Shallow Sky - Comments

@forever_young1D
Yeah...

@Hope_Was_Here
Hey. I might not know @Niallsgirl1 personally but I still want to protect her. You guys seem to have resolved ur argument but still don't criticize people who are suicidal. My older brother died of a heroin overdose a while ago because he was bullied for being too fat at his school, the thing is, he wasn't fat at all. He was pretty muscular, but he didn't have a six-pack so he was dubbed fat. So he became anorexic and had to go to therapy because he was so underweight and then he started drugs because it was relief to him. And now he's dead. I know that you are just trying to protect the other story and the authors but there are a lot of stories about girl bands and 1D and we haven't even written a single chapter so for all you know this could be completely different. I want to let you know that I am writing this completely calm so I'm not trying to get mad at you, but don't say that we are copying until you get to read some of the story. If after several chapters it's still the same concept and it seems like we are really copying then we will change it so we aren't. Okay?

@Hope_Was_Here
Thank you.

Okay it's okay. Just I'm tired and really sensitive. The maker of Combined knows me. And knows I feel like shit.

Oh hope that goes away... :/

@Niallsgirl1

Oh, well happy late birthday? I'm done arguing, sorry, I'm really stressed at the moment

@Hope_Was_Here
No I'm saying bitches on this site never named one.
And I do this isn't my ducking idea! :'(:'(:'(

I know I am lucky! My birthday was yesterday.


@Dream_Catcher

Yeah I found out about him in a interesting way

@Niallsgirl1

Haha, thanks! Jaden Wale is hot ♥

@Niallsgirl1

Oh, so you're calling me a bitch now? Says the girl who can't come up with her own ideas, and self pity's herself. People have it worse then you do, you're lucky you even have food, be grateful for what you have! Have you seen the news? Be glad your house isn't being bombed!

@Hope_Was_Here
Yeah cause that's so fucking easy.
And I meant like that's in common. Cause this was before that.

@Dream_Catcher
Cause we have fucking bitches on this site. -.-
And I love your profile pic

Why does this story have such bad ratings? It only has one chapter.

@Niallsgirl1

Well lose weight, then you wouldn't get bullied.

Ha! You just admitted you copied the story.

@Hope_Was_Here
Yeah cause I'm fuckin' 11. In older then that.
Yes I do. A lot. I'm treated like shit

Wanna know what's not right? How everyone bullies FAT kids. That's what I go through

Yes there are twists. Like 5SOS are in Combined and not in Shallow Sky. So that's one thing that we didn't have in common

@Niallsgirl1
Wow, damn. So you're what, 11 and you already want to end you life? That's not right, this world is messed up. Maybe if you would add a twist or something different to your story then I wouldn't put you out there like that.

@Hope_Was_Here
Yes I think I know what I've written. And when I couldn't update cause I was threatening suicide. :'(

Yeah another fucking great way to make Me feel guilty. We didn't copy One_Direction_Infection

Cause there's a lot of girl band stories. So you can't put us out there like that. -.-

@Niallsgirl1

You sure? There's like 5 chapters, and this one doesn't even have a proper first chapter, I just don't think its fair..

@Hope_Was_Here
Oh that's my best friends story. And this story has been on it before that one. But yeah she deleted meh. Cause of my depression.

But that story came online first though.

@Niallsgirl1

Combined, I think you and the Daphne girl were co-authors but quit or something :/

@Hope_Was_Here
What's the name of it?

Hi there, I'm not sure if you know,there's a story exactly like this one on this website. I'm just saying, but its like you guys are stealing someone else's story. Be original, it attracts more readers :)