Fanfiction 101 - Comments

@Mrsawesome

Okay, knowing that English is your second language makes it a bit better, I promise I won't be quite so harsh on you :).
I do agree with you though, I have read waaaay worse in some other stories (or, rather, I have looked at way worse and immediately stopped reading :P).

@The Renegade
Sorry i am terrible at punctuation and english is my second lauguage but i try my Best and for me it is more what it says. And i Think my writing is ok i know there is mistakes but i try and i have read Way Worse. Im not perfect but it try. And i really just wanted to give some advice on what fanfics are lacking story vise. Also if you notice not on the other story nor here have i complained about the gramma of people nor Will i ever do. And it is because i know my Own is not that good. But it try my Best maybe i fail but it is readable...i Think.

If you are going to rant and give other people constructive criticism on their writing, I suggest that you invest in some appropriate capitalisation and better punctuation.
I have no problem with the fact that not everyone on fan fiction websites are professional authors with lots of experience, but if your plan is to give other people advice then it should seem like you know what you're talking about first.

Also, your first line of chapter 1 should read "... it can also be applied to fanfics"
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