Who's that boy with the curly hair? - Comments

@Imagine
Well, for example you can put the events that happen in one place in one chapter , you could continue the second chapter and write the part where they meet and have a talk. By long , I don't mean too long cause that gets boring while reading , maybe two or three paragraphs more would be better. :)

@Zaynsonly
Yeah, I'm sorry for that, I'm not the best at making chapters long, maybe you could give me some ideas? :)

I'd like to read the rest of the story , I hope the chapters would be a little longer!