend saw them at Glasgow BBC weekend (which I didn't find out about until 3 days later - like the whole concert, I had no idea it was happening xD). They were there for only 5 songs, but still, she got to see them, I am so jealous! xD But still it's a fanfic - you can do whatever you want. I don't think they are going a to get a two-year break either, but eh. xD

Kristen is a lot of fun. No offense, but Emma is kind of bland so far. I mean I'm sure she'll get more interesting as the story progresses, but so far, I don't really know what she's like, whereas I have a pretty good idea what kind of a person Kristen is. She's sarcastic, cynical, messy and loads of fun. xD

No, that's totally unlikely, I was thinking more he'd say it in a nicer way, Idk exactly what I meant. xD

That's ok. =) I like the story. Will you check out mine (once I publish it)? I can't tell you much about it, because of spoilers, but I can tell you that it's a supernatural AU, which will have both het and slash and a girl that can hear thoughts. xD

@charlie2cute
Oh okay, I'll fix them. They're just random girls off the internet - I prefer to do it that way so I just have an idea of what my character looks like.

Yeah, I know its a little cheesy but I'm trying not too make it too cheesy. Thanks - I pride myself on good grammar in fanfictions!

So far Kristen's my favourite character to write! Yeah it is set in 2015 (because they have the On The Road Again tour and they wouldn't just cancel it I don't think and I want to stick to real life a little)

Haha yeah, I don't think it's that unlikely, considering he's a pop star. And, I felt like it was a little too cheesy to I wanted to, uh, un-cheese it a little so that's why I said it. He's really just putting on a front and I don't think it's too bad that he said that considering he's also a 21 year old pop star, but I don't know, do you think it's worth changing?

I almost prefer Kristen/Niall to Emma/Harry which is weird considering I've written Emma/Harry before, my next chapter is probably going to be Kristen/Niall.

Thanks for checking out my story! :)

Kristen/Niall sounds like a good pairing to me. I actually like how he wanted her to like him, so he got a carrot cake, it was kind of cute.

Kristen/Niall sounds like a good pairing to me. I actually like how he wanted her to like him, so he got a carrot cake, it was kind of cute.

Harry using a concealer? SAY IT ISN'T SO! xD

Also, I don't think that saying something like "as long as they are hot" is very much IC for Niall, but eh, I can give it a pass. I don't really have any major complaints so far.

I like it so far. I like Kristen., she's sassy xd. Although, he could just be looking for a hook-up, you know.

By the way, how old are you? Just out if curiosity.

Oh, and one minor thing - last time I checked Harry was 20. Unless you are setting this in 2015.

Well, it's a little cheesy, but I've seen worse. You have good grammar, which is promising. I might like it.

Well, it's a little cheesy, but I've seen worse. You have good grammar, which is promising. I might like it.

Some of your pictures are broken. And are the pictures of the girls actresses or celebrities or just random pictures of the internet? Can you tell me who they are?