My red coat - Comments

Please update this is sooo good

I have a big hint for everyone. All my fan fiction are the same story just a different one of the boys and sadly I think you should know one of the boy’s girlfriends dies at the end so there a hint I will tell anyone who can guess which girlfriend dies

Sorry I can't update to night I had a night class so just getting home and I have to go to school then work the night classes so I need sleep but I have all of next week of so a lot of updates coming!!! Yeah!!!

Please keep reading past chapter one 2 and3 I know they need proof reading but they other chapters are really good

please comment and tell me what you think

@strawberrylove thank you that means alot

i konw that not manyu people have read this and not many like this but if you read this please read to chapter 4 its well written unlike the other 3 chapters and i may not update until sunday beacuase i have a big chapter cooming up and i want it to be wroth your alls time please vote if you like it, if not please dont vote at all

its really good! i will look forward to reead it! proof read is your weakness other than that cant wait! :D

@ImpulsiveFreedom thanks my freind is going to proof read chapter 3 :)

Hey it's good so far! You should definitely keep going, I'm interested in where you'll take this! Just proof read your work more though. :D