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Love & The City - Comments

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@The Renegade
Thankyou very much ;)

Sopihaa Sopihaa
2/13/14

"When Sophie's dad arrived he asked us if we didn't want to go home, but we all negated." Negated isn't the right word here. Something like "but we all declined." would work better.

Your English is generally really good though, and I'm definitely enjoying the story =D

The Renegade The Renegade @ NiallHoranFanfiction.com
2/11/14

@lovelouismost
Great chapter!!! I love this fan-fic :)

Katie_Horan_01 Katie_Horan_01 @ NiallHoranFanfiction.com
1/28/14

@Katie_Horan_01
Here you go dear, early for you ;)

Sopihaa Sopihaa
1/28/14

Hey this is really good please do a update :) I just did ny first fanfic to

Katie_Horan_01 Katie_Horan_01 @ NiallHoranFanfiction.com
1/26/14